ArShi FF: Tending The Scorched #1 : Thread 2 added(24.07.14)

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Arshix144

@Arshix144

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Posted: 11 years ago

#201

Whoa C, that was quite a chapter! Khushi and her emotions had me all overwhelmed, how can someone love someone so much and that too from such a tender age.

I hope Arnav is not as oblivious as he may come across because the kind of love Khushi has for him is very rare.

Loved the way you expressed Khushi's feelings, it kind of surprised me and made me glad for her at the same time. Arnav has been her rock and looks like they are made for eachother that way. While he is there for her, she has spent all her life to become his. She has done everything for him and in the hopes of one day becoming his equal partner in life.

Loved the flashback portion of their childhood and how Arnav helped Khushi and praised her for being strong which inturn motivated her to be strong and independent all her life.

Loved everything about this chapter and I am already looking forward to the next one! ;)

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1987Trisha

@1987Trisha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#202

loved it...

Does Arnav has any idea about Khushi's feelings... i guess no..

but i wish he will also fall in love with her very soon😉😉

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Varsha Dutt

@varsha2KD

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#203

wow... awesome update...

Khushi is madly and completely in love with Arnav... Does he have any idea about this??? 😲

Can't wait for the next update... thanks for the PM 😃

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Aisha

@Aisha1996

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Posted: 11 years ago

#204

Awesome update 👏👏
Loved it ⭐️

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madhu1210

@madhu1210

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Posted: 11 years ago

#205

superb update!!

oh my my khushi is head over heal in love with Arnav.. wow!! she learnt so many things because Arnav like it her carrier too..⭐️

so much in love with him from past 17 yrs...

Arnav was man of few words but the way he spoke to Khushi and promise her shows he is also deeply in love with her.. is it??

hope to see next update soon

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mahrusweety

@mahrusweety

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Posted: 11 years ago

#206

beautifull

amazing

update

loved it

the past flashback were soo cute and lovely

khushi becomes perfect according to arnav's taste and likes

wooo😳 sooo cute 😊

they were apart but khushi knows everything about him and converted herself according

their love is soo pure and bessfull as they r with eachother 😊

khushi and her father were there for arnav at his hard tym

and OMG aman is shashi's man and khushi's source to know about arnav😆 😉 awesome

u expressed khushi's feeling and emotions soo well and beautifully that it over whelmed my heart 😉

loved reading the update

and waiting anxiously for next part

TUESDAY should come sooon😆

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rosaline

@rosalinesibs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#207

beautiful update..loved it...so our khushi is already in love wid arnav...now its time 4 arnav 2 fall in luv wid khushi...love d way he is taking care of her...cant wait 2 read more..

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littlemissstar

@littlemissstar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#208

Superb..
Beautifully written..
Eagerly waiting to knw whts in store fr them..
😉
Thanx fr pm

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#209

Nice update.. You've penned down their past beautifully.. Khushi falling for him, the admiration she has for him from all those years and she knowing that he is the one for her...