Ek He Khwahish...SK...Pt-82(Pg:123)Imp Note Pg:124 - Page 3

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Posted: 18 years ago
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another great part. Pls continue soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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very good part ur such a good writer 👏 👏 👏 lekin humhare sujal ko itna burah kyun treat karti hai veena aur dadi 😭 😭 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
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i cant wait for.more scenes between sujal and kashish .....hehe ..... i hope kashish and sujal meet soon 👏
.once again great part...and update soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanx so much..angeleyez..n golu..4 liking it....
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: sun_423

very nice...you write very well..keep up the good work... 👏
please post the next part soon..me will be waiting for it eagerly.. 😃 & waise you can call me surya instead of sun_423... 😃

thnx 4 liking it..surya..n m postng thenxt one soon..so jus chk it out...

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: rachandeep

very good part ur such a good writer 👏 👏 👏 lekin humhare sujal ko itna burah kyun treat karti hai veena aur dadi 😭 😭 😭

thnx 4 liking it rachandeep...n abt sujal ko bura kyoun treat karte hain dono..wait...u will gt 2 know soon..till then..keep reading...😃....i know all u cant see sujal lik thiz..don worry..i wont do anythng bad lik tht wid him...😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: kash1988_0108

i cant wait for.more scenes between sujal and kashish .....hehe ..... i hope kashish and sujal meet soon 👏
.once again great part...and update soon

thanx kash 4 liking ...n soon u will see both sujal n kashishs meeting...till then keep reading...

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 3:
There iz a lot of hala gula @ garewals..n evryone iz busy in the prepration of the pooja..lalit n veena r nt @ home..n hav gone @ kavyas place 2 invite them formally..
so lets see whts happening @ nandas.
A huge big hall n an old man n lady r sitting there..having tea..then a servant comes n informs them abt lalit n veenas arrival,they tell him 2 call them inside..
n we see both entring the big hall..
Veena n lalit both 2 the old lady n man..
V&L:Namaste mata ji,bauji kaise hain app log..
tht lady n the man r none other than dida n bauji..in Kavyanjali..
dida-di,bauji-b
di-Bhagwan ka karam hai..tum sunao..beta..kaise ana hua..
V:ji woh hum ne shadi se phele ghar mein pooja rakhwaye hai..tu bas usi ka nuta dene ke liye app ke ghar aye hain..
di:arey han, yeh acha kia..mein bhi sooch he rahe the ke poja hone chaye..ik shub kaam tu karna he chaye..
V:ji bas woh isey liye,kal humne rakhe hai..waise nitya ji kaheen nazar nahee arahe hain..
b:aray woh bas bechari,ik akele jaan,upar se sare zimdari us par..abhi office se aye hai..mein abhi bulata hoon
L:arey nahee rehne dijye,samdhan ji ko aram karne dein..hum tu bas..
b:nahee beta..aise koi baat nahee..
n then he calls the servant 2 tell nitya 2 come downstairs..as guest r sitting..
then they jus talk abt usual thngs n we see..nitya n kavya both comng downstairs 2 the hall..
Nityas..kavya mom...here shez real mom..n kavya dad iz no more so she has taken all the responsibilties..
Nitya-N
N:Arey namaste bhenji app...namste bahi saab..app log kaise..
V:jee woh, bas ik pooja rakhe thi kal ghar mein tu use ka kehne aye hain..
N-ji zaroor hum sab ayeinge..
n then kavya comes foward n takes ashirwaad frm both veena n lalit...(bara naik bacha hai..)
V&L:jeete raho beta..
V:acha hum ab chalte hain..aur tayare bhi karne hai..
N-nahe bhai,abhi tu app log ayein hain,bethye,kuch lejye..
L:arey nahee samdhan ji, bete ke susral ka tu pani bhi nahe pete..hum kaise
K:Comon uncle app bhi..yeh jaise..mere mom hain..waise he app dono..anjali se rishte ke natee mere mom dad bhi lage na..
L:woh tu hai beta par..
K:tu bas..aise koi fazol baatein nahe manta,app kuch le kar he jayeinge..
V:par beta,aisa nahee hosakta..
K:plz aunty,mere khatir,warna mein samjhoonga..ke app mujhe apna beta nahee mante hain...
V&L:acha sahee hai..
n then they stay there hav tea n all..n leave after somtime..
ok now its nxt morning n @ garewals..there iz whole lot of ppl gathered...n then we see our handsom sujal coming down..looking handsom as always..
hez wearng a black sherwani..he comes 2wards dadi.whoz busy in talking wid the phoolwala..


S:namaste dadi..mein kuch madat karoon apki..
Dadi ignores him n dont giv any response..n still talking wid phoolwala..sujal again tries his luck.. 😔
S:ab aram karein dadi thak jayengi,is phoowale se mein baat karta hoon..
😡 dadi gts angry n cant tell..sujal 2 go away..so she takes all her anger on bechara pholwala..n shouts on him v badly..
poor sujal feels v bad..n leaves the place.. 😭 😭
n then we see dadi murming 2 herself somthng..
D:pata nahe samjhta kya hai apne app ko,jab pata hai ke mujhe is sey baat karna tu kya,is ke shakal dekhna bhi pasand nahe tu kyoun bar bar ajata hai.. 😡 😡
then we see sujal sitting alone in his room n there r tears in his eyes.. 😭 😭 he is jus thnking abt the inccident whch happened downstairs.... 😭 😭
akshat comes out frm the washroom n says..
A:look sujal,hot lag rahoo na, i bet aj tu larkyain sare mujh par he maree samjho..
sujals says nothng n jus nodes his head in agreement..
A:aur kya mein hoon he aisa..ke har larke samjho mere se baat karne ko taraste hai.. 😆
n then we see suddenly somone enterng the room..shez a beautiful grl wearing a light blue choridar..
gal-g
g:han jaise duniya mein larkon ka kal parh gaya hai,jo koi ladke tumhein pasand kare gi... 😆
A:je han, tumhe tu bas mujh se har waqt jalan hote hai,tum dekh he nahe sakte,ke koi larke mujh mein interest le rahe hai.. 😡
g: me n jealous of u...oh no plz..shakal dekhe hai apne aine mein 😡
A:hmm,dekhe hai...n i know m the mst handsom guy in teh world..of course after u sujal..chal tu bhi kya yaad rakhe ga..kis sakhi se pala para tha.. 😉
g:hey,hello..apna muh dho ke rakho... hmm..handsom..aur kya tum sujal pe ahsan jata rahe ho..use tumhare ahsan ke zaroorat nahe..coz he knows how he iz..
A:charu..tum..jao yahan se..warna mein... 😡
ji han the gal iz none other than charu...
charu-c
c:han jaon..kyu sachaye buri lage na.. 😃
A:tum... 😡
C:acha baba gaye,mein tu yeh khene aye thi ke aunti keh rahe hai..jaldi neeche ao,pooja shuru horahe hai..
A:tum jao..hum ajayenge.. 😡
n then charu leaves..n akshat says to sujal..
A:yeh larki bhi na..i dono h come shez sis of kavya bhaya..hez so nic n lovng n she... 😡
yah charu iz none other than small sister of kavya..n iz loved by her bro a lot..tabhi tu aise hai na.. 😆
when akshat sees sujal didn't respond 2 his comment he moves 2ward him..n see tht he had tear in his eyes..n is lookng quiet upset


A:sujal kya hu tujhe..tu rooraha hai..?
S:arey nahee,yaar..tujhe ghalat fehmi hui hai..
A:ghalat fehmi,sawal he paida nahee hota..tu bata raha hai,yah mein anjali dids ko bolaoon..
S:nahee dids ko mat bulao..kavya bhaya ayein hain..n her whole sasural,i don wan her 2 gt hurt coz of me.when shez happy.. 😔
A:tu bata kia mamla hai..
n then sujal tells him the whole story
A:tu janta hai n unhe phir kyoun..kya tujhe pata nahee tha ke woh aisa he karein ge.
S:mujhe maloom tha par..mein nesoocha.. 😭 😭
A:bas tu na zyada soocha na kar..aur ab chal fresh hoja..sab neeche wait karehe honge.. 😊
S:hmm..ok 😊
n then both went downstairs..n the pooja started n after the pooja there was a small party..so evryone was enjoyng it..
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ok ppl..so thts it 4 now..hop tht it was good..nt borng..
nxt part:kavya anjali marriage...

Edited by **-**Guriya**-* - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Guriya nice part. but why sujal is being treated like this why????
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Posted: 18 years ago
#30
nice part 👏 ...but wats the secret behind this cold shoulder 😡 towards sujal 😭

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