The Grease Story (Completed) - A SanDhir FF *A/N - Page 103*

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Arushi Kotecha

@PrussianBlue

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Posted: 11 years ago

#701

Originally posted by: katheriene
Awesome update👏
Loved the ending😊
Vardhan sir's dialogue was amazing😊
Loved sandhir's scene & vardhan Niharika love story😊
The fifteen year laep & kids name were adorable😊
Looking forward for your new story
Congratulations for completing hundred pages👏

Hey! Thank you SO much for reading and commenting! For the hundred pages too, all the credit goes to you guys! :D :*

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Arushi Kotecha

@PrussianBlue

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Posted: 11 years ago

#702

Originally posted by: iraa_parsh

Its ok hun. No probs. Next time mat bhoolna varna...hahhaha!!!
Awww so sweet...thankyou dat u like my name so much...All thanks to mumma (she's the one to keep my name)
Congratulations and celebrations!!!!!!!!!!
Your ff completed 100 pages at its ending...itzz gr8888!!!!
Thankgod u understood my "bhavanae"...hehe..
A month for next story????? Nahhhiii...yeh nahhhiii ho sktaaa...
Ohk I noe I'm over-reacting...
I understand..me too preparing for college..chalo koi na will b waitinggg...
Gud luck:)

Hahahaa! There will be no forgetting now as you have been added to the PM list :D

Yes, thank your mumma very much from me too! :D

YES! 100 pages all because of you guys! Thank you SO much! :D :*

Hahaha! Yes, I shall try to hurry up as much as I can! :D

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Arushi Kotecha

@PrussianBlue

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Posted: 11 years ago

#703

Originally posted by: angel_anisha
Oh my.. still cant believe such a beautiful story just GOT OVER!!
Well, applause arushi! there was a constant smile on my face as i read till the end.. loved it.. and do write another ff.. will surely be waiting..

GREASE STORY.. gonna miss ya!!😃

Hey Anisha! Yeah, it had to and it did :/

Thanks SO much for reading, loving and commenting! Means a lot!

Yes, another story soon :D

Miss YOU! :D :*

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Arushi Kotecha

@PrussianBlue

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#704

Originally posted by: sukriti11196
#UNRES#
Your FF ends...
yes i am happy with
THE END...
but still not happy that this
END..
but all good things do...and so dis this...
and this plants the seed for the next FF..😃😃
i hope i am right..

your FF needs no introduction,..
its no. of comments and views all give it away..
but still
a wonderful, superb and awesome FF...

loved it all through...
a pleasure to read...

P.S - i am late to edit his..hopefully you read it

Hey Sukriti! I'm glad you liked the end! :D

Yes, there is another story in the writing! But it'll take longer than I expected :(

Thank You SO much for reading and commenting!

Late or early doesn't matter! I'm just really glad you liked it! :D

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Unknown

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Posted: 11 years ago

#705

Yo! warning: Beware the comment that is about to follow😆

OMG! You are a one hell of a writer lady! Your english, actually it's literature, is just so profound and emotive! It's like your story is the red-velvet cake and your expression of language is the smooth and creamy icing on top! Together it is amazing and mouth watering (ly) good 😆 👍🏼...Mind blown😃 (yeah, I just like food too much😆)

I can't even describe how much I loved part 12 & 13!!! The way you have elaborated on Sanyukta's sadness and then compared it with Randhir's happiness... I was like, this chick is gun😆!

And your dialouges!!!! Omg!!!! I was cracking up at like 12 midnight, laughing my head...

One of my favourites had to be: "The doors of Randhir-land shall open when we are ready to receive your Highness," he mocked... I died 🤣 🤣

And the Pokemon scenorio... hahahah, I love pokemon too... As sad as that sounds (pikacho was my fav😳 😆)

OMG! you have 'The Fault in our Stars'!!! That book was sad.. not the saddest i have ever read (April Fools was the sadded)... But I really do like that book👍🏼

Additionaly this line just hit my heart... It was like the perfect bang...

"You're the only thing that I like about me, farzi."

There were no words she could use to say anything humanly perceptible and meaningful in return, so she decided not to.

... If only we saw this side of Randhir on the show... Hopefully, later on in the show😃

Vardhan has children!!! And he chuckled... OMG! i was like someone please call the ambulance... My heart 😆... Seriously, Loved his back story!! What a Romeo😉

Oh! Just remembered, I love casually Sanyukta said about want an ENTIRE set of grandparents for their children.. I was like Wow! You go girl!😃

I think I will stop now... Even though I didn't even mention the treasure part of the FF or that grease scene... All in all, I was a later reader, but I am glad I got to read such an amazing FF in one shot😃

And of course! Who can forgot that ending! One big happy family 😃

AMAZING stuff girl! And now I am really excited because you have another idea for a FF! Girl just update already 😆

Lots of love.

Pari 😎

PS: Now you can start throwing whatever you want at me, for making you read one heck of a comment😆

PPS: I bet even this comment has grammatical errors... I ceebs looking over it 😎

Edited by gujjupari - 11 years ago

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everywednesday

@everywednesday

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Posted: 11 years ago

#706

And I'm all 'awww'.
Its a beautiful ending. Loved it! :)
And yea mereko hi boli thi that you adore OTH. I do too! :*

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Arushi Kotecha

@PrussianBlue

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#707

Originally posted by: Reminescence
And I'm all 'awww'.
Its a beautiful ending. Loved it! :)
And yea mereko hi boli thi that you adore OTH. I do too! :*

Hey Rini! Thenkoo, thenkoo! :D :*

All this story is because of you guys! Thank you again!! :D

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kaveriw2008

@kaveriw2008

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#708

what yaar i , so so so angry on you

tumne isse finish kun kiya

ab kya...me angry

i want more sandhir fight, care, love, understanding

where will i get it

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Arushi Kotecha

@PrussianBlue

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#709

Important A/N: For some preposterous reason, I forgot to mention this part in the ending! God only knows what I was thinking! So, here goes! :D

Ranbir, Roya and Pratidhi meet their "other" grandparents every week. Randhir drops them off at the "Skype station" because they still live in New Delhi while the Shekhawat family resides in Chicago. Sanyukta never speaks to her father and brother, though she makes sure she speaks to her mother every now and then. On Skype, Nanu, Nani, Mamu and Mami shower all their love on the three musketeers, but never on the rest of the family. Nani speaks to Dadu, Dadi, Mumma and Papa, but without the knowledge of Nanu and Mamu.

The children don't understand the complexities of the "adult" world and Sanyukta and Randhir are glad they don't as they don't want them to grow up so fast. Because children are messages from God that He is not yet disappointed in us.

~Happies Endings~

Edited by PrussianBlue - 11 years ago

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Arushi Kotecha

@PrussianBlue

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#710

Originally posted by: kaveriw2008
what yaar i , so so so angry on you
tumne isse finish kun kiya

ab kya...me angry

i want more sandhir fight, care, love, understanding

where will i get it

Aww! You'll get more fighting from me, pakka! :D

Thank you SO much for reading and commenting! :D