ArHi TS: Salve.(Last Part-pg.5)~Completed~

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aashi12

@aashi12

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Un-resed my comment on Pg-1. :)

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

First of all, meri toffee kahaan hai?

Jaldi do!

Congratulations again Anu, on completing one year as a writer on IF.

Love reading all your Ainwayi work!

Brewing Up will always be one of the best stories I ever read.

Don't understand why you underestimate yourself.

This is a totally different genre from you.

A juvenile delinquent Arnav who goes on to be an encounter specialist.

I do hope he finds the people who tried to frame him.

And of course Khushi will not leave him and go.

Will she?

Waiting to read the next part.

And thankyou so much for the love and care.

Love you! 🤗

Edited by 1chilly - 11 years ago

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msmarple

@msmarple

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Very interesting story. Congratulations on completing a year as a writer here.👏

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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Different from your usual work but amazing as always.

What a start.

Loved this dark grey world which you created.

Interesting characters.

What an unusual relationship they share.

Looking forward to read more of this.

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

a year huh thats cool
hmm this sure was intense
oh who is he fooling but himself
so her dad died and she has no one but him
and now he is injured too
well that was close call
but of course she wont leave him
how can she right

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Japonica

@Japonica

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Happy wiriting birthday- I'm so glad the writer in you took birth!😃 Wishing you many, many more happy writing years!

What a start to this new TS- a true dark noir TS, which is not your usual genre. There is a depth and heaviness to this one, quite unlike all your other work.

You managed to create and capture, as always, the atmosphere intrigue, danger, darkness and death that seems to be Arnav's world brilliantly. And into this world comes Khushi, the only creature of light. Will she succeed in getting him out of his world or will his drag her in?

Edited by Japonica - 11 years ago