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ranogill

@ranogill

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Posted: 11 years ago

#461

Wonderful update...I like this akash and payal

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arnshi

@arnshi

Inactive

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Posted: 11 years ago

#462

aww that was such a beautiful update...loved the ending para...amazing.
Hmm eagerly waiting for next already...would love to see Khushi missing arnav and vice versa...would he bring something for her from his trip...

Have a nice vacation.Come back soon safely and happily...will be waiting for you n update.

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mayurisb80

@mayurisb80

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#463

uthra...that was a wonderful update...

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#464

Love this story.

Very well written, really.

Loved Aakash!

His fun loving nature, yet a very sensitive guy.

His love for his siblings to was what makes him a good guy.

Good to see him and Payal together.

And Arnav and Khushi.

They are such a sweet couple.

Looking forward to reading more about thrm.

And the prayer! You brought back memories of my school days.

Loved the update.

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please6

@please6

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#465

Love the update it was amazing

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SViji_2706

@SViji_2706

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#466

Awesome update.

But please don't tell me Khushi lost sight because of Arnav...because you see Arnav had in the second update thought that someone had been at the receiving end of his anger few years back other than his mother/family member. So I started having doubt whether it is Khushi or someone else.

Akash is a flirt here, it is very new for me to see him like this. I liked his character. So Payal and Akash knows each other way back from school time.

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Nutcase

@dreamymaya

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#467

Well Uthra, your cliffhanger works on me...I wasn't able to guess it was Akash...Oh man he was cute...I don't know who won me in this update - Arnav with his singing ability, Khushi with her usual charming self, Payal with her no-nonsense, smart mind reading capability or Akash with his charming flirting self??It was indeed a good update which left me smiling at places..Akash-Payal definitely stole the show according to me...I loved their banter and especially Payal's ability to read Akash...and Akash, such a lovely brother...can't help but fall for his charms...Khushi has left me a little puzzle..but I am no good in guessing, so I will wait for you to tell me the story...btw, the facility was an excellent place...is there any places as such in real???