Ek He Khwahish...SK...Pt-82(Pg:123)Imp Note Pg:124 - Page 6

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👏 nice part cant wait for the next part
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👏 fab part!!!!!! update quickly
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thnks all of u 4 ur comments...n now herez the new part..

Part-7:
Now its the nxt morning..we see sumone...still sleepng on the bed..n its kashish..krips iz in the washroom..n as she comes out..
Kr:kash..ab uth bhi jao..plz yaar..kabh se utha rahe hoon..aunti ka bhi do bar phone achuka hai..ab phir aya tu main nahee uthaon ge..
K:kya hai krips..soone de na..raat bhi itna late sooye..
Kr:yaar..aj shaam ko party hai..n even we don hav dresses..we hav 2 go 4 shopping 2..ab jaldi uth bas..
K:acha..baba..bas tu neeche chal mein ati hoon..
Kr:jaldi ana..du na jana..
K:acha..meri amma..arahee hoon..ab tu jayge..
n then they both go 4 shopping wid charu..
now its evening n evryone..iz in hurry 2 gt ready 4 the party..
we see kavya..standing near the door n welcoming the guest...hez wearng...



all the oldies r ready..n r downstairs...bt the ladies..r nt yet down...n r gtg ready...(after all grls yar)
n then we see garewals comng...@ last anjali enters..n kavya is in state of shock..coz anjali iz loking really beautiful...



An:aham...aham..kya hua kavya..?
Ka:woh..actually anjali..ur..? 😲
An:i wht..? 😊
Ka:ur lookng stunning in this dress..
An:thanks 4 the compliment.. 😳 aur waise.nahee detey tu..mein tumhein chorti..arey bhai itni tayari ki tumhare liye..dad tu wasol karni he thi na..
Ka:hmm..ise liye tu kaha mein ne..warna..tum..mujhe chorti na..
An:is ka matlab tum ne sirf mera dil rakhne ke liye kaha.. 😭
Ka:nahee baba..acha ab..yeh rooni surat hato..aur smile..u really r lookng beautiful.. 😳
An:i know i m.. 😳
Ka:ik tu tum larkian..kuch nahe ho sakta tum logon ka..
n we heard a voice frm bck..
S:sahee kaha app ne kavya bhaya.. 😃
An:sujal tum bhi..dekh loongi tum dono ko..phele mein zara sab se mil ayoon.. 😡
n then anjali leaves..n now only kavya n sujal r standng..
Ka:anjali bhi na bas..abhi bhi bachon wali harkatein hain..
S:hmm..i know
Ka:arey sujal ik kaam tu kar..upar na mere kamrey mein ik gift para hai..i esp gt it 4 anjali..plz le aye ga..i cant go frm here..u know all guest r comng n..
S:no probs bhaya..mein ladeta hoon..
Ka:thanks..
n then sujal move 2wards the stairs..n by mistake he enters sumone elses room.nt kavya..now lets see whoz room iz this..
we see a grl standng near the bed..n tryng 2 tie..the lace on her bck..bt shez unable 2..we cant see her face..sujal gts inside.n iz shock 2 see the grl.. 😲 he notices his mistake n is abt 2 leave the room when the grl shouts..
grl:krips yaar..plz..yeh mera lace band nahee ho raha karde.
sujal iz kinda shock.. 😲 coz no one iz there..n he doesn't know wht 2 do..hez abt 2 tell the grl tht her frnd iz nt here..when she says again..
grl:kya kar rahee hai kripa..jaldi kar na .. 😡
n sujal has no other way...so he comes ahead..n tie the lace knot..sujal iz v near the grl..still the grl doesn't know its sujal..n shez standng widout any tension..sujal iz kinda nervous..when he ties..n abt 2 leave suddenly the grl turns..
grl:app...? 😲
S:ji woh main... 😕
grl:kon ho tum..aur yahan..merey kamrey mein kya kar rahee ho..?
sujal iz abt 2 giv reason..when grl says again..
grl:aur tumhare himat kaise hui..mera lace bandhne..ke.tum.. 😡
sujal again tries 2 say sumthng..n again..
grl:niklo merey kamrey se..aur kya mujhe ghoore ja rahe ho..jawab kyu nahee deta..goonge ho kya..hey heeloo..main kuch pooch rahee hoon. 😡
S:akhir bolon tu bolon kaise.. kabse batane ke koshish ka raha hoon..par app hain ke bolna ka muka he nahee dete hain.. 😊
grl:tumhein bulne nahee de rahee..tumhara kia matlab hain..main koi zyada bolti hoon... 😡
S:arey nahee app tu bura mann rahe hain..darasal..mein kavya bhaya ke kamre mein ja raha tha kisi kaam se.
grl:tu yeh tumhein kavya bhaya ka kamra lagta hai.
S:arey bhye..chup ik dum chup.. 😡 kabse mere baat beech mein kate ja rahein hain..ab sirf mujhe sunye..aur ik word bhi nahee bolein ge app
grls kind of gts scare n keep quite..
S:woh ghalte se app ke kamre mein agaya..aur jab mujhe pata laga..tu janey he wala.tha..ke apne..mujhe..apni frnd..samjh ke kaam keh diya..ab mein kya karta..bolye..
the grl stil nt answer anythng..
S:ab app itni bhi tabedar na banye..ke mein ne kaha..chup rehna ko tu bole hi na..u can speak now.. 😃
grl:koi nahee mein app ki tabedar..wabedar..n agar mein ne bol bhi diya tha..tu app..mujhe bata nahee sakte the.. 😡
S:koshish ki thi mein ne..par apne.. 😳
grl:kya main ne.. 😡
S:waise app apne samne kisi ko bolne kahan dete hain.. 😊
grl:phir app ne mujh par zyada bolne ka ilzam lagaya..app.. 😡
S:ok.m sorry...n i leave..app jo hogaya..jus 4gt abt it...anyways..m sujal..sujal garewal..
n he extend his hand..bt no response frm the grl..
S:arey janab..ab aise bhi kya narazgi..app hath tu mila he sakhte hain.. 😊
she jus shakes his hand..
S:waise..itne rookhe phike tarikey se hath milna kuch acha nahee laga..
grl:dekhye bas..now ur gtg over.. 😡
S:arey madam..over tu abhi hum huey nahee.. 😉 warna..agar mein ho jata..waise mooka..bhi acha tha... 😉
grl:u.. 😡
S:ok..m jus kidding..waise..whts ur sweet name..lovely lady..
grl doesn't respond..
S:bata dijye..main app ke naam ke posters nahee lagwaon ga.. 😆
grl:its none of ur business..jus gt out..n thanx 4 help..now u can go..
S:waise bare bairukhi se pesh arahe hain app..app ke jaga koi ajur hotii..tu shayad..
grl:dekhye mr..
S:sujal..
grl:jo bhi hain..app.jo abhi huwa..tht was a mere misunderstanding..i understood..now u can leave..n i don thnk there iz anyneed of intro..so plz..go now.n don waist my time..n urs 2.. 😡
S:ok as u wish..magar han harat rahegi waise..app ka haseen naam jane ke.. 😉
grl gives no response..n then we see..sujal iz abt 2leave..when kripa enters n says..
Kr:woh kashish..tum tayar hogaye..sab neeche agayae hain?
S:oh..tu app ka naam kashish hai..? 😃 (je han tu tht grl was our kasish..kaise lge phele mulaqat..)
K:do u ahv any prob..jus go.. 😡
Kr:app..?
S:hi..kripa je m sujal..
Kr:oh..sujal..sujal garewal..anjali bhabhi bro..
S:yah ur rite..nice 2 meet u..waise who r u..n this beautiful lady..ur frnd.. 😊
Kr:oh m kripa..as u know my name..n m kavya bhayas cousin frm london..n shez my frnd kashish..even shez frm london..n we both came frm london yesterday 2 attend kavya bhayas marriage..
n kripa was sayng more when kashish interupts..
K:kripa..aisa kar na neeche janey ke bajaye..in mr ko hum dono ka sara biodata..yahen beth kar suna de.. 😡
sujal smile s @ this..
Kr:woh tu main..aise he..
S:its ok..mujhe lagta hai..apki in frnd ko mere presencea chi nahe lag rahe so i will leave..
Kr:nahe woh kashish tu aise he.. 😕
(looks..wid gussa 2wards kashish..bt kashish ignores)
S:no its ok..m leaving..
n then he iz abt 2 leave..n reaches the door..n then suddenly..turn bck..n says ..
S:waise..kashish..pyara naam hai..suits u...jus lik u..woh kya hai..kashish mein kashish.. 😃
n leaves..
kashish iz in full anger.. 😡
kr:kya yaar kya handsom larka tha..u no charu ne mujhe bataya..kitne larkyaan is pe marte hai..
K:marte my foot..dekh loon gi ise bhi..kashish se panga... 😡
Kr:chor yaar..neeche chalte hain..
K:no ways...isey tu ab mein batoongi..samjhta kya hai khud ko fliter no 1.. 😡
Kr:arey nahee yeh aisa nahee hai..
K:tujhe kia hai.bare waqalaat kar rahe hai.iske..tu mere dost hai yah iske.
Kr:teri hoon..par.. 😕
K:par war kuch nahe..comon lets go down now..is ke chakar mein humlate hogaye phele he..
n then both come downstairs..
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ok guyz this was our lovely jodis 1st eva meetng..the party is still gng...so do read...n comment how it was..
nxt part:one more fight of our jodii..so wait n watch...



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Posted: 19 years ago
#54
😆 mast part yaaar.........first meeting was fab!!!!! heheheheehe lol luvd sujal shoutin at kashish 2 shut up n let him speak 😆 absolutely great!!!!!! continue sooon 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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too good , too cute , too sweet.. 😳 i tho loved the parts...they totally rocked... 👏
👏 please continue soon..me will be waiting for the next part eagerly.. 😃
Edited by sun_423 - 19 years ago
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this part was just wonderful. 👏
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thanks 2 all 4 comentng n liking... 😊

Part-8:
Now the party iz still going on..n evryone iz enjoyng..we see both kripa n kashish comng down..
sujal sees when kashish comng down frm the stairs, he gts stunned wid his beauty..
ok now we wil see wht kashish's wearng..



n even kshish looked in the direction where sujal was..
now see how r handsom sujal iz lookng...



when kashish..sees him..she gts..more n more angry..n turns her face in another direction.. 😡
n we see sujal smiling @ kashish's behaviour..n then kavya comes 2wards kripa n kashish n introduces them 2 the garewals..
all ppl..r scttered in the hall..we see sujal standng by the bar n iz drinking a cocktail..when kashish comes 4 takng a glass of drink..shez jus standing near sujal..
S:hi kashish ji..whts up?
K:none of ur business.. 😡
S:u dono it might be.. 😉
K:oh leave..it..look mr i don wana talk 2 u..so jus leave me alone.. 😡
S:m nt any mr.i told u m sujal..call me by name..i wana see how it sounds when u call me.. 😉
K:u..r disgustng.. 😡
S:thank u.. 😊
K:why ur after me..wht i hav done..?
S:even i myself dono..thts why i wna talk 2 u..2 gt 2 know.. 😉
K:tum..plz..mein yahan shadi enjoy karne aye hoon mujhe karne do..
S:kisne rooka hai tumhein..mein ne tu nahe..
K:ok..mere ghalti jo tumhare moo lage..m leavng.. 😡
S:sure leave..konsa mein ne app ko roka hai..hum woh nahe jo kise ko rookain..hum tu woh hain..jin ko dekh ke log ruk jayein.
kashish doesn't answer n jus stares @ him angrily.. 😡 n turns 2 leave..when she is abt 2 move ahead..bt she cant..she feels like sumone..iz holding her palu..
she thnks it sujal..n hez doing such thng 2 irritate her...n she says widout turning back..
K:leave my sarii
S:app ne mujh se kuch kaha miss..
K:mein ne kaha..mera palu choro sujal.. 😡
S:kya choron... 😕
K:enuf..buhat hogaya..upar jo bhi howa woh tu misunderstandng thi..ab tum jan boojh kar.. 😡
S:par mein ne kiya kya..
K:kya kiya tum..
S:app..pata nahee kya bol rahein hain..
kashish ne abhi tak peeche mur ke dekha nahee hai..aur woh turn kiya baghir sujal pe chelaye ja rahe hai..
K:had hote hai batameeze..tum anjali bhabhi ke bhai hotu is ka matlab yeh nahee ke tum kuch bhi karuge..n i wont say 2 anyone..choro.. 😡
S:aisa karye app jo apni.yeh non-stop bolti hai..is ko stop pe laye..i know mushkil hai..magar plz..zara dair chup hoye..aur peeche morye..aur phir mujh pe koi ilzam lagaye..
n kashish then turns bck n see..sujal iz nt holdng her palu..bt its stuck..wid a chair..n she feels embaressed..n her eyes r down..n shez abt 2 say sumthng..
S:ab tasali hogaye..bena kuch janey..bena kuch dekhe..app mujh par ilzam lagaye ja rahein thein..samjhte kya hain app khud ko..mein ne zara sa mazak kya kar liya..app tu..
wht u thnk of ur self miss kashish..aur sujal garewal..koi gera para insaan nahaee ha..i know h 2 respect women..aur mein ne ajj tak..kisi se koi batamezi nahee ki aur app.. 😡
jo mu mein aya bole chale gaye..woh tu mein ne app ka lehaz kiya..kavya bhaya ke meman samaj ke..aur app mera lihaz..haha..karne chalein thi..heloo madam..4 ur kind information..na mujhe shok hai..larkyoun se flirt karne ka... 😡
aur na he mere addat hai..i was jus kidding wid u..coz u were our guest..so wana jus giv company..par woh mere ghalti thi..company tu door..mein apki aj ke baad shakal bhi dekhna pasand an karon.. 😡
h cheap ur...n h cheap can u thnk..abt sumone..yahi sab app ke london mein sekahte hain ke kise par..be bunyad ilzaam lagoo..tu its so good..ke mein kabhi london mein nahe raha..warna mein bhi app jaise hota..
now kashish has tears in her eyes.. 😭 bt sujal iz still v angry..coz kashish has hurt his ego..
K:m sorry..woh mujhe laga..is liye mera matlab aisa nahee tha..woh.. 😭
sujal cuts in b/w
S:apna sorry apney pass rakhye..app ke han hota hoga aisa..kisi ke izzat ke dhajyan ura ke sorry keh dena..humare yahan nahee hota.. 😡
n leaves widout hearng another word frm kashish..
kashish feels v bad.n wana say sorry bt...she cant find sujal in the whole party..n she iz upset..so jus goes in her room n iz cryng.. 😭
sujal iz nowhere in the party 2..n we see him standing on the rock @ beach(they liv in mumbai..in india..sorry nt mention b4)
hez v angry..n thnks..2 himself..
jab usey phele bar dekh tu aisa laga jaise..koi taza gulab khila hu...jaise raat ke baad din aya ho..jaise chandni ka aks ho..us ka woh gussa...woh mere tang karne par..uljh jana..uske har ada..jaisey..mujh mein sama gaye thi..
phir jab..woh neeche aye ..us ka woh muskurata chera..us ke woh hansi..manoo..sareey gham ke badal hata rahe ho..us ka mujhe phir dekhna..aur phir wohi gussa..jaise mere jaan he tu liye ja rahee thi woh sath..
mujhe pata nahee kya howa tha..dil karta usey dekhe jaoon..baat karoon us se..tabhi tu usey bar bar tang karta..
us ka drink leney bar par ana..na janey kyu dil kiya.us sephir kuch kahoon..uar yuheen usey tang karta raha..
kabhi nahee hui merey sath aise..kisi bhi larki ke liye mein ne aisa nahee soocha..na aj tak kise ke saath aisa kiya..
kashish mein janey kia baat thi..ke mein apne app ko rok he na paya..woh sujal jis ke ik hansi ke liya..jis se ik mulaqat ke liye..jis se chand ghari ki baat ke liye..larkyan..tarapti hain..aur woh..kisi kodekhta nahe..
kyoun..akhir kyoun..kashish..ke kashish ka dewana hogaya..
haan kashish.sirf un chand lamhoon mein jo mere tumhare liye halat hui..jaise mein tarpa tumhare ik jhalak ke liye..tumhe pata chal jata tu janey kia hota..
magar kyun..kyun kia tum ne aisa.mujh pe woh ilzam..phele..tu ik ghalat fehmi thi..magar...jo ilzam tum ne mujh pe lagaya..mein nahee bhool sakta usey..
nahee..sujal garewal..sabh seh sakta hi..par apney upar aisa be bunyaad ilzaam...kabhi nahee..
kyun bhagwaan..merey saath he kyoun..abhi tu mein us ka dewana hua tha..abhi usey mujhe chana tha.useke pyar me pagal hona tha..par..tu ne tu mujhe us sey phele he sab khatam kar diya..
ye acha nahee kiya tum ne kashish...mein kya karoon..kyun mujhe woh phir bhi yaad arahe hai..kyu nahee bhool pa raha hoon usey..
n jus then the song in background comes..


Pehla Pehla Pyar Hai
Pehli Pehli Baar Hai
Jaan Ke Bhi Anjaana
Kaisa Mera Yaar Hai..

Pehla Pehla Pyar Hai
Pehli Pehli Baar Hai
Jaan Ke Bhi Anjaana
Kaisa Mera Yaar Hai..

Uski Nazar, Palkon Ki Chilman Se Mujhe Dekhti, Uski Nazar(rememberng the time when she frst saw sujal..n the expressions whch was on kashishs face)
Uski Haya, Apni Hi Chaahat Ka Raaz Kholti, Uski Haya
Chhup Ke Kare Jo Wafa, Aisa Mera Yaar Hai
Pehla Pehla Pyar Hai ...


Pehla Pehla Pyar Hai
Pehli Pehli Baar Hai
Jaan Ke Bhi Anjaana
Kaisa Mera Yaar Hai..


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ok ppl..this was the end of this part..hop u lik it..do comments plz..
nxt part:kya sujal..kashsih..ke laraye khatam hogi..kya woh mileinge..kya unhein ik dosrey se pyar hoga..?..4 answer of all these keep readng..


Edited by **-**Guriya**-* - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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great part
hope sujal forgives kashish and they become friends
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Posted: 19 years ago
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omg dat was superb.....sujals dialogue 👏 mindblowing!!!!!! fab part 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#60
gr8
i hope they become friends next part n i know kashish has feeling for Sujal 😉 😉 i hope she understand him n his pain n love him so much 😃

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