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Posted: 11 years ago
#71
sorry dii...i m hell busy now a days...
again excellent writing...u r plotting very well...
i loved each chapter...i just readed all now...
awesome chapters...loved it...
missed u diii...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: lalarukh


"saturday the day which going to change the life of every single person for better or for worse"
this line it self is life threatening...its like worse is all around and better will crawl up way ahead...when there would be only ashes and lil bit of fumes left...


did lavanya call? ...i dont know y wt lavanya told arnav later abt his being careless and all...this question by arnav totally oppose lav thinking towards arnav... when i read this i felt bad for arnav...i dont know y but for the first time i felt this wrong right...as if arnav is having a private life...where their is any bit of peace for him..its his private space...from his ruthless past ,tiredness and all...i dont know y ...i wanted him to live and let others live too...

You are one of very few readers who didnt pity Lavs...You were right, she was aware what she is getting into..But expectations kills the rationality...Dont you think?

WT THE deepu...whom u have made takla here...dont tell me u tried to killed the beauty of aman here...if it is so...u have played ur cards very well...but no worries in this story ...i can fall for the first time even for a takla...i dont know either get him a hair transplant or do some massage on his takla head ...i need my imaginary aman back...very cruel of u😭

LOL...some taklas r handsome tooo...But I shud have written it clearly...Aman is not takla as he clarified he would let her many bfs which they were talking about other bfs than arnav and aman..

mygoodness i loved arnav the way he controlled his anger or aggression towards nani...he knew it before...but the way he respect his nani using careful words not to show any disrespect...i am falling for even this dark arnav now...see the power is in ur hand in form of pen...u can make us hate and love them in two lines deepu,hats off...All I can say he is got his morals, principles, and ethics which he will use at his will..You will be enlightened more on this complex character once a storm named Khushi enters his life for sure.

i loved arnav theory of blood fall on insect...hehehe...damn...it was hilarious...but when he compare insect with khushi...damn even more :(...that black and white of his character is ufff...

😆😆😆

the whole discussion between arnav and lavanya...out class...right from entering her bed room till going out...i some how dont pity lavanya here...hope me not sounding weird...she apt this life herself..if a girl wanted to play safe ...i dont think so a guy can do much...other than some exceptional ruthless cases...if u r offering urself in a plate ..strong will arnav bhee hil sakta hay ...
my vote is throughout the discussion is towards arnav...its not like i am biased towards him...the fact is things cleared already no strings attached...arnav is not that bad as he is showing or trying ...he did thought abt her...his feelings mayb not as lover still in human way...U r bang on this point

now i dont know this delete from arnav side really means delete from bothside...i still have doubts...damn...unpredictable story :) well if its THE END for Arnav...he will make sure its THE END...iske aage mein kay boloon..no more lavs..I have too many chars to deal now..LOL

khushi is hyper active here...not using her brain at all...her anger management is as worse as arnav's...i loved that slap scene...i thought payal lost everything...but that whole scene concieved and written out class...loved the way nk understands ...khushi is taking wrong raizada...and it hurts dammit...pagal hay...not thinking at all in aggression...this will lead to damn big mu and hell for all...calm before storm

loved the way arnav took care of lawyer...and aman constant stickness towards word ..."bhabi"...hehehe...i liked arnav purpose of keeping window open...lol...too good...i was missing this "2 "never used after DOTD...:)...😆😆😆

nani is right ...kuch kuch arnav soch hee raha ...constant hammering of word wife ...hehehe...step by step he is going to settle down with this word , but again unpredictable...hats off deepu ...its awesome and fun drive...i enjoyed every bit of it...but todays update is forsure towards arnav side...he did tried to pacify lavanya ,no doubt

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Posted: 11 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: nishu_shorna

MINE

first thing first,










and my comment on last chapter here :
101025600

I will unres this soonwa...

***unres***

WOW...the words before the update...so beautiful...dil ko chhoon liya...

now coming to the update...once again fabulous Di...

So nani was behind the news...and Arnav knows it, of course he has to, he is Arnav Singh Raizada after all...

I loved how despite being angry, he didnt lost his cool around nani, and didnt speak a rude word to her...

although the comparison of the ant with Khushi was nothing to be laughed at, but it did cracked me up...he has an awfully intelligent brain, I have to admit...

and the convo between Arnav and Lavanya...WOW...Lavanya is not wrong for wanting more, now is Arnav as he was very clear from the beginning...it was a strings attached relationship from the beginning, and its high time they called it a quit...and I really hope this chapter is end forever...

Its the END because its ASR who decided it...And you right..lavanya knew what she was getting into..

also Aman-Arnav convo...Gosh Di...this man is fabulous...I am loving him more with each update...

God, for once, i got afraid for Payal...i thought its already too late...but at least it's not...again, the picture thing isnt any less worse...and Khushi is thinking its Arnav...oh no...dont want misunderstanding due to this, rather want them to work together against Akash...somethings u cant really avoid..can u?

And Khushi...she is hell bend to show the world Mr. Raizada's true face...but if at least she confirmed the full name of Payal's boss...if only...

like this pata nahi kya disaster aane wala hain...I cant even guess to what's gonna happen next...dying to read more...

Thanks for feedback sweety

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Posted: 11 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: Barun_Gf

Me late

Lala nishu 😡 not done

Main late hogyi 😭 Nishu lala r bfr me *sniff* *sniff* Badluck Pooji...LOL

U knw i really feels bad for lavanya..

She is d one who suffered aftr everythng ..Bt its her fault to .

Y did she have to agree to all d words thing wich d mighty asr say

Doesnt she have her own self respect...love can reduce anyone ..famous dialogue

Bt looks nani words did made an Effect on her

She speaked against asr for her rights

Payal boss is Asshole

Nd i m sure Akash wil pay for dis..Khushi is wrng...Its nt Arnav Raizada Its Akash raizada..

Nd now I m damn sure Its Akash Only 😉

What d bull

U made Aman takla..ayyoo everyone misunderstood...aman has fully grown head...ROFL

Ohhh girl u r so jealous 🥺 Bt how could u

Loll no worries dis tym it wnt chng our love for him

U c bcz anyhow u showed his caring side again

Wat is khushi upto...

Wat is she gonna do wid d proofs...wait and watch baby!

Nd dat asshole Mr.mishra

I loved all d replies he gave to mishra

Heck.. I wanna see khushi nd arnav face to face..will happen mostly next update...

I wanna she khushi realizes her mistakes..oh dont u worry, he will make sure she pays back for eevything

By mis judging arnav character

Nd thinking dat he is d one behind blackmailing payal

Dis update chngd many equation ..Yeahh agree . Waisa saturday isnt over yet

More to come Baby 😈

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Posted: 11 years ago
#75
ur title perfectly suits the update. this particular saturday indeed changed the lives of many and i think mostly arnav!!!

i ll start with payal!! i cant step myself from saying she is dumb and dumb. im sure "her boss" is not the ASR and she did not even mentioned it to khushi and now because of this misunderstanding a volcano is going to erupt soon.

another point for khushi to hate men and especially arnav!

i know its sounding mean but i cant help being happy that arnav and lavanya broke up! n i know that the road to where both arnav and khushi will accept that they are married is going to be one very long and adventurous one! n im so looking forward to it

superb update, just loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76
nice dear
arnav cum to know nani plan
khushi mis understood arnav

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Posted: 11 years ago
#77
fantastic update
loved it
congrats for the new thread
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78
Awesome update di wow nani n buaji planning to bring arshi together who is that guy who blackmailed payal is that akash ohh no khushi go to the newzpaper agnist arnav loves it di continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79
Awesome update !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Loved it too much
So Arnav knows about Nani's plan
Arnav has break up with Lavanya
so Payal's boss blackmailing her
And Khushi misunderstood Arnav is doing all this
Waiting for next update
Plz continue it soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#80
CONGRATZ ON NEW THREAD 🥳🥳
AWESOME UPDATE 👏👏
LOVED IT 😛

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