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Posted: 11 years ago
Guys! Hello! As promised, I am back with yet another update..no actually I am back with your much wanted Double Dhamaka. Mere toh lene ke dene pad gaye re. I toh just said dt Im gonna give you a double update but now it seems I HAVE to or else I will be dead in a matter of minutes..or maybe seconds 😆 I am surprised. I updated part 9 yesterday noon and by now it already has 5 pages of comments. Way to go!*pat myself on my back* So here is part 10, dedicated to nobody in particular as people seem to think I am buttering them. This is for everyone who read or has read or will read my story. Enjoy dear readers! --------------------------------------------------------------------------- Camp At Goa Part 10:The devil returns
Everything was going on smoothly. The stage had been built and a pretty chandelier had been placed above it along with colourful spotlights. A red carpet had been spread over the ground and on either side of it, chairs for seating had been arranged. A number of lamp lights hung from the ceiling, illuminating the entire area. Everything was working according to their plans until..''Trouble'' herself decided to drop by ,wave a 'Hi' and say a 'Hello' to them.
It was Friday and our dear Dream Team members were sitting in the drawing room of their suite and listening to the squabble going on between the very famous Mr.MCP with the ''I am the best'' attitude, and Ms.Women Rights with the ''Women are equal to men'' attitude.
R: Welcoming speech mein dunga cause I am the captain of this Dream Team!
S: What the hell Randhir. Tum captain sirf meri vajah se banne ho. Welcoming speech main dungi aur saath mein poora program compere bhi karungi!
Before Randhir could quip back at Sanyukta, our dear neutral Sadhu or rather ''Follow Ahinsa'' guru, piped in.
P:(In his very sagely voice) Guys. Jhagadna bundh karo.(Imagine him rotating the mala that sages hold in their hands) Ladne se kuch haasil nahi hoga. Meri baat maano toh tum dono ko ek saath welcoming speech bhi dena chahiye aur baaki ka program bhi host karna chahiye.Aur..
Before the sagely guru could complete his gyaan, Sanyukta and Randhir interrupted him together.
S n R: Wait a minute. EK SAATH!!!
J: Haan..Mera matlab Parth, yeh aap kesi baatein kar rahe ho.
K: Yes. What are you saying. Sanyukta and Randhir working together, peacefully, is a very extreme possibility..actually its not even a possibility! Its as unusual and impossible as raining marshmallows and chocolates is!
While Jiggy, Kaustaki, Parth and Yoyo(who doesn't even know what extreme or possibilty means) sat discussing extreme possibilties, Randhir and Sanyukta sat quietly, deep in thought.
They started having a flashback of that night in the forest...How they had worked together in perfect sync, understanding the other's opinion just by the look his/her eyes gave. They thought about how, together they had been successful in generating electricity in less time. They thought about the Dream Team and came to a conclusion.
S n R: Yes.
The two of them looked at each other with surprise, wondering how they not only followed the same line of thought, but also spoke the same thing together. 😲 It was as if they were not two completely different people, but one mind and one soul, living in two separate bodies.
P: What yes?
S: I am ready to deliver the welcoming speech and compere together!
R: So am I!
As everyone except Parth sat staring at them with bulging orbs(It'd become a daily routine to stare at the two with shock, by now) both of them together added, ''Only for the Team''.
As quickly as the students had slipped into shock, they recovered from their shock. They were delighted that these two top students of FITE had finally realised that they worked best together and had finally seen and talked sense.
-------------2 hours later--------------
Sanyukta and Randhir were fighting again over who is going to speak what, while the rest of them sat looking at the two with a ''These two are hopeless and never going to change'' expression, when suddenly the doorbell rang. Sanyukta got up to open the door. Little did they know that by opening the door they would be inviting the devil called ''Trouble'' in their life. As Sanyukta pulled open the door, in walked the Sycophant or rather ''brown-noser'' and her tail! Who else but our very own, Vidushi and Sahil.
The shock that the students received was reflected on their faces. Their expression was a sight! This trip seemed to be full of shocks. Every minute seemed to bring alon a 440 volt ka jhatka! Aur jor ka jhatka jor se hi lag raha tha!
V: Surprise! Kya hua, Tum sab aise langooro ke tarah humein kyun ghoor rahe ho? Humein dekhkar khush nahi ho kya?
Yoyo was the first one to recover. He was now staring at Vidushi's slender legs which were totally exposed as she was sporting a micro mini yellow skirt with a white shirt.
Yoyo: Arre Vidushiji! Sahil! Tum dono yaha? Oh balle balle. Aayo aayo. Andar aayo.
The two of them came in as the others also slowly started recovering from their shock xP They updated Vidushi and Sahil about everything that had happened so far and Vidushi was asked to take the daylife at beach room( As Sanyukta and Kaustaki didnt want to share their room with Vidushi and made an excuse of having too small a bed xP) while Jiggy shifted to share Randhir's Sunset room and Sahil was to share Parth's room. Room division aside, Sanyukta made lunch for everyone grumbling about having to cook food for two extra people now 😛 After lunch, she started deciding a menu for the program. She then very reluctantly showed the menu of food items she'd enlisted to Randhir.
Food Menu
1. Sweet Corn Soup
2. Mixed Veggies Chowmein
3. Aaloo ke pakode
4. Moong dal ke pakode
5. Fried baby corn
6. Soft drinks(optional)
7. Fried rice
8. Vegetable manchurian(gravy)
9. Gulab Jamun
10. Ice cream(optional)
S: Haina achi menu! Mene banaayi hai!
R: Hmm. Menu toh theek hai par itna sab kuch tum kese banaaogi?
S: Randhir menu mene banaaya hai toh soch samajhke banaaya hoga. Mein manage kar lungi.
R: Okay then, voh tumhaari problem hai. Soft drinks aur ice cream mein khareed lunga kal. Vese menu mein items zyaada hai aur function mein log bhi zyaada honge...toh itne saare logo ke liye itne kum samay mein khaana kese banaaogi?
S: Randhir. Mene kaha naa..Ladkiyaan sab kar sakti hai. Aur vese bhi, mein khaana pakaana abhi se hi shuru kar rahi hu. Sunday subha tak saara khaana taiyaar hoga!
R: Well. Aur koi option bhi nahi hai. All the best Farzi!
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Thats it for now! I wanted to give you a double dhamaaka but my post limit is over...Am gonna become a senior member soon, then pakkah will give you double-triple updates. Am sorry guys x( Will try to give another update today if my limit is renewed. Just cause I am dissappointing you, I am giving you a little idea about whats gonna happen in the next update although giving precaps is not my style xP So up next, you'll be seeing how dear Sanyu is going to cook so much food. Moreover they will be having a run through of the program followed by D-Day where a huge problem is gonna occur. Stay tuned or rather, glued to my story xD
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Posted: 11 years ago
-Res-
unreserving!!!!!!!!!!
That was really great Tanya!!!!!!!!!! I loved it...😃😃😃
The way u characterised parth!!!!!!!! as a sage...who is rotating the mala in his hands!!!! hilarious!!!!!🤣🤣🤣🤣
waiting for the update about the D-day...waiting eagerly!!!!!!!!
become a senior member soon!!!!!!!! I also suffered a lot due to no.of posts limits!!!!!!!!
Edited by Rekha85 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
they know each other so well same lines on same time
trouble vidushi is here
hope everything goes right
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb...👏👏
dey both r so undrstnding to each othr...😛
uff dat chudail is bac den...
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow it was really awsome...thanks for the pm...please send me its pm when u update its 11th part ...waiting for it update it soon...😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
You call this long? After reading your pm I was like yay! She updated. Lemme finish this chapter (as I have boards) and then I'll read peacefully as it was supposed to be "long"

Not fair, tanu, not fair..

Par jao maaf kiya! :P

Coming to the post. I loved it and thoroughly enjoyed it as always!! The imagination of Parth with the mala 🤣

Waiting for the next update 😊


Oh, and, on your suggestion, I updated Memphis.. Do have a look. Will be waiting for your review 😳

Love,
Kriti di ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update Tanya...
Finally yeh Dono saath mein kaam karne keliye Maan Gaye...
Awww.. So sweet nowadays Dey r able to understand each other via eyes haan..kya Baat hai..??:D
Aur tho aur woh devil ko kya zarurath thi yaha bhi guss ne ki..:(:(
And uss devil ka chamcha sahil.. Uff.. Dono ke Dono kaam chor hai.. Kaam katam hone ke baad aagaye...
And yaa the menu seems yummy... Muhje bhi khana hai..:)
Overall kya fadoo update tha..
Congo..!! In advance my sissy for becoming senior member...
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey tanya !!!
fantastic update yar and loved the parth part
it was hiilarious and he and sage LOL haha nice
sandhir accepted that they work perfect together
am glad about it and nice menu
u penned it perfectly
thanks for the pm sis !!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Heheheh I know you'd be mad at me cause I hadn't read your updates and didn't comment but sorry was a bit tied up throughout the week
Aahh pls don't throw your chappals at me , anyway you love heals and if you throw tht at me then kya hoga mera , so pls forgive me this time *pouts*
Anyway read all 3 recent updates in one go !!
Thoroughly enjoyd them !! Update soon
and pls pls pls don't kill me when u meet me on friday !!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Tanz,
Brilliant as usual!
Loved how u made them work together, SanDhir I mean!
Loved ur idea of introducing vidushi n sahil...the more the merrier, plus with more characters u hv the chance to bend the plot according to ur liberty!
Writing, grammar, vocab ..top-notch as usual!!
Interesting precap!
Teri post limits ki to mein...ufff!
But gud news is u will become senior member soon!! Till then, 'waiting' is in order! But this is worth the wait, seriously!
Love u sis :*

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