The Grease Story (Completed) - A SanDhir FF *A/N - Page 103* - Page 74

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: PrussianBlue

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#0000ff" size="3">Important A/N: For some preposterous reason, I forgot to mention this part in the ending! God only knows what I was thinking! So, here goes! :D</font>

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<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#3399ff" size="3">Ranbir, Roya and Pratidhi meet their "other" grandparents every week. Randhir drops them off at the "Skype station" because they still live in New Delhi while the Shekhawat family resides in Chicago. Sanyukta never speaks to her father and brother, though she makes sure she speaks to her mother every now and then. On Skype, Nanu, Nani, Mamu and Mami shower all their love on the three musketeers, but never on the rest of the family. Nani speaks to Dadu, Dadi, Mumma and Papa, but without the knowledge of Nanu and Mamu.</font>
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<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#3399ff" size="3">The children don't understand the complexities of the "adult" world and Sanyukta and Randhir are glad they don't as they don't want them to grow up so fast. Because children are messages from God that He is not yet disappointed in us.</font>
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<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#3399ff" size="3">~Happies Endings~</font>
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Aaahhh!!!!
Isey kehte hain 'gen next' ki kahani!!!

"Because children are messages from God that He is not yet disappointed in us."
This is so true!!! So genuine and so beautiful!
Why on earth did ya forget abt this part?! :o
But being a 'happy ending' shipper, I loved the way the story ended! And this chhotu sa addition is simply an icing on the cake!!!
Love much <3
PS: I forgot to mention in my earlier comment, I loved the names of the kids!!!!!! :D
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --Mahima--

read the last three chapters

I will miss this story a lot


MAHIMA! Thank you SO much for telling me each time you were done with a chapter! Your sincerity makes me want to cray and smile at the same time! Thank you SO much for taking out the time to read and comment on this story so lovingly! Means a lot!

THANK YOU again! :D
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Posted: 11 years ago



Aaahhh!!!!
Isey kehte hain 'gen next' ki kahani!!!

"Because children are messages from God that He is not yet disappointed in us."
This is so true!!! So genuine and so beautiful!
Why on earth did ya forget abt this part?! :o
But being a 'happy ending' shipper, I loved the way the story ended! And this chhotu sa addition is simply an icing on the cake!!!
Love much <3
PS: I forgot to mention in my earlier comment, I loved the names of the kids!!!!!! :D
Hahaha! Yes, I thought I would bring us back to the 21st century! xP
I found the children wall line in some magazine or newspaper or it comes on One Tree Hill! I'm not sure xP But it is so profoundly beautiful that it stuck in my head and brought itself out in the course of this story! :D
Hahahaa! Even I don't know why I forgot this part xP
Aww! I love the names of all 5 kids! :D
No amount of words can express what I feel for you, Anu! So I won't even try!
^^Okay, that sounded like a proposal, but you get my point! xD :')
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: PrussianBlue


MAHIMA! Thank you SO much for telling me each time you were done with a chapter! Your sincerity makes me want to cray and smile at the same time! Thank you SO much for taking out the time to read and comment on this story so lovingly! Means a lot!

THANK YOU again! :D


You welcome

looking forward to reading something new on Sandhir from you
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Posted: 11 years ago

Hello again everyone! First off, I'm sorry but I can't send PMs because my hands are hurting from all the board exam writing and all the typing for this update xP

There are references used in this part that I would like to acknowledge. They are as follows:

"And that is the thing about pain, Hazel Grace. It demands to be felt." The Fault In Our Stars, a book by John Green

"You're a mess, Lucas Scott. But you're my mess." Peyton Sawyer to Lucas Scott in a poplar teenage drama show called One Tree Hill.

"You're the only thing that I like about me" from a song called Tangled Up In You, by Staind.

Thank you very much once again for all the love this story has received! Full of love and gratitude! This part is dedicated to Tanya (LovetheVlovers) for being so persistent that I update xP She is a fantastic budding writer and I wish her the very best! She is one of the most mature and understanding 13 year olds I have had the good fortune of knowing! Love you, Tanya :D :*


hey awsome i love one tree hill and poke mon too u write awsome .loved it


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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice ending👏
Waiting for your other story
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Posted: 11 years ago
just read the whole story and love it to bits ...
amazing story and love it
such an amazing story
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: don girls

just read the whole story and love it to bits ...

amazing story and love it
such an amazing story


Hey! Please tell me your name!
Thanks SO much for reading and commenting!! :D
Feel free to read my other works, the link to which can be found in my siggy! :D
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Posted: 11 years ago

Hey! Thanks SO much! :D
What would your name be?
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Posted: 11 years ago
haw? is this khatam?
Acha hain. i can read it in one go.
i'll start reading this tomorrow. Mere exams khatam wohooo!

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