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319125

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Posted: 11 years ago

#101

Thank u thank u thank u thank u for i cnt stop thanking u all for such a grt compilation
@chaptr 5
mitra drling
datz a lovly twist
lv u fr dis
aww...U just swooshed ur fingers on keyboard
nd voila!
My my what u presentd is an amazing twist
so happy fr them

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319125

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Posted: 11 years ago

#102

@chapter 1a nd b
amazing kick start
wat an idea nidhi ji
rocking compilation
@rads di
so much warmth nd such an amazing tale initiated
superb!

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Poulami

@Sunshine_Ami

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#103

LOVELY... 👏 so nicely written... 😆 smart RANDHIR...😳 ❤️

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Priya Das

@TheDreamyKid

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Posted: 11 years ago

#104

Such brilliance!! Bravo to all the writers. Loved it Anu, Mitra :D

I'm up next! Ack! :O xP
Might be a li'l late. Please, no chappals! I abhor my exams too xP

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TheAphrodite

@TheAphrodite

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: Gunseerat
@chapter 1a nd b
amazing kick start
wat an idea nidhi ji
rocking compilation
@rads di
so much warmth nd such an amazing tale initiated
superb!

Thank you so much ! :D
Gunseerat , itni , Nidhi ji ? Meine khud ki nahi ki 😆 You can call me Nidhi :D
Thanks for reading :)

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sparky

@sparkling_gems

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Posted: 11 years ago

#106

Wowww another great part. It was brilliant Mitra.

Initially I was wondering whether I was reading a fiction or description of a painting... so Parth is helping Randhir to win Sanyukta back... but what exactly worked is Randhir's letter. The letter was good. Btw this part reminds me of the movie Ishq.

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arshifan2012

@arshifan2012

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Posted: 11 years ago

#107

ur kidding me right? I mean , if u call this a disaster then i beg u , give me a hurricane! This was really one of the best part of the story! Hayye...that letter! Bhai , i mean behen log , aap log sab mahan writers ho! I bow down my head! This ff is rocking , trust me! Mujhe nahi pata jab mera baari phirse ayega tabh main kya karungi because with each and every update my expectations from this ff is increasing! I just wish ki i dont let anyone down coz i personally didnt like my update! Anyways , mitra that was beautiful and i felt as if everything was actually happening in front of my eyes! Beautiful! 😃

Edited by arshifan2012 - 11 years ago

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rabia297

@rabia297

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Posted: 11 years ago

#108

superbbb...uh guys r going osm...dat letter took my heart..

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WhisperOfDreams

@WhisperOfDreams

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Posted: 11 years ago

#109

unresed for Rads Zoya and Arushi on page 6

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WhisperOfDreams

@WhisperOfDreams

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Posted: 11 years ago

#110

RES for anuradha? aka federized2210

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Unresed!!

ohmygod...this was a roller-coaster ride of emotions...!!

and each of the emotions u have portrayed in this part is a new piece of art..!!

i loved the way u rite..i guess i am in love with many writers style..!!🤣 🤣 cant help it can i!!!

afterall i am an innocent and lazy reader..!! i remember ur on going SS before i strt on ur part..i would like to say im sry...u take pains to PM me but i jzz don find enough time to comment... or when i read i am juzz lazy to do so..but the story seems to go on track and im liking it..!!

coming back..!! the emotions of Sanyu..gal like mentioned... u made me feel her sadness...pain of losing her first love...like ppl say i guess 1st love is unforgettable...!! the way u actually enlightened my brains with what the hell was their past..i must thanku..now it can rest in peace..!! 🤣 🤣 i had cum with many possibles turns but this wasnt one of it...!!!

i donno if should be pissed coz i hate vidhushi and poor randhir kissed her..yucky :P i guess vidhushi hatred speakin..!! nyways it was a pleasure reading such a beautifully written update...there is nothin more i love then emotional out flow..and that is exactly what u gave me..!!

regards

safrena

Edited by forevermine - 11 years ago