Virman - LoVeRs.. or RiVaLs.. last part 25 updated 18-05-2015 - Page 12

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: manuthi

nice update... vini having the same habit of virat... vini and mannan are virman childs... wt happened to manvi.. waiting update fast



thanks dear...
😊 😊

zipped up my lips... 😛 😉

ill update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: komalvirman

Sorry for late reply

Virat was helping kids its was really wow

And he remember its past and his mannu

And their cute fight was nyz

Poor mannu cant learn to kick the ball

Nice update continue soon

Plz pm me



Dont be sorry dear..
😊 😊

thanks dear...
I will..

Ill inform u about update either by pm or a scrap... Coz there is some problem with my acount im nt able to send pm many a times..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 12
Mr g comes with the dublicate key
On opening the door to manvi rum
Virat was shocked to see the scene infront of him...
Manvi lying unconcios on floor n blood ozing out from her head and arm..
because of the broken vase kept on side table...

Virat rushed towards manvi takhing her head into his hands...

:Manu..manu.. Get up plz open ur eyes..

Mr g : sir ill call ambulance..

Virat picked manvi up in his arms n rused downstairs towards the respetion..

Hospital..
Doc : she fainded coz of high bp.. I cannt give the true picture of her health untill she gets concious... Nxt 10 hrs are realy criticall v she doesnt get concious it could be highly dangerous..
V : and her wounds doc..??
Doc : cut in her arm was dep i had to give stiches.. N about her head will be clear after the reports...
V : thank u doc can i meet her..
Doc : ofcorce u can...
V : ok doc thanku..

Scene shifts to manvi's ward...
Virat went near manvi n sat on a stool kept aside..he took her hand in his..
: plz get up manu.. I cant see u like this..
N a tear came out of his eye..
Drifted off to sleep on stool holding her hand...

5 am in the morning..
Manvi woke up with a pain in her head.. She tried to get up bt was nt able due to heavy dose of medicine..
Her movents made virat get up..
V : thank god ur are fine.. N hugged her..
Manvi was still confused.. N tried to come out of hug... On realizing her uncomfort virat came out of hug n expained her war all had happen..
V : ill call the doc..
Virat was about to leave..
M : thank u..

Mr g enters : how are u maam... Sorry to say bt the seminar has been cancled.. After u left the hotle a major fire took place... Sould i prepone ur tickets or book some other hotle if u wish to stay..

V &m : prepone tickets..
Doc enters
Doc : i cant permit for a long jurney unitill im sure about ur.. Nurce take patent for the test

V : doc is every thing ok.
Doc : i she had extraoridinary high bp.. I need to certain then only then ill be able to tell u..

V : actually doc she is afraid of darkness may be thats y..
Doc : yes this could be the reason...

Mr g : sir i have got ur luggae..sir ur tickets..??
V : dont book the tickets yet.. Ill stay..
Mr g : should i bk some rum for u..
V : no thats alrite... Plz send our luggae manvi 's rum.. Ill stay here only..

Mr g: sure sir.. If u need any help plz let me know..
V : thank u mr george...

Nurce comes with manvi...
Nurse : sir plz get these medicine..

Virat comes back to the rum witjmh the medicines..
Nurce leaves... Now manvi n virat wwre alone in rum..
M : virat...
No response...
M : virat ( a bit louder )
V : huh
M : u ok..??
V : ya im fine..
M : u know u cant lie to me.. Now will u tell..
V moved towards manvi n held her hand.. : i got scared sweing u in that situation..
M : virat im fine look...
Virat without saying a word hugged her...

After a while they realised the situation..
Cuming out of hug..
V : im soorryy... im going to reception to complete certain formalities... Take rest.. Do u need somthing...
M just nodded in response...

V came out rum n he reached the staircase..
V : thank u god manvi is alrite.. I was soo scared on seeing her unconcioud.. (N cried his heart out )
I love u manvi.. as muvh i try to hate u.. Im not able to... I cant live without u manu.. Plz god manvi's test should be clean..
Plz god plz...

After some time.. He composed himself n went to manvi's rum..


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Posted: 11 years ago
NOTE

Pms later for this part...

Guys my 2nd yr final exams are starting from april 2 nt even a wk left...
I would not be able to give long and regular updates for a month..
Bt ill try n give updates as n when ill get time...
Plz bear with me...

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Posted: 11 years ago
NYC UPDATE. ALL THE BEST 4 UR EXAMS.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update..
And all the best for your exames..
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update... all the best for ur exams...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update continue soon
Both care for each other wow
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Posted: 11 years ago
All the best for ur exam
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely update

Felt bad for virat
All d best for ur exams

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