Swaron Os on current track - Page 4

Originally posted by: sweet16cash

Divz aaj mujhse zyada achhe mood main tu lag rahi hai btw what's the secret kya hua aisa aaj??😆.
Btw tera tannu style kashmi ko pasand aaya bahut

dhansu tha..😛 ❤️.

Originally posted by: sweet16cash

Type toh tujhe hi karna padega my dearest behna by default koi aur option nahi warna Jeene nahi dungi..*Rajni ishtlye*..😉 😛. Pleash mere liye type kar le firse pleash pleash pleash mar rahi hoon tera view jaane ke liye sach bolu toh..

😔 kal karu new comment pls

Originally posted by: sweetdivya

jabhi tujse bath karti hu..mood automatically ache ho jata jai..😉and other reason could be..tannu bdasy iv's and tera OS..😳😆

Ohhhoo kya baat at your service ma'am tu khush toh main khush..😃 😳. IV toh maine dekhe nahi re and Os padhke fir se khush ho gayi khud hi waapis se mental hoon na thodi..😆. Waah mera Os ne khush kar ditta toh ruk jaa thode din firse likhungi..😉.

Originally posted by: Shilpa_SwaRon

😔 kal karu new comment pls

Okay..😔 😔 😔.
But kal subah uthke first thing my comment fir baaki sab kaam..😛.

Originally posted by: sweet16cash

Ohhhoo kya baat at your service ma'am tu khush toh main khush..😃 😳. IV toh maine dekhe nahi re and Os padhke fir se khush ho gayi khud hi waapis se mental hoon na thodi..😆. Waah mera Os ne khush kar ditta toh ruk jaa thode din firse likhungi..😉.

really loved it...
swaron moments were soo cute...
white lie is too good..
loved d caring swaron.

Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj

really loved it...
swaron moments were soo cute...
white lie is too good..
loved d caring swaron.

Thank you for appreciating my work..😊.

Originally posted by: sonu-monu

verybeautifuly written

Thank you..😊.

Originally posted by: rosyrkohli

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<font color="#000066" size="2">unres</font>

<font color="#000066" size="2">kash kamal kar ditta</font>

<font color="#000066" size="2">i m happily shocked tat you came up wit sumthing beautiful as tis</font>

<font color="#000066" size="2">i missed ur work so much ki meih kya bolu</font>

<font color="#000066" size="2">making ur subject relatable wit ur readers</font>

<font color="#000066" size="2">especially focusing on the love that goes in between them</font>

<font color="#000066" size="2">a portion whr you showed swaron's internal conflict beneath the surface</font>

<font color="#000066" size="2">was beautifully penned both embarassed n a awkward silence in b/w them</font>

<font color="#000066" size="2">thn a small much needed swaronish moment</font>

<font color="#000066" size="2">whr swayam goes near sharon was epic</font>

<font color="#000066" size="2">you gave a perfect reflection of swayam n sharon's thoughts</font>

<font color="#000066" size="2">tis is the beauty of you as a writer all ur pieces</font>

<font color="#000066" size="2">have a deep emotional source, even when the story is lighthearted.</font>

<font color="#000066" size="2">he broke my trail of thoughts by pressing a kiss on my forehead and trailing down he caressed my nose & cheeks only leaving my lips, disappointment purged in my heart when I felt him withdraw & move away, his hands yet on my face.</font>

<font color="#000066" size="2">"You don't need to say sorry to voice out your feelings Sharon, don't do it, not to me."</font>

<font color="#000066" size="2">these lines are just heart-touching yaar</font>

<font color="#000066" size="2">meih kya bolu i m speechless😃</font>

<font color="#000066" size="2">all in all a very emotionally heart-touching os 😳</font>

Thanks mhan Rosy main kya bolu how happy am I to read such a wonderful comment from you it really made my day really..😊. Love you mhan..🤗. Thank you for appreciating my work so much and accepting me as a writer..😊.

Originally posted by: Nishi.Kss

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">kash..thanks a lot for writing this OS..seriously i love you..😳 i felt so good after reading this..
i couldnt help but laugh at swayam and sharon's condition..oh man..😆 poor souls..
bheege honth tere and rasiya..☺️ 😆
i loved it how swayam asked sharon to look into his eyes and later teasing her..
it really lightened my mood..and beautiful writing kash..loved it..keep writing

love
nishi
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Thanks Nish am glad you liked my work and it could manage to lighten up your mood..😃.
Love you too nish..🤗. Keep appreciating my work and you'll keep getting more..😃.