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Gayuraj

@Gayuraj

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Posted: 11 years ago

#161

super update
waiting 4 d convo b/w raizada & guptas

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mpuhan

@mpuhan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#162

very nice. Glad that Arnav has realized his mistake and has decided to aplologize. love the brother-sister bonds.

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Nishi

@Ni_singh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#163

Awesome start. Waiting for the next update

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celinawalter

@celinawalter

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#164

loved the update
it was sooo good.
Arnav and his changed behavior even after Khushi gupta's outburst was remarkable.
i loved how he kept restrain on himself while handling Khushi Grewal.
i have never loved shyam's character so much as i am loving him here.
Both brothers are extremely protective of their respective sisters.
loved Khushi and her attitude to bounce back in life.

so now we have Raizada's at the door step of Gupta's, and i am waiting for their reaction.

waiting for your next update.
continue soon.

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#165

Awesome start

Loving the story

Plz add me to ur PM list

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sruthick

@sruthick

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#166

Awesome update..
Arnav realizd his mistakes...Nd feelng guilty...
Good...
Coz..intentionally or unintentionally...he did hurt that innocnt soul...
Poor Khushi...:(
Lovd d bond b/w Shyam nd Khushi...
Hope..Arnav s goin apologiz her..nd She'll 4gv him...
Waitng 4 d nxt part..:)

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saru323

@saru323

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#167

An awsm plot and mindblowin start, wish to recieve pm, also thanks to sarunji for recomended it.

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Mini17

@Mini17

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#168

Hi! This is the first story of yours that I'm reading.
Loved it! Just after reading the part where Arnav asks Nita about the journalist, I knew somehow that I would love this story.

Even though Khushi is a visually challenged girl the way she goes on with her work normally is great.

Anjali being a managing director of AR is very very refreshing. There are not many stories I have read where Arnav and Anjali both have a successful career and work together.

The other thing is Shyam being a positive character. The icing on the cake is you have made him khushi's brother. I love both these aspects :)

I have small doubt. In the first update when Khushi got up from her chair to meet Arnav and turned in her place, did Lavanya realize that Khushi was a visually challenged girl then?

I loved your writing. It's simple yet beautiful.

Would love to read more. :)