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anura7281

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Posted: 11 years ago

This is my first fan fiction. And it contains all that what I wanted to see in Qubool Hai instead of what they gave us. Please everybody will help me and encourage me to write this. I am a very bad writer.

The story takes off from where Zoyas visa issue starts. Till then its same as in the show. Tanveer has entered KV and is there as a guest now. Dont worry she will have no much role. I love asya very much. i am keeping the story limited to our original cast only. KSG SJ VM KK and others. All relations are same as like that of in the show. No Haider, No Farhaan, No Sameera, I am taking some liberties please bear with me .

Hope you will like it. So the synopsis is like this

Zoya has received a mail from visa office and now she is very upset. She thinks how to extent her visa and just lost in thoughts. She quickly calls her Jiju and asks advice and he advices her to take work permit by travelling back to NYC and again revisting India with a valid work permit. She doesnt take Asads help here as their relation has not yet started off. It will gradually only progress in my story. She travels to NYC back and comes to India again to join a job in Delhi. At first she is alone and due to some issues her jiju and appi decide to relocate to Delhi permanently for the sake of Zoya. Meanwhile Asad starts missing Zoya like anything since he admitted some feelingsfor her after Mangalpur. So Asad takes the help of Ayan in this case and voices out what he feels. Asad doesnt know that Zoya is in Delhi he thinks she has returned to NYC as Zoya never shared that plans with him. Ayan advices him that if fate wants them to be together it will happen so. Hence Asad acts accordingly but could not forget Zoya. After some days he gets a business proposal from States and the foreign client wants to have a meeting with him at NYC. Asad in hope of meeting Zoya, unconsciously agrees for it and travels to States. But he gets information after visting the US embassy for taking their address that they have permanently shifted to Delhi. Asad remembers Ayan words of fate wanting them to be together again. He sadly returns to Bhopal and gets engaged in his business as usual, he already rejected that states proposal as it was not feasible for him. Meanwhile Zoya had joined as Delhi based software firm which had clients all over India. And she was doing immensely well that she got promoted to Senior Associate in the firm. In the meantime, Zoya has also started to feel for Asad absence. Some kind of vacuum is there around her and she is not able to identify it. Tanveer as usual hides her pregnancy from others till date. But gets caught one day still she manages to pull off for further more days by saying some excuses. Zoyas gets a chance to go to Bhopal in the veil of business meeting and she readily agrees to it in hope of meeting Dilshad and Najma. But Asad she doubts, keeping her previous encounters, whether he will like her to meet again. Unknown to both of them, of their unsaid feelings, they both end up together again and are ready for a roller coaster ride together. Their love story unleashes after that. It later becomes one of the bedtime fairy tales later told by them to their children by themselves. Other family characters will have their own importance and relevance in this story and will have side tracks also as the story progresses.

Index:

Synopsis: Page 1

Part 1 - Page 1

Part 2 - page 2

Part 3- page 3

Part 4 - page 4

Part 5 - Page 5

Part 6 - Page 6

Part 7 - Page 7

Part 8 - Page 8

Authors Note+ spoilers - Page 9

Part 9 -Page 11

Part 10 - Page 15

Part 11 - Page 19

Part 12 and 13 - Page 21

Part 14 - Page 23

Part 15 - Page 26

Part 16 - Page 27

Part 17 18 - page 30

Part 19 20 - Page 33 + spoilers ahead

Part 21 - Page 36

part 22 - page 39

part 23 - page 42

part 24 - pagge 44

PROMO 1 - page 50

part 25 - page 51

part 26 - page 53 + promo 2

part 27 -page 56 + spoilers ahead

part 28 - page 58+ promo 3 +AN

part 29 - page 61

part 30- page 65 ( those who want pms of this ff pls buddy me as its really difficult to select and send pms)

part 31 - page 69

part 32 - page 73

part 33 -page 76

part 34 - page 79

part 35 - page 82

part 36 -page 85

part 37 -page 88 + promo 4

part 38 - page 95

Authors Note -Page 96

part 39 - page 99

part 40 - page 106

link to thread 2

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/105064214

Edited by anura7281 - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago

Continue soon anu di its really good
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anura7281

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: princeegoyal
Continue soon anu di its really good
pari

i always wanted an independent zoya b4 marriage, but they never gave,

I never wanted her to be dependent on asad for each and everything unless they hv accepted thier feelings. I always wanted her appi and jiju as her family with her. But they did not show. I wanted Asad to miss Zoya to admit his love but not like what they showed in Ajmer track. I wanted a couple of hits and misses before they see again free of tanveer this time. So i penned this

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..Drishya..

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Posted: 11 years ago

anu...its really really good...jaldi continue kar... 😊

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Vashti

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Posted: 11 years ago

Bravo !! You did well my dear .. It was great and love how u gave your inner feelings which is always a plus ..
Do continue 👍🏼

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Belle Collet

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Posted: 11 years ago

Hey thank you for writing this, just came across it while browsing this forum. Great start. I can finally get closure that the show didn't do 😭

Update when you can

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anura7281

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Posted: 11 years ago

Here goes the Ist part

Khan Mansion

It was early morning and sun rays had started to hit through the white curtains of Zoyas room and finally landed on her eye lids making her to pull the blanket over her face. She was a late getter in the morning and relished the morning moments of a sweet sleep. Her Mobile alerted her about an e mail message. She sprang up from her bed and was rubbing her eyes and took the mobile to check the mail. The next second she went screaming " YA ALLAH" Whats wrong with this visa depatment now? Mera extension cancel kardiya. Now what should I do, I need to find my father, how will I do it? I have only one week left. Withing one week my visa expires and If I dont leave, I will be deported. Uff Meri Kismat Hi Kharab hai." Saying this she went to washroom and got freshned up. Soon she was at the dining table but Asad was already there reading a newspaper. Zoya came and just wished everyone "Aslam Aliakkum" to which Najma wished her in return. She was hell confused what to do with her visa problem. She sat at the table and started playing with the food and unconsciously making noises with the culteries. This irritated Asad to the core and he started rubbing his temple. He was just put the newspaper down and said "Miss Farooki when will you start eating without this noise and with some table manners" To which Zoya opened her mouth to say her famous line. Thats it. Suddenly she thought why to get into a verbal spat with him ? After all its only one week and she has to leave. She really didnt want to make her so called bad relation with Asad worser before she leaves. So she just shut up and completed her b'fast and went to her room hurriedly. Asad as usual was surprised that why she didnt retort back. He was hell in confusion that something was upsetting her but since he was avoiding her right after the Mangalpur Trip he didnt want to encounter her and face any embarassing situation for himself.

Asad was lost in thoughts,when Dilshad just cleard her throat and said What Happened Asad? Any problem? to which Asad just said Nothing its official thats it. Najma left for college and Dishad left for market. Now Asad was starting to go ot office that he just passed by zoyas room to hear the last line of her Skype talk with her Jiju. He heard her say that she was returning to States and that she has already got the booked tickets. Now she is really happy that she is doing it."

ZOYA POV in her room

As soon as she entered her room zoya switched on her laptop and decided to have a Skype Chat with her Jiju and tell him about the visa problem. Anwar came online and asked Zoya you look visibly upset What happaned ? Tell me. Then Zoya explained about the visa matter. TO which Anwar just said Travel Back to US, get a work permit to India and then go back there to have a valid and longer stay. As simple as that. Actually I will now speak with one of my friends here and will try to arrange a work permit for you soon. By that time you come back you will have a ready job. Is it okay and fine your dear? To which Zoya gave a dimpled smile and said Thanks Jiju U r the BEST. And ended the conversation that she has got the tickets booked and will travel to states withing one week which was overheard by Asad while passing.

Asad now went to office but thoughout the driving time he was thinking about Zoyas travelling back to US and her happy state. Asad reached his office and was in his cabin. That Prasad knocked and said Sir you have a meeting coming up withing 15 mins. Asad was really worried and just said Cancel it. I am not feeling well. Prasad said Okay and left.

Asad was lost in thoughts and his thoughts took him back to Mangalpur again. Where he found her under a dust of 6 feet. or so and got her back. She was not breathing and he was trying to give CPR and a little bit of artificial breathing too though Asad was hesitant at first. It was his first intimate step towards Zoya. When he found after giving CPR also she is not responding then he just leaned over her lips and parted it with his hands and started breathing in her mouth so that she starts breathing again. And it worked. She started coughing loudly and Asad withdrew himself just at the nick of the time to avoid Zoya seeing him in that intimate postition. Asad thought how her lips were soft and plumpy. Asad thoughts were interpretted by the ringing of his phone and it was DILSHAD. He answered and said He is coming to home soon. And said her not to get panicked and wait for him as he knew this already.

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Precap: Dilshad gets to know about Zoyas plan of travelling back and wants to stop her. And Asad says Zoya is happy at her decision and they should let go and not interfere afterall she is only a guest. Zoya finally bids goodbye to everyone. Dilshad forces Asad to leave her at Airport. Asad somehow manages to say no but evetnually ends up leaving her at airport. Zoya goes back