The Grease Story (Completed) - A SanDhir FF *A/N - Page 103* - Page 72

"Because children are messages from God that He is not yet disappointed in us"

Originally posted by: gujjupari

Yo! warning: Beware the comment that is about to follow😆

OMG! You are a one hell of a writer lady! Your english, actually it's literature, is just so profound and emotive! It's like your story is the red-velvet cake and your expression of language is the smooth and creamy icing on top! Together it is amazing and mouth watering (ly) good 😆 👍🏼...Mind blown😃 (yeah, I just like food too much😆)

I can't even describe how much I loved part 12 & 13!!! The way you have elaborated on Sanyukta's sadness and then compared it with Randhir's happiness... I was like, this chick is gun😆!

And your dialouges!!!! Omg!!!! I was cracking up at like 12 midnight, laughing my head...

One of my favourites had to be: "The doors of Randhir-land shall open when we are ready to receive your Highness," he mocked... I died 🤣 🤣

And the Pokemon scenorio... hahahah, I love pokemon too... As sad as that sounds (pikacho was my fav😳 😆)

OMG! you have 'The Fault in our Stars'!!! That book was sad.. not the saddest i have ever read (April Fools was the sadded)... But I really do like that book👍🏼

Additionaly this line just hit my heart... It was like the perfect bang...

"You're the only thing that I like about me, farzi."

There were no words she could use to say anything humanly perceptible and meaningful in return, so she decided not to.

... If only we saw this side of Randhir on the show... Hopefully, later on in the show😃

Vardhan has children!!! And he chuckled... OMG! i was like someone please call the ambulance... My heart 😆... Seriously, Loved his back story!! What a Romeo😉

Oh! Just remembered, I love casually Sanyukta said about want an ENTIRE set of grandparents for their children.. I was like Wow! You go girl!😃

I think I will stop now... Even though I didn't even mention the treasure part of the FF or that grease scene... All in all, I was a later reader, but I am glad I got to read such an amazing FF in one shot😃

And of course! Who can forgot that ending! One big happy family 😃

AMAZING stuff girl! And now I am really excited because you have another idea for a FF! Girl just update already 😆

Lots of love.

Pari 😎

PS: Now you can start throwing whatever you want at me, for making you read one heck of a comment😆

PPS: I bet even this comment has grammatical errors... I ceebs looking over it 😎

Originally posted by: gujjupari

"Because children are messages from God that is not yet disappointing in us"

👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

That was very profoundly beautiful!

Originally posted by: Ms.P.K.Tunn

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I actually was mad at you and had decided wont eva edit the comment but now I cant remain mad, as I myself am going through it xD

The part was superb and the end was perfect and I specially loved the flashback part !!

Waiting for the month to get over.. So you'd write more !!

Loads of Love ❤️

Originally posted by: PrussianBlue

I read that somewhere and thought it was appropriate for here! :D

PS. Please read again what you have written xP

Madame! Yeh sahi kiya aapne!

Aww such a cute ending !!

And I was saying going through boards and colleges ki jhanjhat xD

Originally posted by: TashaForever

Madame! Yeh sahi kiya aapne!

You never let go of even a tiny detail in your story! :)

Hats off!

From the ''other'' grandparents, nani ji is the best!

Waiting for another awesome story soon xD

awww... arushiii its such a cute part... damn hw u missed it...
awww... it was written so cutely kaun kis se baat krta h kaun kiss se baat nai krta... lol
:)
luved ur ff to the core... u r an amazing writer doll... :)

hey arushi di!!!