Arshi TS: Raabta *Updated* Last part Pg:12(09/03/14)

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Posted: 12 years ago

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opsyellow

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Posted: 12 years ago

😃 Tom please tell me that the girl Arnav got married and had kid with Shyam was not khushi😡?

What ever happened was not good but everything happen for a reason. maybe Arnav was not meant be with this girl. Anjali is not dead right? will someone come and stop him from drinking that thing?

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hmm.. guess karo :P

@jas0308

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Posted: 12 years ago

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anu.. anu... anu... behana.. i told u tu awesome hai.. and TS is SUPERB *claps* *claps*

it's all started with RED!!! marriage.. lol.. it's of Anjali's marriage, (you know as in the show arnav's flashbacks). but later pta chala arnav's 😲 😆

and those tablets in wine.. OMG...it's not good to take.. but what are those tablets?😉

ohh.. he liked that 'girl' but love... ehh.. i think no!!!
but the question is.. who is 'she'???
kon hai yeh aurat!!!! 😆

bloody shit.. i had doubt.. during arnav-anjali's convo.. ke shyam snakewa hai... and snake snake hi nikla... snakewa

omg... his i.e. arnav's fiance is shyam's wife?? snakewa's??? and also mother of a son..

bloody shyam .. trying to kill his son??? 😡

but thank god.. that 'woman's' eyes opened.. and before anything goes wrong.. she come out and tell everyone.. everything.. ohh with all tha sabuts 😆

felt bad for anjie... poor girl.. loved her husband so much and what did she get.. now poor soul is in camotose!!
hope she will be fine !!

oh no!!! arnav... please dont take that wine!!!
god please.. 😆

khushi kaha hai ??? khushi?? meri khushi!?? kaha ho? missed u so much here!! 🤗

anu.. next part.. please!!!

PS... ignore my typos.. phone se likha hai.. toh maafi pleej!!!

PPS: anu.. humesha baccha(u wanted this name na) 🤗 ❤️

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zohakhan7

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Posted: 12 years ago

That was a fabulous part
loved it

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IPK007

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Posted: 12 years ago

Anu, this is the first time I'm reading something by you and I loved it. You write beautifully and are able to portray all the emotions raging in the characters' minds with not only their thoughts but also their mannerisms and body language, it creates so much more impact on us readers :)

Coming to the story, it brought so many happy memories of the show, Anjali teasing Arnav, running her fingers though his hair, Arnav restingbhis head in her lap. You brought out the strong brother sister bond really well with your words.

What happened at the wedding was a shocker! Khushi already married to Shyam, has a son by him and was only pretending to like Arnav !

Really curious as to how you plan to take the story forward :)

And so many ecstasies in red wine, don't drink it, Arnav... you'll never return from the 'trip' :(

That bartender needs to be in jail :/

Lovely story, Anu, really enjoying it :)

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celinawalter

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Posted: 12 years ago

unres!

superb update and another new story from you!!!! i am looking forward to the next update already.
Who is the lady who was going to be Arnav's bride? As it is not mentioned anywhere that she is Khushi but i am assuming her to be one.
Anjali's condition was too much for me to digest.
the Lady with the child, was she not in love with Arnav at all? was she really just in love with his money as she stated??? i am unable to make guesses.

now is Arnav really going to take that solution? or shall we expect some miracle in form of Khushi coming into his life (again, if his fiance was the same).

continue soon.

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chavvi16

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Posted: 12 years ago

wait who was his she
please tell me that she wasnt khushi
hmmm so shyam was creep here too
his di is in coma like state
he obviously has been betrayed and isnt taking that well
which is why he was almost gonna take those drugs
is there any relief for him
oh boy that was sad for sure
ASR stood up
but guess its better this way
than to be married to a girl who was and is married to that ex jija of his
cheers for pm

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nishu_shorna

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Posted: 12 years ago

Anu...such an amazing start...wow...its intense...and really nice...u havent mention Khushi, so we can hope the girl isnt Khushi, right? I cant see my Khushi married to that snake...poor Anjali...such a lovely-sweet lady has to face this...i feel sorry for her...and I feel bad for Arnav too, he may not love the girl, but such deceive is hard to face, no matter from whom it comes, and here this came from his own to-be-wife...bechare...looking for ward to read more Anu...continue soon...

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javeria

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Posted: 12 years ago

WOW another mind blowing TS.👏

Who is "SHE"? I don't think she is khushi.

Damn that Shyam😡. He played with three lives, betray them and broke hearts of many lovely people.

I love the way you begin the story with "RED". It immediately gives me the picture of wedding.

I am sure Arnav won't stay quite. He and happy family was taken grated, especially his sister and his heart. He might have started developing feelings for her.

Poor "She" She was also the puppet and equal victim like others. She almost lost her son. She shouldn't have done the mistake of trusting Shyam. I am glad she didn't ran away like a coward and brought the truth of devil Shyam in front of everyone.

I feel very sad for Anjali. She is now a living corpse. This is the crucial time for her and the family.

What needed is an angel to can bright everyone's life again.

waiting for the next part.

Edited by Javeria3991 - 12 years ago