ArShi SS: In Your Eyes/ Link to thread #2 on page 1

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henamani

@henamani

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#141

i want to read more of this. pls continue to PM me and if u could show the more sensitive side of arnav; he is always shown as such a brute

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SPraba

@SPraba

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#142

Hey viji thanks for the pm dear. Nice update. Arnav realised his folly and actually felt sorry which is good. Loved to see the bonding between shyam and khushi and also Arnav and anjali. Now waiiting for the next update

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mklam

@mklam

Explorer

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#143

The scene between Arnav and Khushi reminded me of a quote from the Tirukkural. One can never take back the words spoken. Arnav is contrite and will redeem himself in every way possible. Shyam is a protective older brother here. Great going!

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Swathi/Ammu

@Swathiarshi

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#144

Loved it to the core😃!!!!!! Awesome story... Thnk u for the PM!

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nee

@march2011

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#145

viji,i would like to congratulate u for this storry its just so perfect lots of emotions nfeelings...

khuhsi is really a courageous girl and i love the brosis bonding...the way shyam protects her

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Raji Senthilkumar

@RajiSobtian

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#146

loved d update
very interestinggg

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rulama

@rulama

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#147

That was touching!

Loved it.

Had been wondering why people portray Shyam as evil always. Its Abhas Mehta who has made Shyam synonymous with evil! Loving this good Shyam.

Arnav true to his character is full of self-importance and blinded by anger! Always utters before he thinks out properly! He is not ready to listen but only when things go out of control does his sense of hearing props up! Khushi's character shows how much and how quickly she bounced back this time.

Now I am going to write boldly, waiting for the next update...😉