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@prateek.007

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

Hey kashmi,

As u know i couldnt able to follow D3 anymore and thats why current track wale work is like bouncer for me..But but i did read for 3 times and trully i enjoyed it..So...

It was such a massive handiwork,having beautifull compostion of individual pov of SwaRon regarding a particular activity..It was funny yet beautifully crafted with nautiness and perfect twists for readers..As a matter of fact,I just loved ur idea to make us rendezvous with such a drastic flow of emotions during read..It was way too too beautifull to read Swayam side,U know what i just remembered "Ajay devgan of Gomaal",Who's penetrating high to control his sudden emotions..😆Same case with SwaRon there,bheege honth tere and rasiya..Hmm..what a big choice,Kaha se lati hai aise ideas,hume bhi toh pata chale😉 I was literally laughing at sharon and swayam's condition there..I cant help there just lauging n enjoying the activities of two love birds..I really feel bad for disappointed sharon..Honestly what a writing there,I like it..Now the whole teasing,blushing section and dialouge delivery was epic,perfect for required condition..It was lightly romantic and beautifully played by writer side..Honestly i like this and i feel it was way to different according to ur regular technique of writing..It was like Tadakta bhadakta types😆

Amazing work..Just keep writing..Dare to stop

Thanx for PM and Sorry for my previous chotu sa comment..I feel bad for that..

Enjoy

Prateek

Edited by prateek.007 - 11 years ago

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prateek

@prateek.007

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

Edited above^^

I feel like i am spamming ur thread..But who cares😆

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Autumn_Hue

@Autumn_Hue

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: prateek.007
Hey kashmi,

As u know i couldnt able to follow D3 anymore and thats why current track wale work is like bouncer for me..But but i did read for 3 times and trully i enjoyed it..So...

It was such a massive handiwork,having beautifull compostion of individual pov of SwaRon regarding a particular activity..It was funny yet beautifully crafted with nautiness and perfect twists for readers..As a matter of fact,I just loved ur idea to make us rendezvous with such a drastic flow of emotions during read..It was way too too beautifull to read Swayam side,U know what i just remembered "Ajay devgan of Gomaal",Who's penetrating high to control his sudden emotions..😆Same case with SwaRon there,bheege honth tere and rasiya..Hmm..what a big choice,Kaha se lati hai aise ideas,hume bhi toh pata chale😉I was literally laughing at sharon and swayam's condition there..I cant help there just lauging n enjoying the activities of two love birds..I really feel bad for disappointed sharon..Honestly what a writing there,I like it..Now the whole teasing,blushing section and dialouge delivery was epic,perfect for required condition..It was lightly romantic and beautifully played by writer side..Honestly i like this and i feel it was way to different according to ur regular technique of writing..It was like Tadakta bhadakta types😆

Amazing work..Just keep writing..Dare to stop

Thanx for PM and Sorry for my previous chotu sa comment..I feel bad for that..

Enjoy

Prateek

Whoa prateek thanks for such an awesome comment dude.. Honestly I had to read it twice to understand it coz I could'nt really believe there were so many masked praises in store for me..😆. Tahnks mhan for such a wonderful comment it literally made my day dude thanks a ton..😃. Thank you for reading it and giving such a fab comment on it mhan..😊.