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Meee...hope to read when I wake up tomorrow morning ;) way to go Kushi..awesome..what caught me in this chapter was Kushi exclaiming Arnie and ofcourse beautiful description of Kashmir.. very disappointed with Arnav..how can he not remember Kushi..!! and he has guts to ask have we met before..loving this Kushi..she gave him back properly..waiting for Arnav to realize who is she..next chapter onwards lots of Arnie Kushi, hopefully ;-)

Pliss its m res
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sowiee Jen for this unbelievably late Unres!

OH GOSH! It was a feel good chapter. As beautiful as Kashmir. I'm very lucky to have visited that heaven.
But one time is never good!

Ahh! I can so relate to this confused Khushi. I always get confused during my travel, as what to buy or not!

So, they came face to face. And man was he acting it all up? He didn't recognize her?
Oh how I loved Khushi's reply. Bang on girlie!

Now off to read the next chapter.

Muahs!

Me!!!

~Unres

Wow...I so wish I get to witness the beauty and the paradise Kashmir is called in person. One day, Some day!!!
And your description of the natural beauty be it trees, lake, or Himalayas has just increased this urge inside me. I can't say what you described was apt or not but surely what you described was beauty at it best and when I read the scenery right outside the big window in the living room it sounded like the beautiful mirage of a painting just so more real. And I was awe!!!

Loved the way Khushi appreciated the beauty around her and the pride astha felt. Liked their easy comrade and mutual like towards each other. Especially, Khushi's list with 'pan and pic to be mailed to mom' and her monologue. 😉

Hmmm...finally the Greek god is here and he liked what he saw. Well their is more to come, after all it's Khushi.

Really!!! khushi doesn't remember him ... Oh yeah if only she has forgotten him than only remembering will make sense 😆

Wait till she starts her monologue for the Greek god. 😉

Totally loved it. Oh and yeah Khushi doesn't have to be disappointed. What if she will not meet the cute little Arnie with scraped knees running around the house ... Well she can definitely make some little Arnie's with Arnav 😉

Res

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👏 i can't stop clapping right now di, because the way you'ce written this chapter is brilliant.

I could visualise the whole scenery. I could feel te excitement, the tingle and the beauty that Kashmir is. The pragmatic view of Himalayas, the flowers, Chinar trees, bridges and Dal lake! Everything that defines Kashmir some more. :)

Astha seems a genuine and sweet person. She is talkative, indulging and comforting.


Its always this way, if ever a kid goes to some new place - all the distant and not so distant relatives are called upon and then if a suitable relative is found, the permission is granted. Sab ke saath yahi hota hai! ;)


Astha's Love for her native land and Khushi's excitement to enjoy this heaven, both connecting instantly. Astha became the willing guide and Khushi an enthusiatic tourist. :)

heyy, even i get confused too while shopping thats why my mum and sister do that for me. ;)


Astha seems fine, i mean kinda Normal.. Why is our Hotty Singh Raizada so Cold? ;)

Khushi dressed up in a sexy salwar suit, and he didn't even glance at her properly, is to Ramanchi hai! ;)

so Very Excited aout the next chapter. This one was Fab! 👍🏼


P.S: is Arnav divorcee or something? Or its just his family past that has affected him?

That's a super awesome news Jen - will wait for u to post

great updates .as doctors its really new concept

Amazing updte jenny...
u have wonderfully written it...ur descriptions made me feel that i was really there seeing it and feeling it...u r an amazing writer...i really now wish to visit kashmir...
and about story...i really liked astha aunty...and arnav he didn't remember her??????and khushi good reply for his question...
really waiting for nxt...

Me too Res!!!!!