Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 25)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Kyaaa????????????

Whenever I get to reserve first, you post note instead of the chapter!!! 😲


oh, and bookmarking 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I m on first page wow
That's first for me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Eagerly waiting for an update
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waiting to see how khushi n arnav proceed frm here.. n soo soo wish we get a little more of the teasing naughty arnav n shocked shy khushi...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I have almost covered d first page
Can't wait for an update
Do update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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congratz on new thread dear. new thread means an update is on its way ;-) :-D
cant wait to see more of their married life ;-)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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:)
Congratulations on hitting silver with your threads!
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What can I say A, I am absolutely delighted to see this remarkable story get the kind of response and appreciation that it deserves. So congratulations once again for creating the kind of characters you have created, for the treatment you have given to the natural progress in the relationship between our lead couple and most of all for the quality of the CONTENT which is always the best part about your stories!

You take your time with Chapter 40, we will wait for as long as it takes! ;-)
I hope your impatient readers don't reprimand me for this! :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
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congrats for the new thread. Last chapter was amazing. I loved the way you handled the delicate scene of love making. It was most aesthetically done. I was amused by Arnav's conflict abt what to reply to her innocent questions when he was undressing her. Her reactions were absolutely normal because even if u know abt physical relationship, experiencing it for the first time is actually very embarrassing and bewildering. Feeling of contentment comes once it is over as it happened with Khuhsi.
I was glad that you showed the scene with buaji just to normalize the raging hormones of the readers😳. I mean once it starts it des not mean that buaji and his father would vanish into the thin air or something. They can continue at night😉 but they have to face the family during the day.
I know that mostly people are happy that atleast these two took a step towards their relationship but I am afraid. Becoming physically involved at this time can be dangerous as far as Arnav is concerned. He still does not trust Khuhsi completely and now this physical intimacy between them would actually break down his inhibitions. If earlier he was practising self control while talking abt her friend now he would be frank and openly jealous. I just hope he doesnot hurt Khuhsi but somewhere in my heart I know that he would before starting to trust her.

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