Ek He Khwahish...SK...Pt-82(Pg:123)Imp Note Pg:124 - Page 4

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Posted: 18 years ago
#31
wen are u posting the next part. Waiting eagerly for it.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#32
very nice...👏
but bechara sujal.. 😭
please sujal ke liye woh dadi aur veena ko achcha bana do... 😉
continue soon..i'll be waiting for the next part.. 😃
Edited by sun_423 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#33
pls continue soon cant wait for the next part.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#34
please continue soon..me waiting for the next part.. 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#35
thnx golu,tanasha..n surya 4 liking the last part...n abt the kind of treatment wid sujal..don worry guys...u will soon know the reason..i m postng in few mins..
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Posted: 18 years ago
#36

Part 4:
So both in nandas n garewals..preprtion of marriage is gng on...n 2day its sangeet..ok now lets see whts all wearng..
we came in anjalis room n shes wearng a blue dress n looking stunning...



ok now we move on 2 another room n see akshat n sujal ...both looking handsom as always...





ok now the sangeet has started n evryone iz enjoyng...here comes the nandas family..n kavya face iz shown...



then we see charu entering wid attitude(arey bhai..after all larke walee hain...hehe)



all hav arived..n still no hulla gulla is there..n then as its seeming boring so akshat went on stage n says..
A:attention evryone as its sangeet n no such masti iz gng on i hav decided 2 play a game..n tht will be b/w boys n grls..so wht u all say
all nod there heads i agreement n then..
A:ok,so now will play antakshiri..so comon gals n boys..make a team..m the leader of boys team n charu will lead grls..f9 wid u mam(looking 2wards charu)
c:no probs..any time..
n then frst its turn of boys n akshat sings a song..
khambe jaisi khadi hai ladaki hai ya chhadi hai
shola hai phooljhadi hai pattakhe ki ladi hai
aankhon mein ghussa hai labon pe gaali hai
dekho jara dekhjo yaaron khudako samajhati hai kya
A:now grls ur turn....words a...
C:(looks @ akshat n sings..)
Ankh mare oo larka ankh mare
Ankh maree oo larka ankh mare
siti bajeee....satyeee
dil dharkayee...satyee
beech sark mein hoy naam mera pukare
ho karke isharey..hoo..larka...
ankh mare...
nxt word e...guz...
now kavya sings a song looking @ anjali..
k:ek mein aur ek tu..
dono mille is tarah
han ek mein aur ek tu
dono mille is tarah
aur jo tan mann mein horaha hai..
yeh tu hona he tha...
now a grls..
anjali..sings looking @ kavya..
an:app ki khatir mere dil ka jahan hai hazir
apne sarey arman kardoon mein zaher..
kardoon mein zaheer..kabhi kabhi tu hote hai..
yahan mukamal ashique..kaye karwate lege yeh zindagi..
badle na nazar apke..app ko batoon kaise yaara samjhoan
sath aisa milega kahan phir...
app ki khatir mere dil ka jahan hai hazir
n the game goes on..n all r jus bored so they end up..
A:ok as its jus gtg boring so we will now do somthng else..so wht 2 do..?
C:i hav an idea.. 😃
A:u n giving a idea..we should better thnk ourself.. 😆
C:akshat.... 😡 😡 i kill u anyways..the ides iz tht as we all know sujal has gr8 voice so he wil sing a song 4 all of us..howz tht..?
A:i bet..this iz the frst n the lst time u said somthng whch iz nt sounding stupid @ all.. 😆 i thnk its gr8 idea.. 😃
C:oh..yah..i always giv gr8 ideas..m nt lik u.. 😡
K:ok..u both stop n now sujal..sing a song 4 us..
S:no wys..i dono any song..n i will nt sing.. 😳
An:comon sujal..u have..2..papa tell him 2 sing na..
L:chalo beta sab itna keh rahe hain tu galu na..
S:nahee papa..i cant.. 😳
(2 veena)K:mama ab app he buliye apney is ladle ko hamre tu yeh sun he nahe raha..
n then veena has no choice..she sees dadis face.. 😡 n shez making weird faces..n @ last she says..
V:ab ga lu gana sujal beta sab itna keh rahe hain tu(she said these lines as if shez done such a big deal of work)
sujal when hears veena calling him beta..he feels so happy..tht he agrees 2 sing the song. 😃
S:ok.. 😃
Khusyion ka din aya hai jo manga voh paya hai..
Khusyion ka din aya hai jo manga voh paya hai..
aj mere maa ne mujh ko beta keh ke bulaya hai..
maaa..oh maaa...maa..merey maa...
n we see tears in his eyes hile singing it.. 😭 😭 😭
n wid this the sangeet cermony gts over...
in the night we see sujal sitting in his room n hez v happy..
A:i know,aj mom ne tumhein sab ke samne beta bola..is liye tu aj buhat khush hai..
S:khush..yeh kitna choota lafz hai akshat..mera tu aj mann karta hai..ke sarey duniya ke samney chilaoon..aur sab ko apne is khusi mein shamil karoon. 😃 😃
A:chal..ab suja..raat ke is waqt tu koi aise harkat kareyga..na tu log tujhe pagal kahein ge.. 😆
S:aj tu mujhe woh khusi mile hai ke koi pagal bhi kahe tu mujhe koi farq nahe parey ga..aj zindagi mein phele bar mere maa nemujhe beta kaha hai..oh m so happy... 😃 😃
ok no we move 2 the nxt room n see whts happeing in veena n lalits room..
we see veena sitting by window side..n shez crying 😭 😭 then we hear lalits voice..
L:tumhein pata hai veena,aj jo khusi mein ne sujal ke chere par dekhe..jab tumhne use beta kaha tu.. 😊
V:aur kya karte..sab ke samney... 😡
L:kya tumhne sirf sab ke samney apne izzat rakhne ke liye ussey aisa kaha..bolo..kya tumhare dil mein us ke liye aisa koi jazba nahee..kaho.. 😕
V:mujhe nahee pata..aur waise..bhi raat buhat hogaye hai..app sujayee.kal kaam buhat hain..
L:tum kaise kar ke bhi mujhe taal do par mein janta hoon..jitne khusi aj use yeh lafz sun kar hui hai..us se kaye zyada tumhein hui hai.. 😃
V:bas mein kuch aur nahee sunna chatee..mujhe koi khusi nahee hui.. 😡 aur na mein us baat ko bhula sakhti hoon..ap ke liye sab asan hoga..par merey liye.. 😡
L:par jab tumhne...
V:mein ne kehdiya na...ab aur nahee 😡 😡
ok now we move 2ward london n see whts happening in kashishs house..
K:come on papa..plz..aise kon se bari baat hai.. 😭 😭
anurag-ar
ar:beta mein kya kar sakta hon..jab tumhare mama..
K:papa..i know sirf app he mama ko mana sakte hain..plz papa.. 😒
ar:acha..mein koshish karunga..
K:no koshish papa.. 😒 😒..mujhe india jana hai tu jana hai..plz papa..i know..app mere baat kabhi nahe talte.. 😭 😭
ar:ok,baba..mein tumhare mama..ko mana longa..
K:hurray.. 😃 luv u papa..ur the bstestn gr8st papa... 😃
then we see kashish gng 2wards her room,shouting..n yelling wid joy..n anurag iz jus smiling n seeing..how her lil angel..looks..when shez happy..😊
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hop u guys lik this part..sorry 4 late reply i was quite busy..anyways do comment how it was..
nxt part:will kashish..come 2 india...will prerna..allow her..will see..in the coming days..so keep reading..

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Posted: 18 years ago
#37
Nice part and good to see that sujal is happy. But is the truth behind sujal's identity pls tell us and post the next part as soon as possible
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Posted: 18 years ago
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👏 goood sujals happy....but wats up wiv veena yaar 😡
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Posted: 18 years ago
#39
thnx 4 liking the part golu,honii n rachandeep...n as i alway say if i will tell u the real truth..then..y should i write the story..so wait n watch...
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part-5:
We see a grl pleading sumone..yah u all guess it rite..its none other than our kashish..n shez pleading prerna..2 giv her permission..
K:plz mama..i promise i will behave like good grl..
Prerna-P
P:no means no kashish..
K:par mama..kia burai hai janey mein
P:arey tum jawan jahan larke..kaise mein tumhein itni dur akela chor doon.
K:akele kahan mom kripa hai na mere sath..
P:arey woh bhi tu akele larke hai..kaise mein tumhein us ke sath paraye mulk mein yun akela..na baba na..humara koi janey wala bhi nahe hai wahan par..
K:papa..ab app hi mama ko bulye na..
anurag kuch bulne he lagta hai.ke p inteferes in b/w..
P:yeh kia bolenge..jab mein ne khedia tu..
an anurag looks @ kashish lik..now he cannot do anythng.. 😕 n kashish face iz lik..plz..n shez jus on verge of cryng.. 😭 seeing his lil angel..cryng he speaks up..
an:arey bhaye..prerna..akhir kripa ke mom dad ne bhi tu use allow kia na..
P:wohe tu mujhe herat hai..mein tu abhi us ke maa..se baat karte hoon..
K:mom..app aunti se koi baat nahe karenge.. 😡 aur waise bhi kripa apni cousin ke shadi attend karne ja rahe hai..uske mom kyoun rokeinge..
P:theek hai shadi..us ke cousin ke hai..tumhara kya kaam..
K:mama..main ne aj tak koi indian shadi nahii dekhe..plz..mom mera buhat dil hai..yahan par tu..aisa kuch dekhne ko milta he nahe..
P:lekin.. 😕
K:mom..aur waise bhi ..i want 2 see how india..iz after all m an indain..aur agar..zindagi mein ik baar india he na dekha tu(she strted emotional black mailing).. 😭
an:janey do na ..akhir bachi ka dil hai..
P:woh sab sahee parr..mer dil nahee man raha..ke isey essay..ajeeb khayalat a rahe hain..
an:kashish..tum jao tayari karo..tumahre mom ko koi prob nahee hai..mein tumhare aur kripa ke kal ke tickets book kara deta hoon..
P:lekin.. 😲
K:oh..mama,papa..i luv u both.. 😃 (n leaves the room dancing n shouting wid joy..)
P:anurag...yeh tumne..
an:come on prerna..akhir woh humare ik he bete hai..aur uske itni se khawish ke liye,mein kuch bhi kar sata hoon..
P:par..mere andar ka darr
an:mein janta hoon..ke tumhein yeh darr hai ke wahan us ke sath kuch galat na ho..par prerna tum yeh dekho woh humare bete hai..woh kuch aisa nahee kare ge jis se humein koi dukh ho.. 😊
P:woh tu hai..
an:tu bas phir ab usey khusi khusi veda karoo..yun roote hui nahee..
P:sahee...
n then we go 2 kashish room.n see tht..shez strtng packing(shadi strt jo ho chuke hai...aur yeh log tu phele he dair karchuke hain)
she picks up the phone n calls somone..
K:hello,namaste aunti kripa hai?
aunty:han beta ik min bulate hoon use..
Kr:hey kash..so whts the latest news..?
K;guess wht krips..?
Kr:comon..tell na kash..m waiting..
K:i gt the permission 2 go wid u..oh m so happy..@ last mom agreed.. 😃
Kr:hey thts superb...ok..u strted packing na..
K:yah..n dad said he will arrange the tickets 4 2morrow..
Kr:thts kool..ok then even i strt packing then..meet u @ the airport then..n han msg me the flight timings..as soon as u gt 2 know..
K:ok sure..bye..see ya 2morrow than..
kr:bye..

ok now we move 2 india...n see wht our dear sujal iz doing...
S:oh dids..the shoping bags r so heavy..wht u bought?
An:its jus...a few thngs i needed urgently..
S:these whole bags hav few thngs...
An:sujal... 😡
S:sorry dids..mein tu bas..
An:han han..tum sab larke ik jaise hote hu..i dono why u hate..our shopping..dekhna jab tumhare biwi ayge tu tum kasie use shoping nahe karate..
S:no ways i wont..plz..i hate gng 2 these shopping..aur waise bhi..app larkian ik shop pe itna time lagate hain..utne mein tu hum shayad..sara mall ghom lein..
An:ok..now don strt acting like kavya..aur waise bhi ik din kya agaye mere sath shopping karne..itna shor..is se tu acha tha..mein aksht ko le ate.. 😭
S:arey nahee dids..app tu naraz hogyein..mein tu aise he bol raha tha.. 😒
An:oh,sujal tum bhi na ketne bholey hu..mein tu aise he tumhein cher rahe the..aur tum senti hogaye.. 😃
S:dids.. 😭
An:aur nahe tu kya..arey bhai..akshat tu kabhi mere manta he nahee agar use khete..bt u i know..my bst n lovely bro..u will neva say no 2 me..
S:ofcourse dids..h can i say no 2 u... 😊
An:i know..thts why..tu i said i luv u my bro..even more than akshat...
S:i will tell this 2 akshat did.. 😉
An:hey u will nt..its b/w both of us...n if u will tell i will nt talk 2 u then..
S:no prob.i will still tell.. 😉
An:oh plz..sujal..my lovely bro..u wont na..warna tht akshat..u know na m leavng the house in 2-3 days..n u will do this.. 😭 😭
S:ok..dids..no used 2 cry..waise i was jus kidding wid u..look..now i gotch u.. 😃
An:sujal... 😡 (n strt hitting him wid bg..wid more affection n luv in her eyes 4 her sweet bro)
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ok now this was the 5th part..hop u all liked it...do comments..
nxt part:kashish in india..will she meet sujal...wait..4 nxt part 2 know all abt it...

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