SANDHIR SS:Love Keeps US Together chapter 11 updated COMPLETED!!!

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hey writing a ss for the first time...so bare with me :P :)

INDEX

CHAPTER 1:PAGE 6
CHAPTER 2:PAGE 10
CHAPTER 3:PAGE 13
CHAPTER 4:PAGE 16
CHAPTER 5:PAGE 20
CHAPTER 6:PAGE 25
CHAPTER 7:PAGE 31
CHAPTER 8:PAGE 36
CHAPTER 9:PAGE 43
CHAPTER10:PAGE 49
CHAPTER 11:PAGE 55
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Shalini:We rock together as Niha and ur mah cutest and sweetest sister...and in a short time we became friends no best friends and u are always there with me when i need u and ur writing are awesome and keep writing babes and waiting for ur ff and love ya :)

Ashka:My first best friend on forum one day i scrapped her we kept chatting till night and she became my cute si bestie...u know what i like the way u talk and u write so good ...love you babes..and keep smiling always ...

Priya Di:mere GURUJI...namasthe ...:P the way u write is awesome and the vocabulary u use is incredible and amazing and meri cute si di jisme sense humour ki kami nahin and ur writing skills and ff or os or ss jo bhi main fan hu tumhara and u are best di...and haa maine kaha agar tum if u teach me ENGLISH vocabulary of yours i will be the best student :P love ya di :) keep smiling and keep rocking...

Iptisha:Dimples ..short span main best friends ban gayi...woh bahot sweet hai aur cute bhi ...and haa dimples take rest okay...and her writings are just awesome ...always keep smiling...love ya:) :D keep rocking... tumhari deani:) :P

Sonia di : My first forum friend who is cute and sweet and unka writings hi mujhe inspire kare and u write so well di fan hoon aapka... writing jo bhi hai romance,horror kuch bhi u are damn good and always keep smiling di ...:) :D

Rekha di:She is wonderful mera saath hamesha rahi ...she motivated me alot...i think it is time for u to write di and thank you for being with me and always keep smiling and take care love ya :) :D

Anu di:The way u write is awesome u always know how to keep readers to get hooked to ur story :P love ur writings and u take in a smooth way yet keep suspense in your story and u posy so fast and became my best friend ...love ya di :) :D

Arushi di:the way i write is awesome and the phrases u use which are created by u were really damn awesome ...love ur ff and u too keep smiling always:) :D

Tanya:main tumko bhul gayi my mistake u are rockstar babes u are so young and mark my words u hav a long way to go and u are goin to become awesome one and the way u write is really cool and splendid keep writng and rocking and don't forget to smile...:) :D love ya
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SANDHIR SS:Love Keeps US Together

A girl of dreams who is beautiful .has brown eyes and a long silky hair and who has beauty with brains and who is strong has become the most weakest person and whose dreams are shattered and who felt like she is dejected and now she is city of dreams MUMBAI but her dreams are shattered and completely broken like her ...and her name is SANYUKTA...

Sanyukta sitting near a window and writing something a Diary with whom she shares her all secrets after that incident after she came from there and in this diary she is writing about someone who stole her heart when she came here...and about her friends and about vardhan sir who was/is like a brother to her...after writing it she was enjoying the sunset as a fiery red orb of light slowly sank beneath the horizon and threads of light lingered in the sky,mingling with the rolling clouds,dyeing the heavens first orange,then red,then dark blue, until all that was left of the sunset was a chalky mauve, and then that melted away in turn as stygian darkness took over the sky. Sequin-silver stars like the glowing embers of a dying fire winked down at me, illuminating the atramentous curtain of sky, and then suddenly the clouds parted, and she found herself looking at a lustrous, argent disc casting brilliant rays of moonlight onto the dark grounds...
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F.I.T.E campus

Everyone over there is worried for sanyukta it has been two week since she is missing everyone got their letters which she left for them and including randhir and vardhan ...they all have tears in their eyes when they read their letters and randhir was shattered and he don't know how to ding his girl yes,randhir is in love with sanyukta and with her eyes and the way she smile and the way she is and their fights and lips ... and by the time he perceive she went away leaving a note to him ...

Everyone was sitting in the canteen thinkong about sanyukta where she would be and how is she?

Parth :sanyukta kaha ho tum? ...hum sab pareshan hai he was talking...

Kastuki: arey parth woh theek hi ho gi...

All turned towards kastuki and they all were surprised by the way she talked she was/is her best friend and she is talking like this without any bother or any thing ...she saw that everyone is looking at her and then she realized what she did...

Jignesh:kastuki tumne aisa kyun kaha ??

Kastuki:woh.,..woh..Jignesh bas ese hi mujhe laga ki woh theek hi hogi...

Parth:tum humse kuch chupa rahi ho...

Kastuki:kuch nahin parth main kyun chupaungi...

Randhir:kastuki..spill it out ...agar mujhe zara se bhi shak huwa ki tumhe sanyukta ke baare main pata hai toh main tumhe nahin chodungi..he said with a very serius tone ...

Kastuki:haan maine sanyu se baat ki ek baar par usne mujhe bataya nahin ki woh kaha hai ...aur usne mujhe letter ke saath ek clue di jo main samaj nahin payi aur mujhe ye bhi samaj main nahin aayi woh ..kis keliye chodi woh clue...

Randhir's happiness was no bounds he was really happy and he has tears in his eyes...and he asked kastuki where is the chit...

Kastuki:mere room main hai...

Randhir told her to bring the clue and was thinking what happened two weeks ago ...how she was shattered...
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phew !!! am done i don't know whether it is good or bad...say whether i should continue or not and please drop a comment even it is word and like the ss if u like it :) :D

love,harika...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Take a bow, Harika. You used such an extensive vocabulary here, that I was impressed. Really, hats off :D
You do write so well! See, I told you, now jaldi se write more. Ek cliffhanger pe chhoda hai humko. Meanie xD
*Hugs*
Edited by TheDreamyKid - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey Harika...!!!
awesomee dear...!!!👏
I just loved it... nice start...❤️
u have no choice...you have to continue...😆
plz update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awsme yar... i thnk it is awsme so pls continue soon and ha pls thum daily upload karo na parts... pls... thnks for pm me...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Harika...Osum xD
''until all that was left of the sunset was a chalky mauve, and then that melted away in turn as stygian darkness took over the sky''
Absolutely love this line. The way described the entire sunset and the night stars and all...SUper duper che!
And well ur story seems very intriguing...letters..clue..WOW!
COntinue soon!
Just proofread once..baaki sab perfect xD
Update karna jaldi!
Love,
Tanz
Edited by TashaForever - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ny update 😊
Plz cont.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow ...
lovely story ...

well done :)

cont plzzz
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello di!!!😊
It's a nice ss so plz continue it !!!😉
Thanks 4 pm!!!!😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing continue and upload next part soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Omg..!!!
Mein toh I don't have words to describe my dear sissy...
For the first time I felt so overwhelmed...
We once scraped.. And frm thn on we were and r in touch everyday...
U became one of my best forum friend.. Nt just a friend but u r Lyk my cute little sis...
Love u so so much ra...
Yaa I knw NiHa will rock..!!! Feeling proud to take this name ri8nw..:D
Coming to d update...
Hmm finally u did it sis..!!!😊
Awesome.. Tune toh sach mein forum ko hilla diya...
Beautifully described...!!!👏
Good job sis..!!!
Nw jaldi se update Karo...!!!
I'm waiting...!!!:):)
Lots of love... ❤️
Shalini..!!:):):)
Edited by shalini_shakti - 11 years ago

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