14 Days || A Kriyaansh Short Story|| Updated on page 10 - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
#21
cs are all good... very superb and fantastic trailer... do continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
i luv dis story :D

trailer mast hai :D

lolzzz shivam har story me villain kyn hota hai🤣
update soon plz😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
interesting
awesome trailer
and nice cs
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
Thanks for the PM..😊
So, when I read your work Just another one, I really wished that you would continue it.. But well, if not that, you have a whole ff to write..!!
I loved the concept.. it's so realistic, it happens a lot..But am looking forward to how things turn out, what will Rey do in 14days, what will be Kriya's next step? what will Shivam do..? what will Swayam do to save his cousin or Sharon about her crush..and Randhir, how is he, who is he? does he have a crush on Kriya..?
Yes, I have a loads of queries and am waiting eagerly for them to get unfold..!😊
Do write...
that's all, with love, Anki..😆

Edited by anki_22 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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bakwas??
it was fab...loved it! 😊 <3
pllzzz continue!!! plzz plzz
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesum trailor...
da story is sooo interesting...
do continue...
pls update sooon and pm me...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome trailer...!
love the concept ...!
can't wait for the first part...!
please PM me when you have updated, thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
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really nice
everything is dramatic yet superb...i am a drama queen...i love drama
cs was nice
and trailer was really great
the 14 days thing is really fab
please update soon...pretty please
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Quick replies:

reyaditi- kya karu Shivam ke alavah koi hai hi nahi villain banane ko...

lovelylavender- you really like this user name don't you?
Well thank u but don't expect me to update it regularly, I may get a block well anyways thank u...

kreya204- you really think he will change??

--shukti-- thank u means a lot.

Kuhu_arsha- aur koi optio. Bhi to nai hai.

Anki_22- randhir doesnt really have a major role and well Just another one, I wanted it to be unique in its own way... :)

dazzlingmanavi- I get dramatic myself too...

And to the others who wanted me to update... Aaj ke epi ek baad update karungi.

Thank u all of u for commenting... Means a lot.

And yes whoever wants pms add this account to you buddy list. :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Prologue- part 1

I was talking with my friends casually, well our casual talks usually comprised of girls, one night stands, last nights and well as everyone should've guessed s**. Suddenly Vicky asked about what did I do last night. "You really don't know or are you trying to act innocent" I said to him with a smug smile on my face. Last night was another night of pleasures like most of the others.


"Which one?" Nil questioned. I really don't remember what was her name, " uh I think her name was K...kr".

I felt a tap on my shoulder, I groaned and turned around and saw the brown eyed girl from last night, what was her name... God why can't I remember her name. Well not my concern at least I remember she is from last night.

"Hi Rey" She said trying to flirt, miserably failing. "You do remember me right? I'm Kriti" she said. Oh that's her name. "Well last night was great and u was hoping that you could come over tonight" she said clinging on me and adding a wink at the end. Really that is the best she can do, I feel like barfing.

"I don't think that's possible" I said trying to get out of her grip. Oh that worked, she left me as soon as she heard that. God, oxygen I missed you.

"What" she said, surprised, bringing me back to my senses. She was teary eyed. Ugh, I hate girls at times like these, only at times like these.

"Look preeti" I started. "It's Kriti" She wailed. "Yes, Kriti I know you are a great girl and you deserve a great guy, but you know what you did with me, it was a one time thing, I wanted to have some fun, you offered and I gladly accepted" I told her with the infamous Reyaansh Singhania smirk. She looked at me for a moment, is she going to slap me. But to my fortune, she turned on her heels and walked away.

I sighed a sigh of relief and frustration "Girls, they're annoying." I said. "You can't keep them off, can you?" Vicky questioned. I smirked and replied "What can I do, they just can't resist the Reyaansh Singhania charm." We all were laughing, when Amar said "Is that Shivam?"

We looked at that side and saw Shivam trying to hit on a girl, trying to. "He is so dead, that girl's gonna shut him down, embarrassingly." said Swayam approaching us.

"And how do you know that?" I asked confused. Shivam has a great record in girls and no one has really rejected him.

"Because that is Kriya Ghai" Swayam replied. This confused me more, is she the daughter of the president or worse principal. "So?" was all that came out if my mouth.

"And I thought Reyaansh Singhania knows about every girl, dude haven't you heard, she's the new hot topic and as her records say she doesn't like to have your kind of fun" he said sarcastically.

This girl is interesting, but I'm damn sure she is gonna fall in shivam's trap.

---kriya---

"So how about it, you and me, tonight" this crazy guy kept trying to sleep with me. He is so dead. I took out a soda can from the dispenser and started shaking it.

"You and me, tonight huh?" I asked making sure if he wants to do this. He started getting closer "Yes. We can have a lot of fun" he said, winking. This is getting over board.

"What kind if fun are we talking about" I asked, acting innocent. "Any kind" he said smirking, poor guy must've thought I fell in his trap.

"The kind in which you get wet" I asked. His eyes glittered and he replied "yes". God is the limit. I opened the can and spilled the soda all over him. "W*F" he exclaimed. "You are right, it is fun!" I said, smiling falsely and walked away.

---Rey---

Shivam walked over to us, with his head hanging low. We couldn't control and started laughing like maniacs. I could see he was embarrassed but he masked it with attitude and asked us to "Shut up." I don't know what came over but I burst out after that.

"REJECTED" Nil cried and we burst out. We burst out laughing again and he being him caught Bharat by his collar "I said shut up!" He yelled at us. This got us silent. I got up and glared at him "Don't get carried away and remember who the leader is." I stated in a stern voice, placing my palm on his shoulder. "I don't forget things so easily Rey." He said as he jerked my arm off and the memories flooded back.

"Well, you don't know if she rejected me" he smiled and changed the topic. "Dude you came over with soda all over you, it's no rocket science" Swayam stated the obvious. "So what, she rejects everyone in college" Shivam said, holding back the frustration.

"Well, that's because, she hasn't met me" I smirked, it irritated him. "What? Do you really think, you can do better than me Mr. Singhania."

"You even consider that as a question, it's a fact dude. Ask the girls in college they will choose me over you Mr. Dutta." I said with a smile. "Okay then, ask her out. Let's see if she will agree"he said smirking. "Fine I will" I replied.

Swayam looked concerned, but before I could ask he said "she doesn't do these things Rey." Ugh! Don't tell me he is starting this again "I'm telling you, she can't resist me."

"Sure" he said sarcastically. I hate it when something like this happens why can't he be like me "whatever" I replied.

--Few hours later--

---Rey---

Shivam, Vicky, Nil and me were checking oh girls in the canteen when Swayam entered "What are you people doing?" He asked, already knowing the answer. "Checking out girls" I replied. He rolled his eyes.

"Dude why can't you not be a bore and do it with us." I said. "Because, unlike you guys, I would like to have a serious relationship." He said. "I can't believe you guys are related" said Vicky.

"I know" I said as Swayam walked away.

---kriya---

I was casually walking through the college corridors when I felt a tug at my arm. This person is so not gonna like what is gonna happen. I turned around and found Randhir standing there.

"Hey, it's you." I said with a sigh of relief."Did you want someone else Miss. Ghai." He said cheekily.

"Stop that" I said irritated as he laughed and continued "Well I saw what happened this morning." And burst out.

Really, this guy needs manners. But who am I kidding he has been the same since 7 years hasn't he. "Apparently, everyone has." I said as seriously as I could. But soon after the both if us burst out.

I tried hard to stop laughing, gradually succeeding. "I'm going to the canteen wanna join in?" He asked hopeful.

"Stop making such a helpless face, leave I'm right behind. I need to get some stuff." I agreed and left, walking further.

---Rey---

"There she is." I heard Shivam say as I was busy checking out girls. I looked at him and gave a confused look.

"Kriya" he muttered and I shot my head towards that direction, and the world came to a stop.

Just kidding!!

But yeah I have to agree she is damn hot man!

"Are you gonna just drool or even reach out to her." Shivam's words broke my focus on kriya's body. "Of course I am and thanks buddy it would be great to have dome fun with her. She is hot!!" I said as I buckled up.

"Have fun getting rejected" he said mocking me and I glared at him and replied looking at all of my friends "Watch and learn boys." And headed towards her.

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Done and yes if you guys want pms for next updates add me to ur buddy list.

Sorry kriyaansh nai tha par prologue Mein kriyaansh nai mileage sorry :)

Plz comment and like...

Umm 15 comments for the next one...
I guess that is not too much.



Edited by CarelessDreamer - 11 years ago

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