SANDHIR SS:Love Keeps US Together chapter 11 updated COMPLETED!!! - Page 17

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Gunseerat

Realllyyy beautifulll pls continue it as u like luved this parttt awww radsss nd mum cutreer


thank you di...means a lot...
am glad u loved it...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: federized2210

HHearika!
I loved the update as usual!!
Could feel randhir's pain...u depicted it beautifully!! His pleadings were heart wrenching!
The hospital scene was so touching yet subtle!!! Awesome piece of work!!
As for continuing, that's Upto u...as the author if u think that this plot has scope for exploring more, then maybe u shouldn't end it!
I would personally love to read more!!!
Love u!
Update soonish...
Anu


hey anu di..thank u so much...
am glad u liked it...and found it awesome...
will try to continue di...
thanks for commenting and reading...
love u too...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shalini_shakti

Awesome update harika...
Omg..!! It was so damn emotional...
And those lines Randhir spoke about women.. They were just phenomenal...
Plz don't end this so soon...
I want you to write more dear...
And eagerly waiting for next part...
Love
Shalini..:):)


hey shalu...am glad u liked it yar...
will try continue ...
and emotional aww thank u ...
yeah !! i love those lines tooo
thanks for reading and commenting...
love u too...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Sunshine_Ami

wow this post was dedicate to all the girls 🤗 I loved it so so so much... You did an amazing job Harika... 👏 thank you so much for making me a part of this FF... 😛


hey di...thank u so much..means a lot...
hehe..di am glad u loved it...and making u this part of this ff is my pleasure...
thanks for reading and commenting...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: gujjupari

Awesome stuff lady!

Randhir mending his relationship with his mother!
His emotional breakdown!
His insight into female infanticide! Brilliant! Loved the social message there 🤗


hey thank u so much...
am glad u loved it...
thanks for reading and commenting...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: DEVU46

Hey sweetie...

Again a nice update!! U r a very brilliant writer!!!
Ur way of writing was really awesome!!
Nd randhir ,his words r really very Emontional!!
Plz don't end it soon!!
Thanks 4 d pm!!
Waiting 4 d next update!


hey cutie...thank u so much dear...
it means a lot dear...
will try to continue...
thanks for reading and commenting...
love,harika...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: azina

its amazing continue upload next part soon


thank u 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: TashaForever

Unresed on Page 20 :)

For Chapter 5 my comment is here :
Wow!!! Thank you harika. This update was really very touching.
Randhir contacting his mom and calling her to the hospital.
Requesting his mom to bring Sanyu back cause he loves her...
And THEN the part of aborting..
In my school I have prepared various skits/dramas to bring out this topic u know? In SST once, we had a project to prepare an advertisement in groups and act it out.
While other groups chose to promote soaps and such stuff and created slogans, me and my team brought out the problems girls face.
Dahej ke liye burning a wife, not allowing a girl to study, harassing a girl walking alone, aborting a girl child, burying or killing a born girl child...god. The crimes are endless.
Harika ur last paragraph literally had me in tears.
Hats off to the Randhir u ve portrayed..his speech bout Mother, wife, sister,girlfriend..TOUCHING!
Please update soon dear xD
Love,
Tanya


hey tanzz...
thank u so much dear...means a lot..
u did skit/drmas regarding the prob faced by girls...really hats off dear..the society has to know abt the importance of girls and what they can do...what problems they r facing...awesome dear..proud of u...
hey don't cry dear...i also love those lines...
thanks for reading and commenting dear..
love u to...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: iraa_parsh

Harika my dahling!!!!
Beautifully described Randhir's emotions. It was really touching. I loved it.
You write write well!!!
So keep writing en keep posting. :)
Love ya
Samaira


hey di...thank u so much...
means a lot di...
am glad u loved it...
thanks for reading and commenting...
love u too...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Rekha85

Harika!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!The update was really touching!!!!!!!!

Randhir reconciled with her mother!
The way Randhir told about girls...wow...I am so happy that u dedicated it to us!!!!!
Keep writing dear!!!!!!!
Ur updates are so goood!!!!!!!!!
With Love
Rekha!


hey di...thank u so much for commenting...
u took time to comment am over whelmed dii...thank u so much...
am glad u found it touching...
thanks for reading and commenting di...means a lot..
love u too...

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