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Soujanya

@SSK27997

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Posted: 11 years ago

#361

ayyo ayyo ayyo tell me what is happening???!!!waiting for next update!!!!i am definitly feeling more anxious than arnav!!!

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meera30

@meera30

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+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#362

I loved the Arnav - Khushi part - it is always endearing to see, read about two people in that initial stage of attraction, restlessness, love even. And Arnav here reminds me of Aamir Khan / Suriya's character in Ghajini - the rich millionaire who unwittingly falls in love with the spirited, kind hearted girl

But to me the part where you talk about Shyam and how his heartbreak with Sheetal - was so heart wrenching. This is life afterall. How many women would willingly accept a family which depends on the man so inherently, especially a visually impaired sister. Shyam's life cannot have been easy. And so, I am glad that he found Anjali and that there seems to be a love, of the unselfish variety waiting for him and for his lady

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sman

@sman

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#363

Very sweet update..am sure Akash is playing some prank with Arnav :-) loving this

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magss24

@magss24

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#364

I just love your way of writing . It is amazing ...

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canapoem

@canapoem

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#365

Loved the update. Loved the way both analysed their feelings towards one another, one through voice and other through his own emotions.

Khushi analysing people by listening to them keenly was an insight into how blind people judge others. Loved the way she is confused about judging Arnav based on his voice. My dear Khushi, ofcourse his voice will be different than anyone. Since you cannot look into his eyes to know his feelings, his voice should reach your heart.

Similarly loved the way you have described Arnav's feelings towards Khushi.

So you made Sheetal Shyam's ex. Interesting!!!

Happy that he did not get married to Sheetal. Looks like Shyam and Anjali are made for each other.

Now Arnav is all ready to visit SPARC but who is this standing beside his car??

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Arilip

@Arilip

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#366

Lovely update...

Waiting for Raizada n Gupta siblings to get their true companions 😊

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Nandz

@Nandz

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#367

It was such a sweet chapter!!
Loved how arnav khushi n anjali akash are making progress in their respective relationships!
It was so good to see Arnav finally falling for someone after so long! N khushi isnt immune to his charms either! Since dhak dhak has entered the scene, acidity and rabba ve will soon follow the suit!
I missed NK though in this chapter!!

N m sure that lean figure is of akash! He must be waiting to be a perfect spoilsport for arnav's plans! But i guess he will meet payal at the facility and their love story will also begin!!

Waiting for the next part!! Thanks for the pm!

Edited by Nandz - 11 years ago

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#368

dont tell me that was nk here
nah cant be right
well it could be right
did he call khushi his angel interesting
so seems like raizada and gupta siblings have found love
awww what can better right
arnav behaving different to his usual
and thats what makes it so much fun naa
so shy is thinking about anj is more of life partner than just friend
he had bad experience and so this time wants to be sure
and he found that with anj
though seems even anj has her issues
and arhi well what to say about them
both are confused what they are feeling of other
they sure had the other stumped right
waise khushi sure made him feel more emtoions than any other person
and he too has khushi confused
how to categorize him
cheers for pm

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javeria

@Javeria3991

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#369

Awesome update

Wow Arnav was full proof to meet Khushi, he has manipulated her well to give her consent on his sudden tour, I am impress of his Harvard mind.

Hating sheetal she could never have understood Shyam close relationship and possessiveness to his family and Khushi. It's good that he broke up the second she showed her true face. He deserves someone like Anjali who doesn't know show off, she really have a lot of concern not especially for Shyam and his family but for her too. It's the part of her sweet nature.

It's awesome that Shyam want to give them a chance. I am sure he won't regret it because there's one thing they share that they love their siblings a lot. This could proof to be good start and in favor for them.

Arnav acted as love sick puppy and was so eager to meet Khushi. He specifically took time to dress appropriately.

The end is interesting, whom did he saw ??? I guess Arnav isn't fond of that person and didn't like that man's unexpected and sudden visit which makes him so angry.

Update next part soon.