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Posted: 11 years ago

#341

Wowww!
Cute story :)
would love to read more of it.

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hmm.. guess karo :P

@jas0308

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Posted: 11 years ago

#342

sorry!!! I am late

awesome update... very very beautifully written!!

I loved the bonding of gupta's with payal and NK!!

payal is true friend to khushi... and really sweet person!! loved her character!! she will get her akash soon too, I guess!!😉😉

loved how she dedicated all her time and everything to SPARC... and khushi too!! that's really sweet of her...and she is one of the great friend which are so hard to find😊

loved NK's entry too... he is really very sweet person!! I like his character so much

aah... enjoyed reading about shyam and Anjali... love is in the air for both raizada and gupta's siblings😉

awww, jealous arnav... loved how he got jealous of NK, as he is close to Khushi... and loved how he got her number!!😆

so cute, I must say!😳

cant wait for their convo now!!

please do continue soon!!

PS: sorry again for late reply😳

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Nutcase

@dreamymaya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#343

My girl!

My jaw hanged open after reading the first chapter...I never expected this twist...I mean you had scripted it excellently keeping the surprise...even when Lavanya thought of Khushi being haughty it didnt click my mind...even after Khushi's dialogue, "even if I can" again failed to piece the information...I wondered why but when Khushi started to sweep for her phone...I was stunned...truly stunned...Its not every day I come across such fantastically scripted stories which are crisp and hot!

First Maximus ...and now...this...you have truly me now..following your works...

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Nutcase

@dreamymaya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#344

Oh god I am simply loving this story...Shyam-Khushi sibling bond is absolute delight to read...I wish...Sigh!

Anyways Anjali-Arnav bond is nothing less..but the S-K bonding is sweeter...

You surprised me with Arnav's mild manners with the journalist Khushi..And Nita poor girl was saved...

Oh once again I can't stop saying that Shyam as a wonderful brother is making me long for such an elder sibling...Got to run..late for office..

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Hetal

@Divyahet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#345

A chhotu sa gift for my Apsara's SS..
In Your Eyes.😳

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&v=2v5d3WHVQFY[/YOUTUBE]

love, hugs n kisses.

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Nutcase

@dreamymaya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#346

Her name in his voice sounded like a whisper that caressed her physically, making goosebumps erupt all over her body. --- he he...even I too feel this whenever I watch the serial and hear Arnav calling Khushi..Seriously how stupid! He is calling Khushi, not my name...but the impact and voice modulation..whoa! he he

Oh earlier I wanted to say that Arnav's mom's words - that words causing hurt which damages or makes a relationship...that bit was really touching and true...you cant undo the damage words cause, it can never be healed or forgotton..

In chapter 3- I loved the ease with which Khushi forgave Arnav...she is too angelic right? That was decently handled..Anjali-Shyam talk, especially the picture of Anjali you painted in that setting sun glory was appreciation worthy...I liked their talk and especially Shashi, the man himself and the words about him from Shyam was excellent and full of warmth...Also loved the conversation between Shyam and Arnav - both men are equals here who loves their sisters deeply and dearly!

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Fried Rice Ji ðŸš

@Friedriceji

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Posted: 11 years ago

#347

Hey Uthra..

Sorry for the late comment..I was travelling and caught up with some family functions.

Finally, I managed to read the latest chapter..Which was dedicated to our gender.

Happy Woman's Day to you too..Hope you had a blast..

The update was so beautiful. Both were impatient to meet each other and I can see the possessive little Raizada here. He is already hating NK and woah NK is too having similar feeling for the ASR eh!! hehe interesting indeed.

What a time to break up with Ronit...

Lavanya you get your hands on this beautiful sculpted cake..you are time girlie.

Okay, now I am waiting for their telephone conversation..😳

Waiting..waiting..and waiting...