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msmarple

@msmarple

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#791

Loved the update!

Arnav only finds her face familiar and does not remember where he met Khushi ...oh boy! But she managed pretty well pretending she didn't remember as well😃

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Raila1014

@Raila1014

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#792

I loved your description of Kashmir, especially the young girl in the boat. I have never been there and you just made me dream about the beauty that is Kashmir. I love this bond forming between Kushi and Astha without any added weight of a formal relationship. Yes, this Arnie is definitely stuck up, isn't he? How can he not remember her? Just kidding, it happens when one has too many things going on in our mind and maybe if he is already seeing someone? Kushi was right in her response back to him about not remembering meeting him either. When is Kushi starting her placement? Hope they have enough time before she goes to work.

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-MIMOSA-

@-MIMOSA-

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#793

WOW!

Its hard to believe Jen, that you have never been to Srinagar...you gave me a wonderful tour of that Heaven on Earth! and now I want to go there...this must have taken a lot of research work on Kashmir to come up with such beautiful description...hats off to you!

Astha is so adorable and warm...she and Khushi are already attuned to each other...

As the story is progressing I am more and more intrigued by Arnav...there is an air of aloofness around him, total indifference to his surroundings... that may be the reason he didn't recognize Khushi... hope we will know more about him in the next chapter...but I already like him!

As I have already said, all the characters are very real in this story...very much believable...I am loving this story...Wednesday seems so far...

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SAM

@kkyajo

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#794

Awesome update 👏 , 👏 , 👏

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FeistyDewdrop

@FeistyDewdrop

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#795

The beauty of Kashmir described anywhere? It is here... It is here...it is here... :))

u hv described everything so enchantingly Jen!!! Super it is!! :D

Astha aunty is Madhu bua's bff n Arnavz mother... Aand Khushi is staying wid Dem!! :D one exciting experience this is going to be :D i mean reading it ;))

uuh ho Mr.Arnav!!! u don't remember meeting a beautiful gal like K before!! U indeed hurt her vaniity mister!! Hmmmpphff.!! Better you recollect it soon sexy!! ;))

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mayurisb80

@mayurisb80

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#796

well the ever arrogant Arnie..so he does not remember her...is it really so or he just does not want to be taken in...

its so easy to picture Kashmir through your eyes...

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Rimi

@Rimi_BS

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#797

Wow! Thats nice...arnav's mother is khushi's bua's friend.!
Loved it.,.

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Cherylann

@tvpal007

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#798

Arnav😕...How could you not remember Khushi?

No worries..very soon Khushi will be the only thing that will matter to Arnavji😳

Your descriptions are lovely Jenny..totally spot on🤗

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#799

mujhe Kash mir jana hain... i fall in love with description Apu...its beautiful...
Astha Aunty is really a nice lady...i'm liking her a lot...loved her conversation with Khushi...
and now also Arnie(oops, Arnav) is here...their first meeting...wow...now i wanna read more...

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_disha_

@_disha_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#800

Yeah so finally the stage is all set !!

And Arnie is in town ! But whats up with his subdued demeanor ...we have always seen a very flamboyant ASR and to see him in this new light is quite a refreshing change. I am loving this stay out of my waya wala Armav !

Khushi and her excitement was quite contagious ...i have never been to Kashmir sadly but the beautifully laid out descriptions here have left me wishing and hoping to get a chance to travel there some day in the future "fingers crossed" !

And for someone who has bumped each other so often yet not be placed with recognition must have surely been quite a bummer for khushi ...There is something so mysterious about Arnav !

Great one Jen ! Looking forward to chapter 4 already !😳

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