ArShi FF: Tending The Scorched #1 : Thread 2 added(24.07.14)

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Happytwinkle

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Posted: 11 years ago

#161

wonderful parts

loved them

thanks for the pm

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jazsidhu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#162

Wonderfull...
amazing...
luv it...
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shalini_s

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Posted: 11 years ago

#163

is Khushi going to be in his home??? good update..

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Mayvs2013

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Posted: 11 years ago

#164

lets wait for further ...to understand

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Arshix144

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Posted: 11 years ago

#165

C what can I say, chapter two was narrated incredibly well. The content, the emotions, the characters, their interactions everything was laid out in the most beautiful manner ever.

Losing a loved one is the most horrifying experience ever and to have someone with you to support you and be there for you is exactly what you need at that point in time. Though Arnav and Khushi were strangers, they already connected with each other on so many levels and I am almost confident that Shashi knew Arnav and Khushi would be great for each other and with each other that's why he brought them together knowing that they would be good together. He may not have asked to get married but indirectly he did bring them together and I cannot wait to see how this beautiful newly formed friendship in their lowest points will change into a romantic one! :=)

Apprecite the Pm C! 🤗

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divya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#166

feeling bad fr arhi...

a new begining ahead

nice updt

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classyandsassy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#167

Beautiful chapter Chaverah ... & yet i again U made me fall in love with Arnav & Khushi of ur story ❤️

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Param

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Posted: 11 years ago

#168

awesome update !!! very nice written... loved it..

thanks for pm 😊

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rk2127

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Posted: 11 years ago

#169

The update was awesome.

Their was pain of loosing the loved one, grief, undying emptiness but at the same time their was relief of having someone by your side, someone trusted and loved by your own father as his son. Someone you can trust without thinking.

Khushi turn out to be a strong and mature person so far with all the incident you narrated in this chapter through Arnav. Her fight to keep her compose, her fight to jot break down in front of strangers, her fight to give back to that nosy a noxious lady.

I really liked what Khushi told that lady about Arnav and her father. I also liked how Arnav and Khushi talked easily, understood easily without speaking. And the way Khushi said that Arnav made her feel homely and warm and for Arnav he started feeling alive.

This update was amazing with Arnav accepting his attracting, respect and admiration for Khushi along with a new beginning for himself as well.

P.S. Does Arnav also stays in Delhi? Does Arnav's family knows of Shashi Gupta, his importance in Arnav's life?