Arshi TS: Raabta *Updated* Last part Pg:12(09/03/14)

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Interesting Start...

Continue Soon...😊

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sfghfj

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

interesting start. pls continue soon

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deepikadhanu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Wow awesome start. Poor anjali feeling sad for her:-( love the everything start with red:-) that shyam cheating anjali and arnav. Thank god whoever that girl choosed by anjali finally opened her eye and said truth to them. But who Is that girl? Confused cant wait for next update:-)

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rk2127

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Raabta...if I get it correct then it means "a tie or a relation". Correct me if I'm wrong?

If I'm right than I guess your title so far is very justifying cause some relations or ties make us do things we can't even imagine. Like Anjali's condition on Shyam's betrayal or Arnav's helplessness and taking to drugs as way out for some time of all the pain and agony surrounding him.

Continue soon wanna read what happens next.

Edited by rk2127 - 11 years ago

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KBS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

That girl isn't Khushi. nahi hai na?

OMG, what happened to all of them.

Hearing that she is orphan too, I guessed she was Khushi, but Dil nahi mann raha yaar

Shyam and her husband 🤢

I am waiting for the next update

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cheesemad

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Edited my comment on page 4:)

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meradil

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

interesting... would like to read more.

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@flowers4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

an interesting story...hope arnav doesn't drink it...continue soon

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praj.shrish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#49

Hello Darling,

It's been so long that I have commented on your work and you knw the reasons n I'm sure you are not ghussa on me for that...I always take you granted 😉

Coming to this story. It's fantastic start to unwrap what you are holding to reveal next.

I liked how the RED colour of wine went auspicious for Arnav first and then became all bane.

I felt truly sad for all family. So Shyam is same creepwa here too. But no worries as he already behind the bars but what touched my heart is Anjali's blind love for him. Poor soul, almost met to her death for her love.

The girl whoever she is, I don't think she is Khushi.

I guess khushi is yet to make appearance in his life yet.

Keeping my fingers crossed 😃

P.S: just a small advice to you. A little depth to emotions can make the story more poignant