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Posted: 11 years ago
I am just waiting when he will come to know about the dance teacher
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update di
...
i thought that they r going to meet..bt they didnt..
eagerly waitng fr the next update 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
kahan ho tum chalay aao ...muhabat ka takaza hay...ghum-e-duniya say ghabra k...tumhain dil nay pookara hay...now translate it sweety :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
u r green means...hmmm...kuch kuch hota hay :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Update on 5 hrs guys...time for grocery shopping now...LOL
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Posted: 11 years ago
Di... You have became very much chant!
That Mahaupdate was not mahaupdate...
Uh..huh!
Only 3 scenes you showed in that...
Only three..
1. Their Fight.
2. Nani and Aman
3. Flashback..
Actually these all were about one wonderful act done by Arnav with Khushi...
I was grining when Khushi found Arnav's behaviour COMPLEX!..
So I am not only one! :p
But I liked the Mahaupdate..
Coming to chapter 6... I liked it more than fifth! Hehe...
Arnav waited for Khushi in WeCare...
I wonder what will actually Arnav do when he found the teacher is Khushi only...??
He is already noticing similarities in their reactions..
Let see what you have stored?! :p
Payal is in problem and Khushi is leaving for Mumbai with NK!
I can't wait more to see.. Plss update sooon..
Pata nahi kyun?! But I found Lavanya's heartbreak funny... :>
Her and Nani's convo was ajee..b..
Aman was fun! He was acting like younger brother of Kapil Sharma.. Giving laughter strokes time to time...
Calling Khushi Bhabhi... Mangalsutra!
Phere is still left Amanji and engagement tooo..
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Posted: 11 years ago
fantastic FF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Iam absolutely in love with your characters!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Khushi's character is just super!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The scheming nani!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Wonder what'll happen next!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update...
Loved Arnav and Ashu convo... Arnav becomes a different person with Ashu, the person which he is hiding from the world...
Arnav and Khushi couldn't meet... I wonder what had happen had they meet?? Would Arnav back out from the deal???
Arnav is all set to destroy khushi life... I just hope that khushi can do something to stop him...
Nani is right... Lavanya can't compromise her whole life... A relationship needs investment from both the partner...But i feel sad for her... She really loves him...
What happened to Payal? Why is khushi going to Mumbai?
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Posted: 11 years ago
Di...at long last I am back...late hona aaj kal jaise aadat si ho gayi...but as always, I am not gonna say sorry, kyun ki hum jaante hain ki u understand...

its a beautiful update Di...and I really love the place WeCare...where the great Arnav Singh Raizada puts his guards down...where he let his heart rule over his head...love the bonding he shared with Ashu...

and his eagerness to meet the dance teacher...I am hopeful, whenever ArShi are gonna meet in WeCare, they wont fight...even I am dreaming of that day, when they will come to WeCare together...I know its still millions of miles ahead...but hum soch toh sakti hain naa...

Khushi is going to Mumbai...may be her intuition is telling her, something so wrong may gonna happen...loved how she made Vada Pav in 10 minutes for buaji...she really cares a lot for her...may b its not a that big thing, but again it reminds me what most of us never do for our parents even if we have time and energy...

now comes to Aman...I am officially in love with Aman...but I know I know, this Aman is Lala's...hum uspe nazar nahi denge...his convo with Arnav in plane...fan as well as insightful...loved it...

as for Lavanya, dont know why Di, but i dont feel sympathetic towards her...she hasnt done anything wrong, but still she knew what she is signing into...and her heartbreak was inevitable...

I just love the conversation between Nani and Lavanya...Nani is a wise old lady...and she knows what to say, whom to say, and how to say...and she sees things from an angle that only someone as experienced like her can see...and one day this meaningful look will turn into love, we are keeping our fingers crossed...

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mwep

unres

i m back di
hi 😃

a new start
a new story
a new genre
but the same arshi 😳
the same writer😃
n me the same reader 😆

i loved the concept ...its awesome👏
so arnav ko nightmares atey h😲
arey wah aman is his friend 😃 u described him so well


😲😲
KHUSHI
😲😲

is she really khushi ??????

👏👏 i love this straightforward n bold khushi ...she gave right lesson to that leech

she doesn't believe in god 😕...thats something new
loved these lines::

And Mr. I am not coming for you. I am coming for Buaji... Samjhe aap?She pointed knife in the air and spoke to her worst enemy. GOD!!!

arnav ki darling ki lagta h aman se nai banti 🤣

NK n khushi r frnds nice 😛 but NK is a broker 😲 ...how come thy become frnds

oho toh arnav ki nazar khushi ke business pe h😆 interesting

haww arnav why not ...can't ladies be private
ladies ke baare m aisi misconception not accepted

so there is a rift b/w anji n arnav??
khushi n arnav r connected by that taveez...that one night ...when

One was BORN orphan and the other was MADE orphan..


he burnt her duppata 😡 hunn not gud arnav...no one can save u now from khushi😆


arey wah car no. bhi likh liya
loved ashu n arnav's talks 😃

are these guys payash?😕

mandir m huyi mulakat phirse
socha na tha kisi ne
milenge kuch aise
maano na mano god ka likha koi nai badal sakta
tabhi toh na chahte huye bhi mil jata h in dono ka rasta

wah wah super lines...loved the way u put it in simple words for everyone to understand..Thanks dear

loved khushi's reply to nani ...with mixture of respect,confidence,boldness n attitude ...the fire in her eyes...i salute her👏


than
Nikal, Paisa Nikal...[Take the money out] Rs500. 250 for my dupatta and 250 for the stress I had gone through. And APOLOGIZE.🤣

arnav gave new game to khushi-Miss Posy i loved it😳

Aww I love that name tooo..I will put it to use in later chps..LOL

arey wah khoon bhari mang n khushi huyi arnav ki...dono mane ya na maane
i loved their unsaid convo a lot
eyes speak volume u wrote that part so wonderfully that i don't have words to express my emotions 😛

thy both have each other in their mind
thy both regret their words
thy both realised both r in pain
par accept hi nai krte

so now they'll fight for the property
khushi is smart n clever arnav usey harana asaan nai 😆

feeling bad for LA par jita jaldi she will accept the truth it will be beneficial for her

khushi heading to mumbai

arnav k khayalo m bas khushi hi h

waiting for more di
jaldi update kro


I ran out of colors..LOL ..So glad to have u back

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