14 Days || A Kriyaansh Short Story|| Updated on page 10

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akanksha

@sharif_lafungi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Sorry jaldi me hu...
Nice prologue...sbke pov...nd ur execution is brilliant..loved it

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Akanksha

@Effacious

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

i loved the concepttt

14 daysss...

it sounds awesomeee to meee... 😃

plzz PM me whenever you update!! 😃

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Mahnaz Gul

@NoMoreUsing

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Okay are both of you akanksha different people... ^^^^

Edited by CarelessDreamer - 11 years ago

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alex754

@alex754

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Ahhh kriya is too good
Loved the update
I liked the way of ur writing
I am even liking swayam character also
Reyaansh is way different

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don girls

@don girls

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#45

love the update...!

can't wait to see him get rejected for the first time...!

hope you make it as fun as you did with the shivam part...!

super excited for the next update... please update it soon

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#46

it was superb and great prologue... do continue soon and pm me

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kuhu bhatta

@kuhu_Arsha

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#47

intrstng prologue👍🏼

age v jaldi update de do :D

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MANAVI KHATTER

@dazzlingmanavi

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#48

i need the update seriously abhi

what kriya did was fabulous

bechara shivam...ha ha ha

boys convo was fun

mereko bhi yakeen nhi ho rha ki swayam aur rey related hai...itna difference

i repeat my line mujhe update chahiye right now...please *puppy eyes*

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Neeraj

@nature2

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#49

n problem start here

update soon

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Aditi M.

@reyaditi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#50

hello...maine padha...maine padha...maine padha...
nyc update..
i lovd it wn she pours all d soda over shivam...i waz lyk 🤣 ...lol...
shez so gonna put rey in dat rejection...rite??
i soo knw it...
m loving d sensible swayam...
i wish he so gives rey some piece of hiz mind...

i waz juz thinkin dat diz rey is soo opposite to d show wala rey...haha...buh i love him too...
hawt n sexy...as usual...

wanna c what she sayz to him...wn hez gonna ask hr out in d canteen...do write soon...cya...

Edited by reyaditi - 11 years ago