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WhisperOfDreams

@WhisperOfDreams

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Posted: 11 years ago

#111

RES for Mitra

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Unresed!!

firstly Mitra i am so sry...!! i had actually written the whole thing n den network error came and was lazy and sleepy to write the same thing again..!!! and all ur OSes r beautiful i jzz not finding time with my boards... i am half the time onlyn via my cell and not lappy!! so becomes impossible to unres..!!!

the Part 5 that u wrote..gave me the chills that i was looking forward to...!!! the beautiful of the entire scenario was so well written!! gosh everything i start to luv ur writing a little more..!!

like i always say u have a remarkable command over ur language..and u know i love reading a perfectly written FF!! and ur part jzz added the fuel to my lyking gosh..!! the way u came up with a patch was damn brilliant..!! something which i hadnt expected i tot "okay, lets see how much long is this ff going to go" i mean all my favourite writers coming together to writer this FF and making it this brilliant..!! the whole Sahil turns Rapist...Randhir the savior... he not only saved her but took her back to her room and put her to bed where he instead of talking jus placed a letter explaining everything...as he knew Sanyu wouldnt listen to the whole truth if he spoke or would hurt her even more...the letter was so adorably written... i luved it..their was so much intensity kinda in ur OS that it juzz made me fall in love with this tale a lil more..!!!

beautifully penned down chica...i loved it...!!!! 😆😆

regards

safrena

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Edited by forevermine - 11 years ago

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Arushi Kotecha

@PrussianBlue

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Posted: 11 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: forevermine
RES for Arushi!!
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hey!!
i really do noe nythn about u..or ur before writing..!!
but i am glad this FF gave me a reason to love the way u write..!!
i am not a romantic bluff atleast in stories...
bt the flow of ur story made me like this update so much!!
gosh u have noidea...!!
it was the burnt memories of the past which both couldnt forgt..!!
the remembrance of the two and the hurt they are facing was so clearly expressed!!
ur damn good with the way u write the tale...!!! although gve me a bollywood senario!! but well written definately!!
regards
safrena

Hey Safreena! Thank you SO much for your kind comment! Motivates writers to give their stories the best shot :D

I guess Bollywood invariably makes its way into our lives and writing :P

Hope you can read more of my work. Would love your comments on those :D

Thank you very much again :D

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WhisperOfDreams

@WhisperOfDreams

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: ArushiKotecha

Hey Safreena! Thank you SO much for your kind comment! Motivates writers to give their stories the best shot :D
I guess Bollywood invariably makes its way into our lives and writing :P

Hope you can read more of my work. Would love your comments on those :D

Thank you very much again :D

ur welcome!!! :) i am glad it motivates ppl!!! :P hahaha yea in most bollywood does may its way!! but for me its hollywood more of!! hahaahahha!!! 🤣 🤣 🤣

ohh i would love to read...comment..i am a lazy ass i comment i donno usually late...nyways do Link me to ur work i mite as well give it a try!! 😆😆

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WhisperOfDreams

@WhisperOfDreams

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Posted: 11 years ago

#114

unresed on page 15 for anuradha!!

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Mitra

@MitraAvinash

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Posted: 11 years ago

#115

Originally posted by: federized2210
Mitra, mitra , mitra...oh my god! I have this huge smile plastered on my face right now!!! When I had updated my part I was seriously wondering on how the 'redemption' of randhir would work out...and here u are with ur update, making it look so simple!!!!U r amazing, u knw that right??? Wow!!!
*hugs*
And more hugs :p

Anu! 😳

I knew the moment I saw that you were the one to write before me, that I was going to have a tough time. Girl, WHY in God's name did you write so well?!! I had to dig into my brains for an idea after that! Redemption karte karte mera tragedy ho jaata 😆 But this is so much FUN! I mean, when we write alone, we have a set style of writing. This one has so many different styles to it! I feel like we're a gang already! Group hug!!!

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Mitra

@MitraAvinash

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Posted: 11 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: sparkling_gems
Wowww another great part. It was brilliant Mitra.

Initially I was wondering whether I was reading a fiction or description of a painting... so Parth is helping Randhir to win Sanyukta back... but what exactly worked is Randhir's letter. The letter was good. Btw this part reminds me of the movie Ishq.

Bwahahaha! I was just baiting time till I got an idea to continue re. I suck at painting so I'm going to treasure this as a compliment 😆 I have no clue HOW it reminded you of Ishq though *runs to watch the movie again*😉

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Anuradha

@federized2210

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: forevermine
RES for anuradha? aka federized2210
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Unresed!!
ohmygod...this was aroller-coaster ride of emotions...!!
and each of the emotions u have portrayed in this part is a new piece of art..!!
i loved the way u rite..i guess i am in love with many writers style..!!🤣 🤣 cant help it can i!!!
afterall i am an innocent and lazy reader..!! i remember ur on going SS before i strt on ur part..i would like to say im sry...u take pains to PM me but i jzz don find enough time to comment... or when i read i am juzz lazy to do so..but the story seems to go on track and im liking it..!!
coming back..!! the emotions of Sanyu..gal like mentioned... u made me feel her sadness...pain of losing her first love...like ppl say i guess 1st love isunforgettable...!! the way u actually enlightened my brains with what the hell was their past..i must thanku..now it can rest in peace..!! 🤣 🤣 i had cum with many possibles turns but this wasnt one of it...!!!
i donno if should be pissed coz i hate vidhushi and poor randhir kissed her..yucky :P i guess vidhushi hatred speakin..!! nyways it was a pleasure reading such a beautifully written update...there is nothin more i love then emotional out flow..and that is exactly what u gave me..!!
regards
safrena

Safreena,
Thank u so much!!
U have ushered me with so much compliments *blush*
This combined fic thingy is so much fun!!! I really enjoyed writing this one :)
I always see ur likes in my other fics, so dnt worry if u haven commented :)
Love, Anuradha.

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Anuradha

@federized2210

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: MitraAvinash

</div>Anu! 😳
<div>I knew the moment I saw that you were the one to write before me, that I was going to have a tough time. Girl, WHY in God's name did you write so well?!! I had to dig into my brains for an idea after that! Redemption karte karte mera tragedy ho jaata 😆But this is so much FUN! I mean, when we write alone, we have a set style of writing. This one has so many different styles to it! I feel like we're a gang already! Group hug!!!

Thank u thank u!
Compliments from u make me all happy and inspired! Because I know that u r downright one of the best authors on IF!
I loved this combo fic idea!
Nidhi, rads, zoya, arushi are such great writers that I had to write this one a bit more seriously than I normally write my other fics...and u followed with what style!!
*group hug*
Love, Anu.

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kaveriw2008

@kaveriw2008

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#119

Wow wow wow girls...u r just amazing writer...

Each one took me to sandhir land and successfully make me lost in it...

The way sahil act with sanyu and randhir took her to room and that letter...everything was like just happen front of me...the happy sanyu is back...

I m just waiting for sandhir meeting...soon...

Hey why u not sending pm ...we may missed it...