Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 25)

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laado123

@laado123

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#991

I am in love with how you explicate Arnav and Khushi's emotions...but I can't seem to understand Arnav.

Even after consummating their relationship, he can't seem to trust her as much as he should.

Khushi is giving her all to this relationship and I feel he should acknowledge her more or atleast try to sit down with her and talk about his insecurities- that should put them to rest!

Loved the update as usual...and please update the next chapter soon! I'm dying to find out if Khushi leaves for a month or not!

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kooltoad

@kooltoad

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#992

the story is taking unexpected turns... and now i just want to sit back and relax...

arnav really needs time to sit back and think and so does khushi...

it will help arnav feel the importance of saying out loud your heart's feelings and sharing them so as to make ur beloved develop faith in you and come close to ur heart and urself...being away from khushi has made him realize that she is important but now this one month will help him understand the importance of confessing ur love, which gives u the confidence and faith in ur relationship and a feeling of peace in ur heart... when two people love each other then even when they are apart physically they can never be apart emotionally cuz their hearts and mind are always together...

and also khushi can get busy in the marriage preparations and spend time with family and get rejuvenated and come back with a new zeal to rebuild their relationship... also knowing the person that she is she can definitely turn the situation in their favor by her charm and warmth...

One request - pls write all the important scenes in active speech and not passive... like i would have loved to read the khushi proposing scene in the active speech and not in the past tense...

so i hope when arnav proposes it will be in present continuous and also all important scenes also that will follow... this because when it is read as it is happening just this instance, they hv a better impact on readers and gets them more involved in the scene rather than the passive ones as its already done and there is no uncertainty and scope for some change, as the deed has already happened and can't be changed... but in a running scene reader is on the edge of their seats and is anxious about what will happen and hoping everything will be alright as the situation is still in hand and may be managed or damaged... so a greater impact and satisfaction for having read the important scene word by word while its taking place otherwise it seems like u missed the last episode of ur favorite show and now covering it up by watching a quick recap without the details...

i hope u get what i am trying to say and aren't offended... cuz i don't mean to at all...

thank you.

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Bavari

@Bavari

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#993

Amazing one again. What can I say about Arnav, him confessing his love is display of his vulnerablity but basks himself in her love confession. He thinks her friend ruined their beautiful afternoon but his insecurities ruined not only union but her heartfelt love confession. She can't be more open to him than this. Khushi's anger towards to him is justified. He can't bear her leaving him but he did the same without a thought for 3 days. He needs to realize her love before it's too late. The same thing happened to Rishab he took longer time to realize his love for her that caused him loosing her. Instead of blaming Rishab for his insecurities Arnav better take page or two from his book. Waiting for Khushi's decision to Arnav's threat.Thanks for the PM. Soory for the late comment. Thx

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crazyforu

@crazyforu

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#994

loved the update very much

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smilejans

@smilejans

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#995

Nice update. Arnav should realize and left his past and love her. Khushi doing her best.

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Destinyhope0305

@Destinyhope0305

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#996

I m Angry with arnav this time!

Why is he being so mean ! such a Stubborn Ass!
Trying to be an Alpha Man is fine but trying to be a Controlling Man is crap!
Atleast that poor soul confessed her Innocent love ..
And what did he do ! Instead of acknowledging her love , he is on the mission of judging her Love!

Rightly said that She was also a human who gets hurt by his unreasonable behavior.

He Misses her .Damn Misses would be an inappropriate word .damn he craves for her !
Hell i can very much decipher that from his Silence !

I m really happy A Lot that Khushi stood for herself ! And remained Firm on her decision and on her Confession too!

What is up with this Man !

sometimes wish He someday could be high on drinks and would confess his Feelings for Her ..but I still doubt on that though!

He clearly upset her by ruining her confession .. Poor Khushi ! One "I Love You too" would have changed her life for good ..
Could have taken her to the heights of enchantments!

He has sort of Ego Problems !
m really finding the reason behind it .
I mean apart from Trust issues, is he finding her Love Not Genuine .Or is it that he is afraid he is gonna lose her once he swallows the Love pill !

Hard to find ...I dont think so its the Trust issue or else he wouldnt have married her in the 1st place itself!

Anyways waiting for the Next Installment .
Coz I really am waiting for Arnav to transform

From this-

To this(during Confession .Ofcourse!)-

And Khushi

From this-

To This-

Poor soul Must be dreaming about what would be Arnav's reaction after confession !

And Mind You Then I want This(Again After Confession Ofcourse!) -!!!

P.S-
~I would again say .Grab an Agent and start writing Books ...You have got that charm ..

P.P.S-
~Cheers for the PM

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Anjali

@AnjuRish

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#997

srry for not commenting sweetie ...met with a minor accident cant really type will surely comment from next time pls dont take me off

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AASHI

@aashi_taichi

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#998

arnavji z been unreasonable...bechari khushi nevertheless she should be adamant dis tym in her decision of not falling for hisstereo theory...

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apoorva12sharma

@apoorva12sharma

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#999

well said
if this is not what peoplee call love then what is it?
i mean clearly Arnav loves her..he is khushi-strucked. his insecurities and child hood trauma runs deep within his veins.
i feel sad for Arnav and pity for Khushi
bechari..

when khushi see's Arnav-
ese na mujhe tum dekho
seene se laga lunga

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pallavi_92

@pallavi_92

Explorer

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#1000

I am unable to wait. Please update soon.

The episode of going to mumbai has been left at an engrossing point.

I am sure khushi will not leave her husband.

I am not happy with the only hug they shared. Married couples after fighting to make up in better ways and there physical proximity will help them realise their completeness with only each other. It will give rest to their insecurities too.

Khushi was brilliant in update. I loved the grandchildren part too.

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