Ek He Khwahish...SK...Pt-82(Pg:123)Imp Note Pg:124 - Page 2

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Posted: 18 years ago
#11
👏 very god intro 4 the characters!!!!! continue sooon 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#12
tooooooooo coolllllllllllllll........ 👏
please continue soon.. 😃
Edited by sun_423 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thnx iqbalneha1, rachandeep..n sun_423...4 liking it..i will jus post the frst part..in abt half n hour..so chk it out.... 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part-1:
Beauty of morning is showering its blessings evrywhere...we see a beautiful house frm outside...inside the house a bedroom iz shown..we see a person entering the room..then we move toward the bed..n somone iz lyng on it...the face of the person coming in the room iz shown..n thts none other than our sweet veena...
she comes close to the bed..n wakes up the person lyng on bed..
Veena-V
V: Utho beta subah hogaye hai..u will be late 4 ur college..utho..
n the person sleepng iz none other than Akshat as aki the gr8..
Akshat-A
A:mom plz..soone dain..abhi thorii dair phele tu suya tha..aur app.. 🥱
V:Tu kisne kaha tha..ke pura din awaragardi karte rahoo..aur raat ko parhne beth jayoo..waise tumhe bare jaldi..parhaye ka khayal aya.
A:Oh mom..app bhi na..ek exam he tu hai..parh liya hai main ne..app pareshan na hoo..
V: han han..pareshan na..hoon..tum tu yeh kehdete hoon..aur jawab result ke waqt kise dena hoga ..tumhare papa..ko.. 😡
A: App hai na mere sweet..lovley mama.. 😉
V: han han makhan lagao..mujhe..chalo ab jalde karo..aur han..isey bhi utha do..dair hojayge phir..
A: Mom mein washroom ja raha hoon..app he utha dijye na..
V: Mein ne kaha na..utha do..bas.. 😡
A: Ok mom...
n then we see veena leaving the room..n somone frm the otherside of bed wakes up..
A: acha huwa..tu uth gaya..
Person-P
P: haan uth tu kab ka gaya tha..bas kisi cheez ka intezar kar raha tha 😭
A: tu janta tu hai..ke mom..phir bhi
P:Han janta hoon..par kya karoon..har rooz..dil umeed lagata hai..aur har rooz he..kash aey kash.. 😭
N then we sees the persons face n hez none other than the handsom n charming sujal...
Sujal-S
S:Kya aisa kabhi nahee hosakta akshat..ke woh mujh se bhi aisa he pyar karey jaise ke woh tum se karte hain..waise he mujhe uthain..jaise woh roz tujhe uthathe hain... 😭 😭 😭
jus when akshat was abt 2 say somthng we see a beautiful grl entring the room..n shez none other than Anjali...
Anjali-An
An: Come..on sujal wht if mama ..doesn't wake u up..why i m 4...don u lik ur sis..2 wake u up in morning..wid her sweet smile.. 😊
S: Ofcourse anjali didi i luv when u woke me up in morning so nicely..its jus..i had this one wish..n..
An: Ok jus leave it up..u guys gona gt late 4 college n its ur exam day..comon..or u will miss...it..
S..n A together:Yah dids..we r jus comng down..
Anjali leaves the room n then both akshat n sujal get up n gt ready 2 go 4 college.

Now we look whts happening @ the dining table downstairs..we see n old lady sitting their alone..waiting 4 evryone 2 come..n then a person wearing a suit comes downstairs..n greets her..n both these characters r dadi..frm KYPH...n other one is lalit..
lalit-L n Dadi-D
L: Namaste mama..app yahan akele kya kar raheen ahi..
D:bas beta..tum sab bachoon ka intezzar...
L:Chalein app nashta shuru karein sab bas ate he honge..
D: acha
n then we see both the handsom sons of lalit coming down frm the stairs..both r lookng really hot..
A: Namaste dadi..hi dad..whts up..
D:jeta reh bache..aur yeh kya..tera baap hai..chal is ko bhi namaste kar..yeh kya hi..why laga rakhi hai..subah subah..
A:dadi app bhi na.. 😆
S: Namaste dadi..namste dad..
L:Jeetey rahoo beta..
n sujal waiting 4 dadis reply..bt she ignores him..n call 4 veena..
D:Arey veena kahan reh gaye..sab intezar kar rahe hain..
Lalit looks @ sujal..n sees his face expression..he quite a looks upset.. 😒 so he starts conversing wid him..
L:Arey han sujal beta..howz ur prepration 4 the paper.
S:Gr8 dad..
L:good i want u 2 score good marks as eva..n then u hav 2 join me in bussiness..so i wan my son 2 be the bst,,is nalik akshat.. 😡 se tu mujhe koi umeed he nahe..
A:comon dad abhi tu life enjoy karne ka time hai..aur app..
D:aur kya bacha bilkul thek keh raha hai.
n the veen a comes n evryone starts eating breakfast n after tht both akshat n sujal leave 4 college..
Both A n S: Bye Dad, Mom..n dadi..
V:Bye Akshat aur beta dehan se paper dena..chal ab ja..
D:han beta Baghwan tujhe kamyabi de..
n sujal iz waiting 4 response frm both 2 her..😒.. bt in vain n then lalit says..
L:Ok sujal akshat jayoo bhi tum dono ko dair hojayege..bst of luck..
n then they both leave..
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Ok so this was the frst part hop u all liked it..do reply..
Nxt part: Kashish entry...so wait n watch...
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Posted: 18 years ago
#15
very nice... 👏
but bechara sujal.. 😭 that veena & dadii... 😡
please post the next part soon..me waiting for kashish's entry... 😃
Edited by sun_423 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hi nice beginning. Par sujal bechara 😭
Pls continue soon waiting for the next part
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Posted: 18 years ago
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nice part pls cont soon... 👏
i wonder y they hate sujal 😭 ... 😡
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thank u so much sun_423,golu_1677...n tanasha1993..4 liking the frst part...n abt y they hate sujal..guyz..if i will tell the reason..then y will u read my fanfic..han..anyways...m posting now the second part so enjoy...
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 2:
After both of the guys left 4 college..we see anjali comng downstairs n iz in a hurry when veena stops her n ask
V:Anjali beta itni jaldi kahan janey ke hai,nashta tu karte jao.
An:nahi mama i m getting late..abhi kavya mera bahir wait kar raha hai..agar zara se bhi dair ki,tu woh janab gusa ho jayenge..aur app tu jante hain na us ke guse ko.
V:han par..aisa karo us ko andar bula lo..aur tum nashta kar ke jao..waise ja kahan rahe ho tum log.
An:mom woh actually hum log shopping pe ja rahe hain
V:ik tu tumahari yeh shopping pata nahee kab khatam hoge 😡 ..beta shadi mein ab sirf ik hafta reh gaya hai..aur tumhne.. 😡
An:mom..bas aj promise sab khatam karloongi..app pareshan na hoon..ok ab mein chalee..warna...kavya.. 🤢
V:Arey beta sunu tu..
bt anjali runs outside..n veena returns 2 the dinning table..where lalit is siting already
V:pata nahee yeh larki kab sudhre gi,ab shadi mein itna kam samey reh gaya hai..aur is ke shopping..app ne bigara hai issey..ap jab paraye ghar jaygi tu apko pata lage ga.. 😡
L:Ofho veena tum aise he pareshan hote ho..bache hai..aur konsa paraya ghar..bhai..nanda family walee apne he tu hain..aur kavya ko tu hum ache tarah jante hain..phir fikar kaise... 😃
Nanda family n garewal r bussiness partners,anjali meet kavya @ one of the parties n they both fell in luv.. 😳 😳 n as their parents gt 2 know abt it..they decide them 2 gt married..so there was no so called zamane ke dewar b/w both..n there marraige iz due nxt week..n so they r all busy in preprations..
V:app bhi na..
L:tum yeh sab choro aur woh jo pandit je ne pooja ka kaha hai..kal ka..us ke tayari karo..
V:arey han app ne acha yaad dilaya mujhe abhi sab mehmano ko bhi call karna hai..
L:acha chalo phir mein gaya..tum yeh sab sambahlo..
V:chalein theek hai..waise app zara jaldi ajayega sham ko...
L:arey wah kya baat hai..aj itney saloon baad..tum ne mujhe jaldi aney ka kaha..kya irade hain.. 😉
V:app bhi na bas.. 😳 apni umar dekhye..bache ithne bare hogaye aur app.. 😳
L:arey bhai bhude hoon humare dushman...hum tu abhi bhi jawan hain.. 😆
V:acha bas bas..mein ne tu is liye kaha tha..ke hum khud kavya beta ke ghar pooja ka neuta dene jayenge..aur app na.. 😳
L:acha theek hai mein jaldi ajaon ga...
ok now here lalit goes 4 office n veena starts prepration 4 the pooja wid dadis help..
now lets move our story 2 uk..n see whts hidden there...
we see a beautiful garden wid lovely flowers n a swing in b/w them..n a girl sitting on the swing..the wind blowing n so iz her hair..shez wearing a beautiful pajma kameez..pink in color...her body is shown n then moving slightly upwards we see..shez talking on the phone..n iz v hapy..bt we cant see her face..coz of the wind her face is covered wid her hair..n then she moves away strands of hair frm her face..n we see a cute n innocent grls face..n the grl iz none other than kashish...now lets see who shez talking 2
Kashish-K kripa-Kr
k:hey hi krips.. 😃 hru..?
kr:m f9 doing good.. 😃 wht u say..?
K:nothng..dear jus enjoyng the weather..u tell whts up..?
Kr:nothng yaar..jus as usual..whts ur plan 4 2nite?
K:hmm..nothn yaar..gona spent @ home..a bit fleeng sleepy? 🥱
Kr:why wht happen? 😲
K:nothng yaar tht stupid akash 😡 he called again in the nite..n was jus..irritating me..so nt slept well.
Kr:oh he..i thinks..he kind of luvs u..
K:oh ..plz..don say tht...i don lik him @ all..n anyways..wht can i do..if he does..i don lik him..hes jus a flirt 😡 😡 😡 i tell..u..
Kr:ho sakta hai..
K:ho sakta hai..nahee..he iz..n jus mein us ko ghas nahee dalte tu..hez sayng tht crap..anyway leave him..i don wana talk abt him.. 😡
Kr:ok...yaar..arey han woh yaad aya.kya tu ne uncle se humre us plan ke bare mein baat ke
K:nahee yar..didn't gt the time..don worry i will talk soon..
Kr:jalde karna..warna..u know..i don wana..make this plan flop..
K:ahan..u don worry..i will.👍🏼
Kr:ok then meet u 2morrow in college..byez
K:ok bye
n then we see kashish thnking how 2 talk 2 his dad abt the plan n wid a superb idea.. 😃 ..she runs inside the house....
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ok so thiz was kashish entry..how u liked it..do tell me..
nxt part:pooja @ garewals...n nanda familys intro...
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Posted: 18 years ago
#20
very nice...you write very well..keep up the good work... 👏
please post the next part soon..me will be waiting for it eagerly.. 😃 & waise you can call me surya instead of sun_423... 😃
Edited by sun_423 - 18 years ago

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