ArHi TS: Salve.(Last Part-pg.5)~Completed~

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_disha_

@_disha_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: Anupama.
Wow!!
Such an awesome story.
My heart stopped beating for those few moments in part two and I was like this 🤢
Keep writing! 👍🏼
You Rock \m/ ⭐️

Omg ..like this is the first time your have read her ???😲

Girl your missing out on a lot of stuff.. please go raid her index like right now !!!

😆

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vgedin

@vgedin

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: Anupama.
Wow!!
Such an awesome story.
My heart stopped beating for those few moments in part two and I was like this 🤢
Keep writing! 👍🏼
You Rock \m/ ⭐️

I should learn from you - I will never complain about lack of comments on my thread after this 😆

Jai ho PamPam ki!

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Chandana

@chandana.s

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#63

Fabulous..

I know Arnav wanted to protect her but after all the things happened it's silly of him to think that she wil be fine & safe without him..

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mayurisb80

@mayurisb80

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#64

That was wonderful piece well written ...there is no way Kushi would accept that...he cannot get rid of her or try and protect her from him...she is his and shall remain so...

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divya_divs

@divya_divs

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#65

lovely TS😛 since u left it 2 us about the ending, we assume that its a happy ending😊 i loved ur writing😊

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Japonica

@Japonica

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#66

Rezwa ko unrezwa kiya.

idhar-- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/102972038

😃

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rk2127

@rk2127

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#67

It was a nice story about love and hope.

A parched from love soul, who also kept the love at bay knowing he is not string enough to stand the tide. Whereas another soul ready shower all the love she has. Giving in they found peace, love and home in each other.

She is left alone but hope in her love is still there, where as he left her alone to protect her from the troubles following him.

Truly beautiful.

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stg1

@stg1

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#68

wow, so beautiful and deep! i really want to know what happened next and if they got their happy ending, in my mind they did 😛

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Mina-18

@Mina-18

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#69

Hey,
Anupama words fail me this time to praise your work. Its amazing the way you wrote this piece...it simply shows your caliber. And then you have involved us too in this story by keeping it open-ended. Everyone who read this will have their own conclusions.

I had read somewhere
"Sometimes it seems like the more you care, the more you have to lose".
This saying somehow summaries the agony of both Arnav n Khushi of your story.

I had previously read your "brewing up". But if I may be allowed to say it, this particular piece of your is way amazing and absolutely brilliant.

God bless!