14 Days || A Kriyaansh Short Story|| Updated on page 10

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Hello... So I have really gotten a great response on two of my stories so here is another one of my works.

The basic idea of the story is how the arrogant, rich, selfish and playboy Reyaansh Singhania falls in love with the not so naive Kriya, and how they built a relationship on lies that now even love seems a lie.

The story is the same good girl falls for the bad boy cliche but with a twist.
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Character Sketch: scroll further

Trailer: scroll further.

Prologue 1: Page 5

Prologue 2: Page 10
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Character sketch:

Reyaansh Singhania-

The heart throb of college and the ultimate play boy. He just cares about money and girls but what happens when one girl doesn't give him the kind of attention he is used too?

Kriya Ghai-

The quiet girl, who breaks her shell only when needed. She is the only girl who won't go gaga over Rey or any of his friends. But she has reasons, she doesn't trust anybody enough. What will happen when someone gains her trust the way she wants.

Swayam Shekhawat-

Rey's cousin on mothers side and only source of sanity. If not for him Rey would've been lost in the world of clubs, money and girls with the kind of company he has. He is not interested in Money or girls, he wants a true relationship, which is hard to find in Mumbai.

Sharon rai Prakash-

Kriya's best friend and support system. She doesn't go all fan girling on Rey and his gang but has a tiny (huge) crush on Swayam.

Shivam Dutta-

Every love story has a villain and here he is in the disguise of the hero's best friend, who literally wants to stab him a million times... But what can he do being Rey's friends has advantages.

Randhir Singh-

Kriya's bestie and Rey's enemy or competition.


More characters will be introduced as the story proceeds.
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This is kind of a trailer... Do tell me if I should continue...


Kriya Ghai is a normal teenage girl except the fact that she doesn't like to have 'fun'.

SCENE:

"Because that is Kriya Ghai" Swayam replied. That is confusing. "So?" was all that came out of my mouth.

"Well her records say she doesn't like to have your kind of fun" he said sarcastically.
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Reyaansh Singhania is your college playboy and the rich bad guy.

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I saw the brown eyed girl from last night, what was her name... God why can't I remember her name. Well not my concern at least I remember she is from last night.

"Hi Rey" She said trying to flirt, miserably failing. "You do remember me right?" She asked. "Well last night was great and u was hoping that you could come over tonight" she said.
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Shivam Dutta is the "best friend" of Rey, but in reality he's extremely jealous of him and always wants to see him fail.
So wat happens when Shivam bets Rey that he can't sleep with Kriya Ghai

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"You need to sleep with her by your birthday"Shivam said. "But that's in two weeks." Rey said shocked.

"What? You can't do it." He said making him angry. "I will show you what I can do" an angry Rey replied.
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Wat happens when he realizes it's not going to be as easy as he thought?

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"Go out with me" Rey pleaded.

"I'm not your type Rey" kriya replied agitated.
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"I don't like you Rey" kriya said, begging him to leave her alone. "Come on, give me a chance"Rey requested. She was about to reject when "Fine just give me two weeks to impress you"Rey interrupted.

"Fine, you have fourteen days" Kria said, sighing.
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Will she ever warm up to him?

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Rey pulled her towards him and looked in her eyes, they were heaving and just then kriya closed her eyes.
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And wat happens when he actually starts to fall for her?

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Rey sat next to Swayam on the couch and whispered "I think I'm falling for kriya."
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But wat happens when Kriya finds out about the bet?

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"All you wanted, was to sleep with me." Kriya yelled at him as she wailed because of her fate.
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Will Rey ever be able express his true feelings to her?

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Rey held her hand to stop her from going anywhere "You gave me fourteen days didn't you and kriya Ghai never breaks her promise"

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Reyaansh Singhania

Kriya Ghai

Swayam Shekhawat

Sharon Rai Prakash

Shivam Dutta

And more in...

14 days.

Okay trailer bakwas tha but plz comment.
Edited by CarelessDreamer - 11 years ago
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Well well well...congo for ur 1st ff or ss...
Sweethrt..its amazing...honestly..the bet is so common bt the way u r going to execute the whole plot...m way too excited...ivreally want to comment on evry single scene...bt i'll prefer to do it wen it will actually come...really m very much impressed with the characters nd the whole situation...
On a serious note...will we get updates on regular 14 days..??? 😆 😆
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awesome trailer n cs. Love it.. Continue soon.. Thanks for pm dear.. Congo for 1st ff
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Originally posted by: akankshaArsha

Well well well...congo for ur 1st ff or ss...
Sweethrt..its amazing...honestly..the bet is so common bt the way u r going to execute the whole plot...m way too excited...ivreally want to comment on evry single scene...bt i'll prefer to do it wen it will actually come...really m very much impressed with the characters nd the whole situation...
On a serious note...will we get updates on regular 14 days..??? 😆 😆

no I'm not gonna end it so soon so probably every two days as another plot is also running on my mind...
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Originally posted by: CarelessDreamer

no I'm not gonna end it so soon so probably every two days as another plot is also running on my mind...


Update in two days...thats ok...i wud love to know the other plot 😊
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Originally posted by: akankshaArsha


Update in two days...thats ok...i wud love to know the other plot 😊

hmm abhi uske liye next weekend tak wait karma padega...
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new story...yaayy...
lovd d trailer...do update real fast...cant wait aftr reading d trailer...
nyc concept...
argh...shivam again...no worries...as it will b a happy ending...do write soon...
n thnx for pm...

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