SANDHIR SS:Love Keeps US Together chapter 11 updated COMPLETED!!! - Page 18

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Asapom thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
Randhir and that man's scene was awesome
Continue soon
..Mellifluous.. thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Asapom

Awesome update

Randhir and that man's scene was awesome
Continue soon


thank u dear...
thanks for commenting and reading...
..Mellifluous.. thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
I know am late...and am sorry for that..here is the next part...check it out...
A/N:I didn't proof read..so spare me...



CHAPTER 6

Randhir after bashing that man goes and sit somewhere ...where he can find peace...He just admired the beauty of nature...It is beaautiful..twinkling with the stars and the moon in the middle is really so pleasant to watch...He is thinking why sorrows should be there...why??? everytime being happy is not a crime right...then why?? these cries ,unhappiness,sorrows...
Then suddenlly rain started...he is drenched ...he thought about rain...Sanyukta likes rain na...if she is here...she will be playing in the rain..by dragging all of her friends and him...then he remembered her words...once he asked the same question to her ...why everyone have sorrows and bad moments in their life..that time she said...everyone want rainbow right...he nodded yes...but the raibow only comes when the rain will fall ...Now he understood the meaning...If you want good...then face the bad first ...It gave him some confidence...that sanyukta will be alive...He went inside...


He saw her parents and her brother came...without knowing his blood started to boil...his anger reached the peak..because of her brother and father ...she is that condition...the doctor came out and randhi rushed to the doctor and asked...what happened to her?? is she okay?? the doctor said she drank XYZ poison...so she vomited blood..we took the poison out but as some of the poison is dissolved in blood..we gave her medicines..but she is not responding to it...I think so she doesn't want to live...Now everything is in god's hands..now please excuse me..and yeah !!! u can see her..but one by one...okay...with that doctor went from there...Randhir was shocked...trembling with fear...what if sanyu dies???he saw her father who is going to the room...and he shouted...don't you dare uncle...Mr.Agarwal...turned to see him and u lost the right...because of you and your son she is dying?? she is in her life-death situation...you are just unbelievable and disgusting...you know what her dream is...to work in your company but..you both killed that dream and you killed her too...from childhood she had only one dream to work in her father's company and take her papa company to heights...but see what you did...Uncle don't think a girl is only for marriage I also used to think like that but your daughter ...had changed my thinking...you know she is best as a friend,enemy,student,daughter in everything ...but u were not able to be the best father in my thoughts..but in sanyukta's you are best father..and he is the best brother and she is the best mom...she didn't think bad of you...anytime though u didn't give her oppurtunity to prove herself..what she is capable of...u lost the most valuable diamond,pearl...from your life...Her father and brother knew that he was right...they are wrong...they killed her and her dreams too...and Mr.Agarwal asked randhir to give him one chance...he will be the best father...Randhir could see the guilt n his eyes so he just nodded his head..and her father pushed the door but...

WAIT!!!!Mrs.Agarwal shouted...He turned to face her...He forgave you not me...u r not her father...I hate you...Because of u my daughter is in this condition...Just because of you both...you both killed her...killed my daughter..she is crying so badly..Randhir came forward ..Aunty ,calm down...everything will be okay..sanyukta will be fine...Trust me ..aunty she will be fine..he is also crying...aunty hugged him and cried her heart out...randhir consoled her...and aunty said u go inside beta...but aunty me...I trust you..she cupped one of his cheek...He just nodded hs head...he entered the room and There is his sanyu..with all wires...and he can't see her like this...he moved forward ...and sat beside sanyu...and started to talk with her...

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Phew ..am done with this part...please leave ur valuable feedback...

Love,Harika...
Don't be in Angry mood because ...anger is feeling which makes mouth work faster than your brain...
Edited by ..Mellifluous.. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Res --------------
*Unres*
Harikaaa!!!!
First of all thank u for not ending the fic!
Second, this update was dhaasu as usual!!!
I really really love the way u write!!!
It's like every scene is unfolding right before my eyes!
Randhir in rain...God!!! I'm getting the image of a drenched Randhir...*Shit!!!!!*
And he remembers Sanyu's words! hayeee!!!!😳
Sis u outdid urself in that scene!!
So waiting for the next part!!
love,
#Anu
PS: Finally I get to comment first on a very darling sister's work!!!!😃
Edited by federized2210 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow just awesome update dear
the outburst of randhir on her father and brother is just awesome one

i think now both will understand the value of sanyu


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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update...
Harika tu ne mujhe rula diya Yaar...
I was literally crying...
What all u wrote in this chapter meant a lot of meanings and got so much to learn from life...
Simply superb...
You are an expert in describing nature dear... Rainbow rain... Sorrow happiness n all... Brilliantly written...
Update next part ASAP...!!!
Eagerly waiting...
Lots of love,
Shalini..:D
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsme yar i loved it u are awsme yar pls post nxt part soon na
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Posted: 11 years ago

Harika!!!!!!!!!!

Pagali!!!!!!!!
I just loved the update!!!!!!Keep writing!
With love Rekha!
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Posted: 11 years ago
ITNA CHHOTA UPDATE
AGLI BAAR BADA UPDATE
CHHOTA HAI PAR IT IS VERY GOOD ONE

UPDATE SOOON
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Posted: 11 years ago
it was an ossum updt!!
Do updt soon
Love,
Shefali

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