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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely read! 😃


Independent Zoya! šŸ‘

Mischievous Asad! 😳

And I hate separation! šŸ’” 😭

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: swapno

Loved it!!

Awesome Anu di.
So she gives him a cheque..
Now this is becoming more interesting...😊


yup she have him a cheque
Lets see what he does with it and what she has told him to do with the cheque.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-

it's getting awesome day by day...
indeed the best gift was from asad...that family photo...
thank god...that tannu mu cleared...
n zoya's ranting is non-stop but enjoyable!!
precap is interesting...
continue soon


best gift from asad did u mean pizza or photo?
Pizza was never ordered by him that was by tannu zoya misunderstood it
He never intended to give that photo frame that also was given by tannu only
He actually wanted to give her earrings back thats it

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Prashni

Lovely read! 😃



Independent Zoya! šŸ‘

Mischievous Asad! 😳

And I hate separation! šŸ’” 😭


Zoya is independent here I always wanted the same in the show. Like how many months
she has been living in Asad House without any point. At first she was guest okay, the she coudl
have found a job and made that into PG till her relation with Asad is made sure. But alas! Sigh
after mangalpur Asad has some feelings for her but has not been able to identify it
as his love for her which he will be knowing ater her departure only
There is no separation my dear becoz they have not got together in the first place.
Ys Asad was mischievious becoz he did not want openly to offer a airport drop
for Zoya as of now so he thought of tagging himseld along with her

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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
Hers Part 4
Asad was just wonderstruck at her behavior. She just finsihed her talk and did not let him say anything not even a small farewell speech. Suddenly something clicked before his eyes and boom it was her again. Before Asad could come out of the reverie, Zoya just whispered close to his ears. "Apke Liye Apke Kamre Mein Maine Kuch Choda hai. Please search under your pillow Mr, Khan."Hope you like it if not also please dont throw it away since I like it very much. Asad called "Zoya"huskily and Zoya just stopped hearing that. He just came near to her and said. Apna Khayal Rakhiye ga. Aur musibat se door rahiyega. Kyunki mein jo paas nahin hoon. New York pohunche ke Baad ek baar phone kardijiye hum sab ki thassali ke liye. Ammi pareshan hogi. I hope you have a wonderful and safe journey. Goodbye Miss Farooki. Zoya was listeneing to him silently and did not even look back and she didnt have the courage to do so. She just said letter Padlijiyega. And Asad said Ji. She went into the terminal and Asad watched her from there till she became thinner and thinner in his vision. He just couldnt say anything his eyes were filled with tears because of some wierd feeling. He was feeling the same vibes as from Mangalpur. That she is going away from him. Still he stood ther for almost 15 mins without even shaking. A cars horn brought him back to reality. He sat back in the cab and told him to drop him to his office He forgot about the coke spilling and also the ear ring too. He got out of the cab and told him to bill in the name of his company and walked right into his cabin. He was wearing a light blue suit so the cokes stain was visible. Prasad came inside to brief about todays schedule that what he saw was he was busy in staring an envelope and his stained suit. He cleared his throat and said Sir May I. Asad came out of the thoughts and said Yes. come in. Prasad was again looking with a wierd look in his eyes Asad asked Anything wrong Prasad about me? Vo apke kapde... Asad asked Kya kua hai mere kapdo ko? Prasad said. vo Kharab hain, I mean somthing is there, u clothes are spoiled some stain over there, he was going on stammering that Asad realised about what he was hinting. He just said Yah coke spilled. Please send somebody to my house and get a new pair for me. You know I have many meetings today. To which Prasad said Ys sir hojayaga.
and he quickly briefed about todays schedule to him. In the meanwhile talking to Prasad Asad just opned his office drawer to keep the envelope. He busied himself with the office work puposely to avoid zoya in his thoughts which worked to an extent. Later after the office hours, Asad was not feeling to go to home as now there is one person missing. Although she was a guest and had to go some day still he could not accept the fact that from todays onwards she will not be there, her lame excuses, her silly fights with him, her shayaris, her smile, her laughter and more over she herself. Asad did not know what to call theses feelings. But yes he was missing her. With that he unwillingly drove to home and settled in his room. He just took a shower and just came out bare chested and saw Tanveer standing there drooling over him. He just turned back and took the towel and out around his shoulders and cleared his throats. Tanveer came back from lala land and was just standing there not knowing what to say.

Asad quickly took a kurta and pyjama from his cupboard and went inside the bathroom to change. And he came out again he saw her standing still there. He just reprimanded her Zoya ke jaise karne se Zoya nai bansakti tum. And didnt know where this words came from. He was referring to Zoyas barging in without knocking but Tanveer construed about drooling over his body. She just said Jammy who meine aaj khud apke pasand ke dinner banaya tha tho socha ki apko Khane pe bulaon.. Asad said but iss tarah se bina knock kiye ana and that too jab mein washroom se aaraha tha its not good for girls like you and I dont like it too. Please leave. Tannu said Jammy Gussa mat ho, mein jaa rahi hoon. She just walked out with a fuming face and said Agar yeh Zoya hoti tho dono ab tak kamre khade hoke is baat pe lad rahe hote, aur muje said Please leave. Not fair Jammy. Muje jaldi hi kuch karna padega. and walked away thinking how to put her plan of action into motion.

Asad was rewinding the things that had happened in the morning. Unknown to him those thoughts brought a smile to his lips. He just brushed off the thoughts and went for dinner. Tanveer was waiting, so was Dilshad and Najma. Dilshad said Zoya had called said she has reached Mumbai and has shifted to a Airport Hotel also. Asad was like why she didnt call him inspite of telling that to her personally but again he recollected Ammi parishan hogi. He just convinced him that its becoz of Dilshad she called. Dilshad purposely seeing her sons condition asked. Asad what happened to your car today? And how did you go to office? Some body came from your office to collect an extra pair of clothes? What happned ? Any problem hua kya? Seeing this much questions Asad could not take it anymore and Said Ammi who bas tyres puncture hua tha and mein zoya ke cab mein chalagaya apne office. Raste mein kapda kharab hogaya tha aur kuch nahi bas. He lied to her and didnt say that he accompanied zoya to airport. Dilshad could see his son hiding something from her but she let it go and did not press if further as it will irritate him more. Tanveer who was watching all this just sweetly poured in .Zoya nahi hai tho kitni Shaanti hai ghar mein Haina Jammy. But Asad who was already missing her, just got up and gave an angry glare and walked to his room frustrated and banged the door.
He sat in his bed with his hands on the hair. Sleep was far away from him. He was recollecting about the incidents and remembered about Zoya saying something is under his pillow. He just started serching beneath first under the wrong pillow and then he pulled over the duvet and the shifted his gaze to the other side of the bed. He yanked that pillow in a hurry and just put his hands beneath and pullled out something. He just looked at it and sat silently. THUD. A noise came. It was Ayan coming through the window. Asad just shot his head up and greeted Ayan Kya Hua Ayan aaj bhai ki yaad kaise ayi itni dino ke baad. Ayan just hugged his bro and just crushed him. Asad asked Kya hua? Ayan said who Nikhat ka rishta Imran ke saath tay tho hogaya hai par vo Haseena bi ko kaise jhelegi? Kitni negative aurat hai vo? Hamesha kahin na kahi aag lag rahi hoti hai? Muje Nikhat ke bare main soch kar bohot bura lagta hai. I think hum kuch jaldbaazi kar rahe hai. Asad replied Ayan just be brave abhi ke liye sab teek hai na. If anything goes wrong Nikhat ke do bhai hai sir tum nahi ho Samjhe and wacked Ayan head. Ayan saw the lion mask in Asads hands and asked yeh kya hai? But then he got reminded of RAshid becoz of this and tried to change the subject matter aur kaha ki yeh Zoya ne diya hai. Ayan said Wow Mona Darling ne. Asad got his eyebrows twisted and said Ayan behave yourself. She is not your Darling. Ayan asked To kya bhaijaan apki darling hai? Asad could say anything at what Ayan just said now. He stammered fumbled and was at loss of words. Ayan Mona kahan hai. Asad sais she had left to US. Ayan asked Rabbert mile bagair. Asad explained all that happened as Ayan was only his solace in this lonliness. Ayan said toh Mona ne kaha hai ki she likes this mask and you should not thow it away. That means she likes Lion and Lion means Asad. So Mona likes Asad. Ayan was ranting like anything. Asad sadi Shut up Ayan aisa kuch nahi hai mere aur uske beech mein.
Ayan said bhaijjan aap kitna kosish karlo par sach to yehi hai ki ap Mona ko miss kar rahe hain bohot zyaada hain miss kar rahe hain varna iss tarah uski diye mask ko pakad kar raat ko aise nahin baite hote. Asad said shayad tum teekh ho.Par ab vo yahan nahi hain. So chapter is closed. Ayan said no bhaijaan chapter is not closed but chapter will begin now. Agar kismat ne chaha tho ap dono dubara milenge. Tab kya aap mere baat par yakeen hoga apko? Agar phir mil gaye tho Ayan ko zarroor yaad karna Okay mein jaa raha hoon bye shabba khair bhaijaan He just jumped off the window and disappeared into the dark. Asad was sitting in the room rewinding Ayans words. He carassed the Lion mask and kept it safely in the bed drawer. Not becoz it was given by Rashid but it was liked and returned by Zoya and she wanted him to keep it. He then remembered that alongwith the letter there was a cheque too but then Becoz of Prasad coming he just kept that in the drawer. He thought of reading that letter and seeing the cheque tomorrow morning as soon as he reaches his office. With this sleep took over him.

Precap: Dilshad recieves Zoyas call that she had safely reached. Asad checks his drawer for the envelope but finds that is missing to his dismay. Cab driver comes to office to give the ear ring box. Asad in anger becoz of missing envelope of Zoya. Nikhat is again degraded by Hasina bi and co and Ayan is pissed off. Tanveer fakely confronts Asad about a marriage proposal for him by Dishad and in that process tries to get close to him. Asad being Asad doesnt fall for it. Tanveer is pissed.

PS: I know I had missed previous precap some moments here sorry but the story needed this scenes right now and hene i put it in next part. Please bear with me becoz next part wont be zoya update, only her call will be there. I had to give other characters also their screenspace. So everybodt please be patient. Zoya will come back soon Dont worry. There are many twists to come. Tanveer will be in next 2-3 updates after which she has no role I promise.


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Posted: 11 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: anura7281


Zoya is independent here I always wanted the same in the show. Like how many months
she has been living in Asad House without any point. At first she was guest okay, the she coudl
have found a job and made that into PG till her relation with Asad is made sure. But alas! Sigh
after mangalpur Asad has some feelings for her but has not been able to identify it
as his love for her which he will be knowing ater her departure only
There is no separation my dear becoz they have not got together in the first place.
Ys Asad was mischievious becoz he did not want openly to offer a airport drop
for Zoya as of now so he thought of tagging himseld along with her


šŸ˜†

I know they weren't in a relationship.

Just love AsYa fluff! 😳

I guess the distance would lead to realization, acceptance and appreciation of each others importance and impact in their respective lives! šŸ˜‰


Edited by Prashni - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Its such a lovely update Anu...Thanks for the PM...Luv uā¤ļø
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Posted: 11 years ago
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sorry anu di...I had missed previous updates cos I don't have d link...promise di it won't happen again.., wow di you are a wonderful writer... lovely update di...I luv it when dat tannu ki bacchi reprimanded by asad...m eagerly waiting for next update...pls pm me when u will update...luv u ...
Edited by mooumi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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cute update Di !!!
and best part was Mona likes Asad !! lol...
typical asya...can't name their feelings !!
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i have a request...i know tannu darling is not here for long...but just make her stay miserable!! i hate her...

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