ArHi TS: Salve.(Last Part-pg.5)~Completed~

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aashi12

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Updated my comment on Pg-6.

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jg12

@jg12

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Beautiful update but really sad that Arnav left...

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samarablog

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

loved this story of yours..

when she had that gun on her head, not even once i thought that it will be empty..so many scenarios ran in myy mind, but this!

wow!

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Meera

@fabmegan25

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Loved it!

Wished u gave us one more part, u know a continuation whether Arnav comes back to Khushi or if she has already on?

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mpuhan

@mpuhan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

so heartbreaking yet utterly fantastic.

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bewakoofLadki

@bewakoofLadki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

no no u cant end it here
pls cont sooon
awsome story
loved it

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shruti

@shruti46

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

i m satisfied with the ending...

you left with slight hope,even i wont think other option like khushi,...

v shud remain B+..

though i wont mind another part :)

happy holi to you

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Ananya

@Anarocksick

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

Okay. Wow. It's 3:40 am and here I am...reading and comment for your story. And it was thrilling... to say the least. I didn't know what to expect from this story, it was mysterious at first...and it it kept getting more so as it progressed.
That scene where she pulls the gun to her forehead had my heartbeat stop for a moment...I really didn't know what was coming! I really didn't expect her to pull the trigger...but she did. It was terrifying. Has to be my first heart-in-my-mouth experience while reading an arhi-fanfic. And that's something to say man...

You gave an open ending. I like open endings. While I'm not sure of the possibilities, I wish they meet somewhere...in the future.

You did a great job, Anu. I have always loved your stories...they are just simple and grounded and leaves a warm feeling (yeah, even this one with guns and blood)! I wish you keep writing. And Happy (belated) birthdayy to the writer Anupama :P

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Anupama

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Posted: 11 years ago

#49

^Even m awake reading yours 😆

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Anu567

@Anu567

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Posted: 11 years ago

#50

A beautiful story...please continue and give it a happy ending...you write with so much emotion, it makes the reader actually visualize Arnav and Khushi in that bleak setting...so please do see if you can write another part and wrap it up with some hope?!

Anupama