Sandhir FF:Camp at Goa!*NEW Part 18 updating*

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Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#221

~res!!

~unres~

Yay! First to comment 😃

Tanu!!!!!
I've fallen in love with this story!
From fighting with aata to helping her make fruit cream!
I loved it all!!!

Great going, girl!!

Waiting for your next update 😳

Love,
Kriti Di ❤️

Edited by Ms.P.K.Tunn - 11 years ago

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tuna_star

@tuna_star

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#222

Nice update as usual...
Can't wait 4 the next part... 😊

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don girls

@don girls

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#223

loved the update...!

awe they are getting along with each other ..

can't wait to see what happens in the next update...!

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Asapom

@Asapom

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#224

awesome update

vidushi always makes trouble

loved that sandhir worked together

continue soon

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Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#225

hey tanya!!!!

it was splendiferous i just loved it

hate vidushi😡

loved sandhir together

nice desert and vidushi food was LOL

eagerly waiting for the day

thanks for the pm!!!!

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swagata

@sweetieswagata

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#226

as usual..amazing update..👏

this vidushi is so disgusting...saare pakode fek di...😡

loved how randhir helped sanyu with the dessert..😳

update soon 😊

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Sonu

@StupendousArshi

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#227

hey tanya !!!!

awesome update sis just loved it

vidushi is disgusting yar aur kya expect kar sakte in logon se

sandhir worked together wow!!nice

loved randhir's helping nature

their playing wid flour nice

loved them together perfect !!!!

vidushi's food LOL completely bad

ur vocab is nice

u penned it perfectly

thanks for the pm!!!

Edited by StupendousArshi - 11 years ago

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manasi

@lovesandhir25

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#228

its awsome really cool...thanks for the pm...update it soon

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Rekha

@Rekha85

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#229

really loved it...vidhushi...I hate her!!!!!!!!

Loved ur update...thanx for the pm!!!!!!!

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Anuradha

@federized2210

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#230

With each update u r evolving as a writer...I loved this...the length was satisfying...the language brilliant!
Randhir's concern for sanyukta was the highlight! Vidushi was as usual the bane of everyone's existence!!
Overall fab update! Keep up the great job!
Love u sis:*