ArShi FF: Tending The Scorched #1 : Thread 2 added(24.07.14) - Page 76

4...

Well written on payal... and her friendship with khushi
and their life...
.. she knows about arnav.. and a inspiration for payal..

Now i know why payal hates akash...

HP... looking very to meet payal...

well akash mess up selfish idiot

5...

khushi bring out all kind alien emo in him...
the he is waiting for...
and he is scared and confuse
khushi behavior around arnav
make him
confuse..

she can read him like a book... and her trust on
him... just shock after shock

arnav falling for her... after all ... she design only for him

6...

Riya 😡 😡 😡

yuck!!!

hope is khushi and payal is going to set things right

7..

arnav changing emotions...
arnav knows akash pain...
akash knows it but he is coward to admit...

Arnav think he dont deserve her...
and their know each other since kids..

arnav care...

khushi can see arnav fighting his emotions...

8...

arnav changes...
payal and khushi attitude towards arnav surprise him
shock.. now he wonder ... is there hidden meaning
in all this..
this girls spin him around..

So rahul is a another pillar to arnav..

Payal and khushi wants to bring out arnav...
nice..

rahul looking out for arnav... and the family
beautiful..

wow.. arnav explain about khushi...

and rahual guessing right about khushi...
perfect plan

rahul did perfectly...

arnav is just to confuse soul...

Read first two chapters.

Superb story
do pm me next time

Goddd...what type of story u r writing... i m only till 8th chapter and there are so many emotions and feelings rolling off of each character...i am feeling so overwhelmed that i had to stop and write this ...to acknowledge that what an incredible job u have done... amazing is a small word... great story...rest once i am done with this journey of your Arnav and Khushi and their loved ones...