Mohabbat Zindagi Hai(A Kabhi FF) part 1-40 T1 link to T2 in index - Page 28

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Posted: 11 years ago
di.. 👏 I l thoroughly lovd it... zoya asad's pa... 🤣 di zoya asad ki pa banegi.. fight hona hi hai ... innko lade bagair pyaar karna ata hai kya... mujhe to yehi asad pasand hai ... pehele gussa karega phir zoya ko apni cute tarikese manayega... ye Zoe begum humi ko maturely samjhati hai ... lek in khud ke mamleme bilkul immature hai .. pagal ladrki.. 😆 😆 omg m sure vaseena n firoj gonna create mu betwn asyaan... 😡 di really awesome update... 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey , Hi,

u know what read all in one go

just loved it

make asad clear all the misunderstanding of zoya soon

and i dont want this asad's misunderstanding of zoyaan

its really iritating Cry

need more asya scenes Clap Wink

and dont want zoya's abbu track here its really idiot in daily episodes

i just hate that and its boring

yeh asya ko tho jagda karna daily routine bangaya

jagda nai kiya tho neend hi nahi aati , inka kuch karo yaar

i am really impressed with asya game 👏

and ur ff is really interesting Smile

pls dont bring zoyaan track

and dont create mis understanding between asya 😭


pls dont get abt my suggestions Confused

and once again ur ff is lovely Tongue


and update next part soon

pm me for next update ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
i have one doubt

what does this MCP mean in this line -🤔

zoya - but you know what Mr. Khan aap ek MCP hai aur hamesha rahenge ?
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aishw09

i have one doubt

what does this MCP mean in this line -🤔

zoya - but you know what Mr. Khan aap ek MCP hai aur hamesha rahenge ?


Male chauvanistic pig


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aishw09

Hey , Hi,

u know what read all in one go

just loved it

make asad clear all the misunderstanding of zoya soon

and i dont want this asad's misunderstanding of zoyaan

its really iritating Cry

need more asya scenes Clap Wink

and dont want zoya's abbu track here its really idiot in daily episodes

i just hate that and its boring

yeh asya ko tho jagda karna daily routine bangaya

jagda nai kiya tho neend hi nahi aati , inka kuch karo yaar

i am really impressed with asya game 👏

and ur ff is really interesting Smile

pls dont bring zoyaan track

and dont create mis understanding between asya 😭


pls dont get abt my suggestions Confused

and once again ur ff is lovely Tongue


and update next part soon

pm me for next update ...


Glad you like it
I think you didnt read my synopsis properly its only the original cast retained KSG SJ VM KK and the other characters there are no new characters in my ff, And also I had said that this ff is for those kabhi fans who were betrayed and denied a closure. And hence the story is also the same. Abbu track is there, Zoyaan is there, Asya , Ayra is there, I dont intent to give Nikhan, Najran etc, I have attempted to show Zoya Nikhat independent. Becoz like me many wanted to see it. This ff is my frustration against the show makers and hence bound to have things which Kabhi fans wanted to see.

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Posted: 11 years ago
AWESOME I LIKED THIS PART...I ALWAYS LIKE ZOYA'S GUSSA...


ZOYA ASAD'S SECRETARY.😆..


AB MAZA AAYEGA...😳


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anura7281


Glad you like it
I think you didnt read my synopsis properly its only the original cast retained KSG SJ VM KK and the other characters there are no new characters in my ff, And also I had said that this ff is for those kabhi fans who were betrayed and denied a closure. And hence the story is also the same. Abbu track is there, Zoyaan is there, Asya , Ayra is there, I dont intent to give Nikhan, Najran etc, I have attempted to show Zoya Nikhat independent. Becoz like me many wanted to see it. This ff is my frustration against the show makers and hence bound to have things which Kabhi fans wanted to see.

Continue reading



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nilusoni thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
plz pm me for next part
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Great update, sorry late on the review, had a busy day.. Zoya is not going to change, she reacts first and learns later. Asad though we understand has difficulty expressing his feelings, needs to learn to pick his words carefully. Zoya should come with a sign that reads handle with caution lol.
Anyway can't wait to see Asya moments, I'm happy how Ayaan and Humeira handle the engagement talk, very mature unlike the show.
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved the update
zoya moves out and she asks appi and jeju to come
she then leaves without them.asad spill his heart andthey learn
he loves zoya.yay plan in place to get asya together
loved the bedroom convo and dare loved how he cornered her
but will he keep it cool dont look that way from the precap
humi handled ayaan well and nikhat was great too
haseena will never quit
continue soon

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