ArShi FF: Tending The Scorched #1 : Thread 2 added(24.07.14)

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Diya Ganguly

@Careless_Artist

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#181

Emotions of Arshi individually was written Awesomely as always...
To loose someone who was very dear to us infront our eyes was too much to hold from breakdown completely...
Khushi's strong character was attractive...
Their new journey of Happiness, sorrow, down fall or raising up starts from now..
They trust each other immensely is not needed to prove..
Hope they together have a great future...

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ShiningHearts

@ShiningHearts

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Posted: 11 years ago

#182

Amazing story!!!

u hav penned dwn so brilliantly👏👏

n d way u hav shown arnav's emotions, turmoil was superb... he was gng thru frm so much pain n nw shashi too is no more to whom arnav saw as a father figure... n shashi gvn Khushi's responsibility to arnav...

loved hw arnav was supporting n handling Khushi thru out d cremation ceremony...

bt what happened 3yrs bck dat arnav cnt sleep n wat hppn to anjali 1yr bck is she misunderstood her husband?😕

Atul is a stress buster to Arnav n der bond is so cute...

Arnav is attracted to Khushi n she too feel comfortable with him...

waiting fr der journey to start n hw dis story will unfold...

update soon n thanx fr d pm...

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RK612

@RK612

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#183

Nice update. Thanks for pm

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ArshiAsya

@Alai123

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#184

Awesome update

Felt bad that Khushi's father died however happy that she is now with Arnav who can take care of her.

Thanks for the pm😉

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Sravya/Sravs

@...Champ...

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#185

I'm sorry!!!

It's been so late that I'm commenting now after you updated. Trust me when I say I'm curious on reading this FF's updates more and more. I checked your PM on the day it came, but I was out of station and couldn't read or comment in peace. 😭

And I just now read it and yaar, must say, I'm deeply falling in love with this FF. The thing I always loved in your FF's is that the way you explain the feelings of the protagonist's. Be it Arnav or Khushi, you just do a perfect job in telling out their emotions. I just love reading every single detail of their feelings. 👏

And seeing Shashi on death bed was shocking really. I mean it was unexpected obviously, so the shocking. Arnav and Khushi's meeting, it's kind of so convincing and different. It happened like it is bound to happen, so real. I simply loved the meet just like a next-door meet of Arshi. 👍🏼

And Khushi, she's truly portrayed here as a very strong women. The way she handled was in such a mature way that only made me read in guffaw. That's so mature of her. ⭐️

I'm just loving the FF the way it's going. Waiting for more and more now. Ek jaldi update mil sakti hain kya??? 😳

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Pooja

@poojasidd123

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#186

very interesting ff...will sure bookmark it..

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henamani

@henamani

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#187

so he would shift to dehli with her or is already living in dehli. what is it that is holding anjali captive? urghhh too many questions but im sure u would answer them all :)

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katj

@katj

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#188

So much caring and loving update..
Thanks for PM

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Megha. â¤

@-Megha

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#189

This story is makin its root into my heart frm nw only !! & Idk what'll happn to me as the story progresses! <'3

Arnav khushi's saviour & guardian !! ^_^
His always calm & composed attitude gives me thrills !! *shudders*
& ILoveee the wayy he takes care of khushi at evry passing moment ! ^__^

Now i only hope he'z able to bring khushi out of her shell !! :(
That girl has her whole life ahead of her & she needs to live evry bit of it !! :(

Waitingg to read moreee ...