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Autumn_Hue

@Autumn_Hue

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Shilpa_SwaRon
Os by cash😲😲
Ur such a jerk gal u dint even tell me about dis😔
Yeh os pe mein comment hee Nahi karungi😔

Haila bataya toh tha be tujhe thode din pehle ke am gonna write an OS..😭.
Aisa toh mat kar pleash pleash twinu ke Os pe comment nahi karegi tu??😔.

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Autumn_Hue

@Autumn_Hue

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: SanskritiS
Beautiful OS
Loved the sweet scenes of Swaron

Thanx Kri..🤗.

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Autumn_Hue

@Autumn_Hue

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Tan.vish.K
RES

Love you for this Kashmi🤗

I'm confused with my own reactions😛
This OS was 'PERFECT'!!!
A blend of all Happy-wale emotions
Just Loved it to the core❤️
I was counting the number of time I went 'awww' or I myself blushed while reading but I actually lost the count as I was completely into it😳
I can't actually pin-point that I liked this more or that more because the whole of it was so freaking Awesome👏
Oh Dear you got me for these few minutes
I so wish something like this would have happened in the show
Some light-hearted romance would be a treat to watch... But.. But.. But
You made my day Kash!
And I so so so so so Love you for writing something Like This after such a long time🤗
Please write more often as its always is a treat to read your stories
Thanks alot for this🤗

Holy mother of god tannu thank you so so so so so much for such a wonderful comment.. Your comment really made my day.. Am so so so so so happy that you liked it so very much yaa..😆. Love you too mhan..🤗.

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-TanHaVruShan-

@-TanHaVruShan-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: sweet16cash
Haila bataya toh tha be tujhe thode din pehle ke am gonna write an OS..😭.
Aisa toh mat kar pleash pleash twinu ke Os pe comment nahi karegi tu??😔.

Woh kitni old Baat hai tune bataya bhi Nahi ki u finished writing..
Hmmm sochungi to comment or not after reading.. 😛

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Autumn_Hue

@Autumn_Hue

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Shilpa_SwaRon

Woh kitni old Baat hai tune bataya bhi Nahi ki u finished writing..
Hmmm sochungi to comment or not after reading.. 😛

Oye ye nainsaafi tu karegi nahi mere saath behna.. Padhne ke baad aisa ho hi nahi ke tu mere Os pe comment nahi karegi on my Os tu karegi pata hai mujhe..😃.

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VAISHNAVI MURALI

@-vaishnavimural

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

loved d os..

awesome os..

swayam covering sharon coz of chillness n his stammering answer to it was cute n adorable..

swayam got sharon's lie wen she said she s just like that coming not coz she s worried was cute..

romantic songs n close proximity was nice.. sharon red n swayam admiring her blush was cutely n beautifully penned..

romance was awesome.. kiss scene was blissful n magical..

loved d way both teased each other n slept on each others embrace was nice..

entirely a beautiful os..

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Divya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

kash.. 🤗

let me read... 😳

first thing tune OS likha... 😲 kabh..kyu..kaise?? 😛 😆

coming back to ur OS..

kash dis was superb..i just loved it..

it was cute..romantic..yet naughty... 😳

i was literally blushing while reading it... 😳

from d beginning till its end beautifully penned down...

just loved every bit of it...

i ws not expecting swayam to actually kiss her..aww it was romantic.. 😳 and bechari sharon disappoint hogayi for not kissing her lips...dt was cute.. 😆

and loved d teasing part too.. 😳

kash sach mai ayesa hota...

nywaz thank u so much for writing such awesome os...love u.. 🤗

finally our nautanki is back in action.. 😆 waiting to read more from u now... 😉

Edited by sweetdivya - 11 years ago

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Autumn_Hue

@Autumn_Hue

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: vaishu88
loved d os..
awesome os..

swayam covering sharon coz of chillness n his stammering answer to it was cute n adorable..

swayam got sharon's lie wen she said she s just like that coming not coz she s worried was cute..

romantic songs n close proximity was nice.. sharon red n swayam admiring her blush was cutely n beautifully penned..

romance was awesome.. kiss scene was blissful n magical..

loved d way both teased each other n slept on each others embrace was nice..

entirely a beautiful os..

Thank you so much for liking the Os dear..😊.

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Autumn_Hue

@Autumn_Hue

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: khushnya_swaron
sweet...😊

Thank you..😊.

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rosy kohli

@rosyrkohli

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Posted: 11 years ago

#20

res

unres

kash kamal kar ditta

i m happily shocked tat you came up wit sumthing beautiful as tis

i missed ur work so much ki meih kya bolu

making ur subject relatable wit ur readers

especially focusing on the love that goes in between them

a portion whr you showed swaron's internal conflict beneath the surface

was beautifully penned both embarassed n a awkward silence in b/w them

thn a small much needed swaronish moment

whr swayam goes near sharon was epic

you gave a perfect reflection of swayam n sharon's thoughts

tis is the beauty of you as a writer all ur pieces

have a deep emotional source, even when the story is lighthearted.

he broke my trail of thoughts by pressing a kiss on my forehead and trailing down he caressed my nose & cheeks only leaving my lips, disappointment purged in my heart when I felt him withdraw & move away, his hands yet on my face.

"You don't need to say sorry to voice out your feelings Sharon, don't do it, not to me."

these lines are just heart-touching yaar

meih kya bolu i m speechless 😃

all in all a very emotionally heart-touching os 😳

Edited by rosyrkohli - 11 years ago