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Posted: 11 years ago
#51
Eeps! ! This was so good like sooo good. You write amazingly girl 👏. Concept is amazing. I don't like cute stories like this but will definitely read this one. It's like high-school thingy...so refreshing for me. Shivam 🤢 I hope T is not included. ..

Sorry for being late but better late than never 😃

I liked the trailer too and I want to read the next chappy as soon as possible. ...

Update soon


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Posted: 11 years ago
#52
Nice prologue
bechara shivam
waiting for d next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..Re..

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Eeps! ! This was so good like sooo good. You write amazingly girl👏. Concept is amazing. I don't like cute stories like this but will definitely read this one. It's like high-school thingy...so refreshing for me. Shivam🤢I hope T is not included. ..</font>

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Sorry for being latebut better late than never😃</font>
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I don't really like her character so even if I wants third angle I can intoduce someone new like randhir
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
itz damm intersting...
rey a playboy n kria a serious girl..
loved the prolouge..
it was jst osummm..
so very well written, amzing..
waiting eagarly for next update..
do update sooon..

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Posted: 11 years ago
#55
awesome prologue
loved it to core
kria and rey know each other before
waiting for update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Good one.. 🤗
Amazed to read a concpt like dis.. 🥳
Do write d nxt prt soon.. 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
Ah-mazing Prologue..
Kriya is damn awesome.. the way she Blew Shivam away, was superb... that Cheapo deserved that..
waiting for 1st chappy..
do continue super soon

p.s- maybe we've not talked before. whtz ur name??
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Posted: 11 years ago
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loved the prologue and the character sketch..
and yeah congratulations for your 1st FF/SS😊
hope to get the update soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Okay this is not exactly a chapter as I don't want to give it in chapters but in the basis of days...

So let's say this is the continuation of the prologue so...

Prologue 2:



---Rey---

"Watch and learn boys" I said to my friends as I headed towards my feast for tonight.

I reached out to her and stood right behind her. She turned and gave a shocked look to me. "Hi" I said to her. She placed her palm on my chest and pushed me a little, and I moved back a little.

"Do I know you" she asked. Is she serious? She thinks she'll tell me that she doesn't know me and I'll believe her.

"Nice joke but I'm Reyaansh Singhania, call me Rey." I said, ignoring the question.

"Hi but I need to leave" she said in a hurry. Again, is she serious? Girls die for even a look from me. Oh yes I know she's playing hard to get. I took a step closer and she moved back, "Well I was thinking, if you want, we can get to know each other."

"Not interested" she said, leaving me shocked. She was about to leaved when I caught her wrist "Come on just none date, we can have dinner and then maybe-" I started pleading but she interrupted "And maybe what? Take me to your car, sweet talk me into your arms and have some hot sex. I'll pass" trying to release her wrist from my grip.

Did she just say that or are my ears ringing. "I like you, you're pretty straight forward" I said bemused. "And you're annoying!" She said getting on my nerves.

She bit her lip, trying to find something to say "Look... I really don't want to spill a soda all over u like I did to your friend earlier this morning, not just because i don't have more money to get one." I smiled a little at that, this girl surely know how to prove her point.

"But also because you came to me a little more nicer than your friend so I'll make this easier, so please lets make this rejection as simple as possible, you can keep your dignity and the popularity and I'll keep my sanity." She continued. Really is she rejecting the Reyaansh Singhania.

I was shocked, would be an understatement. Did she just royally reject me, but that's my part. Whatever, I over came the feeling and asked hesitant "So is that a no?"

"Yup, that's a no" she replied so casually. She just insulted me indirectly and she is so casual. How could she. She left and I walked back to my friends.

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I walked back to my friends and directly looked at Shivam "Aww, you got rejected, didn't you?" How the hell did he know?

"Did I come back with soda all over my shirt, I don't think so. So stop guessing." I said getting frustrated. "Well you also did not come with the smug look you have on your pretty face when you get something you want" he continued.

"Maybe I did not want her" I said back, this guy can be annoying. "Was that before or after she rejected you?" He said.That's it this was too much. If looks could kill, Shivam would be dead by now.

"REJECTED" Nilesh yelled and my glares changed their direction. "Shut up" I said and he immediately muttered a sorry and did as instructed. I looked back at Shivam and saw a tinge of jealousy in them, but why the hell was he jealous?

"I told you Rey but you were all 'no one can resist my charm'" Swayam started breaking my thoughts and putting the air quotes around that phrase. Way to make my day much better Swayam.

"No one does. Do you understand? No one rejects The Reyaansh Singhania" I said masking my emotions with rage. And Swayam rolled his eyes I was gonna comment but Shivam interrupted.

"So are you going to try again?" He asked, sounding curious and... And wicked. That was strange, this girl is really getting in my skin.

"I always get what I want" I said, confidently. "Ah-ha! So you do admit that you want kriya" Nil made a way into the conversation. I looked at him, with the dumbest look I have ever had on my face.

"Nilesh" I said in the most sweetest voice I have ever heard myself utter. "Do all of us a favor and SHUT UP!" I shouted at the end. Sorry, that was all he muttered and shut up.

"Dude, she is just going to reject you again." Shivam said continuing the conversation while Vicky, Nil, Amar and Swayam just listened. "No, she is not!" I said totally against the idea. "She is gonna say yes, girls say yes to me, so she also has to!" I said to him, more like telling myself.

"How much do you wanna bet she is not gonna f**k you" he asked, totally serious. "That depends on how much you wanna loose." I said accepting the indirect challenge.

"Fine, if you loose, which obviously you are... You are going to hand me over the basketball leadership." He said overwhelmed. Is he really asking for this. What is wrong with him? But I can't tell this to him right now, we'll talk later.

"Fine but if I win, which I probably am. What do I get?" I asked agreeing to his demand. "What do you want?" he asked casually.

I thought for a while and asked him "Your dad owns that auto repair shop right?" Though I knew the answer already.

"One of the best in the country" he said, pride dripping from every word if his sentence. "Okay then, when I win I want you to fix up my car, the engine and everything... For free." C'mon Reyaansh can't you think of something better, was all I thought after I said those words. What can I do, I have everything.

Shivam chuckled and said "Yeah, that's cool but only on one condition." Isn't the whole bet his condition? But well what does this guy want now. "You have to sleep with her before your birthday"he continued.

Wait my birthday's coming up, okay. But then that's in two weeks. I looked at him shocked as soon as the realization hit me. "But that us in two weeks!" I exclaimed.

"What you think you can't do it" he replied. This guy surely knew how to hurt someone's ego. "I can do it" I replied slightly gritting my teeth.

"Woah woah woah" I heard Swayam intervene. "For your kind information guys, you might be kings at your home but you are not the kings of the whole world" I so knew this was coming but he unusually delayed it.

"What rights do you have to hurt someone's feelings, that girl isn't a toy to play around with. You guys are planning on using and throwing probably the most sane and sensible girl in the college. Why? Because she doesn't care who you are and doesn't go all fainting over you guys. Accept it guys she has guts to hurt you enormous ego and your out for revenge."

"Are you done" I asked, irritated. "And who the hell told you I'm bit doing this for revenge Swayam, that girl insulted me, she deserves it" Shivam said, interrupting me.

"And why the hell are you talking now? After everything is decided and set." I asked, frustrated.

"Because, I thought you were better than this. I thought you would at least stop this from happening, but no, you want to enjoy... Then enjoy, I'm leaving." He yelled at me and stomped out if the canteen.

"Okay then... Two weeks" he said, relieved and extending his hand towards me. "Deal?" He asked. Reyaansh Singhania never backs out, I reminded myself.

"Deal." I accepted, shaking his hand.

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--Afterschool--

---Rey---

I was waiting by her locker and she came up to me and asked "Do you always stalk people?" Annoyed, sarcastic and mockingly.

"Look" I started, what was her name again. I was deep in thought when "You don't even remember my name, do you?" Am I becoming so predictable. "No, I do" I practically yelled at her. She was shocked for a moment then composed herself and asked me "Then tell me, what is it?"

I remember how can I forget ummm... Preeti, no Kriti, Krupa? Kriya! Yes it's kriya. "Kriya, it's kriya" I said almost instantly.

She rolled her eyes "Look, I'm not your type" she started to justify but I interrupted "Girls are my type." I said with a tinge of flirtation in it.

"What a total clich" she said with a fake smile, which gradually turned into a frown "Do I need to spill soda all over you so you can understand, I do not want to go out with you. So stop trying." She yelled on the top of her lungs. Good thing no one was present in the locker room or I would've been embarrassed like hell.

Then she started walking away.

---Kriya---

I started walking away from Reyaansh, but just when I thought that I have left him behind, he caught up to me.

"Okay, I know your playing hard to get, but it's okay, I like it when I have challenges." He said. Ugh!! I so can't believe that he is serious. I stopped walking and looked at him.

"I'm not playing hard to get. Scratch that, I'm not playing anything with you. Why don't you understand, I don't wanna do anything with you." I yelled at him.

"Look kriya, many girls get intimidated by my popularity, so it's okay for you to be nervous." I can't believe he is doing this again. "Let me make it easier for you, pick you up at 8, tonight." He continued adding a wink at the end. Oh my god this guy is so full of himself.

I laughed and said "You are so full of yourself, you seriously think that you are the best thing that has ever happened to anyone, don't you?"

"That's cause, I am." He said, confident.

"Well not for me, neither do I get hugely nervous around you nor do I get intimated by you 'massive' popularity." I said putting air quotes around massive. "And as a matter of fact I didn't even know who you were." That was a lie.

"Seriously, no need to pretend." He said with that smug look. How did he get that. I did not know what to say next so I started walking towards the door of the building and walked into the parking lot but he tailed behind. This guy is so irritating.

"Your unbelievable." I muttered and stopped at my car. I turned to him and said "Well this was an interesting conversation but I need to leave now."

"Is that a yes for tonight?" He asked, hopeful. I looked at him in disbelief, is he serious. "You never give up, do you?" I asked him back.

He simply shook his head and replied "Nope." I sighed and said "Look Rey, why don't you find someone else, someone easier for that fact. I need to go to work." Did I really have to say that.

"Where do you work?" He asked almost instantly. Did he really think that naive of me.

"I'm not gonna fall for your games Rey. So how about you give up." I said and sat in my car, closed the door and zoomed off. Not giving him any chance to speak.


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Edited by CarelessDreamer - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#60
Can i pls slap him twice..or may be thrice...or a dozen bs..???...
I hate him to no extent...god..kill these jerks plz...
Mehnaz..tu gumrah ki writer to nai h na...???

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