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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey I just arrived by chance on IF today and luckily so an OS on current track and its just a pleasant coincident that the writer is kashmi mam...

The OS was really very adorable and pleasant...it gave me wonderful SWARON scenes reading this one...thanks for writing it you really made me enjoy SWARON after so many days...the SWARON you described in the story are something I am curious to see from a long time but I guess I should not expect from show that much but I got to read something from a brilliant writer who has crafted just as enjoyable as it could have been if it was shown in show.

Keep Writing...

Pratik..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: pratik54000

Hey I just arrived by chance on IF today and luckily so an OS on current track and its just a pleasant coincident that the writer is kashmi mam...

The OS was really very adorable and pleasant...it gave me wonderful SWARON scenes reading this one...thanks for writing it you really made me enjoy SWARON after so many days...the SWARON you described in the story are something I am curious to see from a long time but I guess I should not expect from show that much but I got to read something from a brilliant writer who has crafted just as enjoyable as it could have been if it was shown in show.

Keep Writing...

Pratik..

Pratzyy thank you so so so so very much for liking my work it really made me happy that my hard work paid off and people liked it..🤗.
Don't be so humble and modest with me we all know whose the better writer here pratzyy am no brilliant writer..😃. Yet again thank you so very much for liking my write up..😃.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
Fab os. Luvd d way u described their feelings.
Such n amazing writer u r yaar. Itne simple scene ko b itna beautiful bna diya.
Luvd it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wowiee!!
New OS on the current track. 😳
i loved it. it was amazing. the layout and the plot.
he way you carried the track. 👏
i so wish it would have happened this way. 😳
loved it

thanks for the PM
keep writing
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
Huh finally i read it...!!
Kash it ws too long re...isko parne me muje 20 min lag gye...😆
Nw cming to this writeup...awww it ws too cute...lol i loved tht seductive song selection...poor swaron could'nt control their feelings...😳
Brilliant written kash...i so loved it...🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Thats.me.Guni

Fab os. Luvd d way u described their feelings.
Such n amazing writer u r yaar. Itne simple scene ko b itna beautiful bna diya.
Luvd it.

Thank you for the appreciation gunika..😊.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you..😊.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -spongy-



Wowiee!!
New OS on the current track.😳
i loved it. it was amazing. the layout and the plot.
he way you carried the track.👏
i so wish it would have happened this way. 😳
loved it

thanks for the PM
keep writing

Thank you soo much Isha am glad you liked it..😃 ❤️.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: bhavz_vrushan

Huh finally i read it...!!

Kash it ws too long re...isko parne me muje 20 min lag gye...😆
Nw cming to this writeup...awww it ws too cute...lol i loved tht seductive song selection...poor swaron could'nt control their feelings...😳
Brilliant written kash...i so loved it...🤗

Haila 20 min lage mere sabse chote Os padhne main?? Agar mera pehla waala padhti toh ek ghanta jaata tera Bhavi..😆 😆. Thank you for liking it am glad you liked it..😃 😃.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Cashi finally here i am commenting🤗

It was an awesome os Behna..
Both Der pov.s were so well written..
U sure r one brilliant writer..
U know how to put feelings in a way which connects to ur readers.. U express emotions so beautifully..
I loved loved it..
D teasing part was so cute..
N d songs playing one by one was so funny n der awkwardness was well justified..
Finally came d most super cute n aww moment for me which was d end swayam sleeping on sharon.s lap. .
It was perfect ending..
I ve always imagined swayam sleeping on sharon.s lap n sharon caressing his hair..
N am so glad u showed dat..

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