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Sutapa Sarbabhom

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

Congrt for new thread amazing updt i think its akash who is payal boss n kushi mu with arnav its complecated cont soon tanx for pm

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Neetz11690

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

awesome upd

congrats 4 new thread

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kritash

@kritash

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#53

lovely.
liked to see asr and lavanya relationship ending for better.
waiting eagerly for the next update.

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thangam100

@thangam100

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Posted: 11 years ago

#54

nice, can we have a maha update sooner or later

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nee

@march2011

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#55

wow...its just like a thriller...i can't get enough missing ur part2 n3 ...

Saturday..the day which is going to change every single person's life for better and worse...

this seems like a warning ,somethg good n bad gonna happen,asr will accept khushi(his mind already playing kapadi with the married status)

khushi digging her hole...

love aman n lav

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J P

@TwilightStar_JP

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#56

Cheers to the new thread?!!

Lovely update!! So a break up, a threat, a misunderstanding of an individual is going to create a huge issue next!

Lovely man he seems to have developed a thought process for her!

So now this new mr Raizadha will make his entry!

who is he?

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RK612

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Posted: 11 years ago

#57

Amazing update, thanks for pm. waiting for the next update.

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Shree Nanda

@Mrs_Darcy_Shree

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+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#58

oh shit!! a MU ahead to worsen things
shit shit shit!!!

both r too stubborn n too angry all the time

cont. asap

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daljeet

@daljeet

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#59

Hey, I loved the story. I finally caught up with this one. I must say this one if different from your previous works, In fact I felt one thing, your improvement as a writer is evident. I can't say precisely because of oen factor, but overall I feel different reading you again.

I think Kushi is a bit too much when it comes to her tongue and blanket analysis of men!

And I msut say I felt sorry for Arnav and Lavanya separation, somehow I felt that both of them were sad by this separation, even Arnav. He lost a good friend. Hops some day they both get back to being friends. I don't blame Arnav there, nor Lavanya. But both are wrong in their ways too. I wish they were more careful about them. I somehow feel they would have been a better pair than Kushi here.

Though I like women's fighting spirit, I don't like such averseness and that too which is pointless. Whenever Arnav behaves well and decides to do a help, being an independant woman she can deny it, of course, but Kushi is always crude in her ways, manners and talks. It's not necessary for a woman to fight back to have a caustic tongue, she just needs to be firm and independant. Kushi seems a bit out of the border in this story. My personal opinion, please don't take it in wrong sense, because I can see that you are developing her char with a lot of motto behind it. So I felt obliged to point out this.