ArHi FF|Mohabat Door Jaane Na De| #4, Last Part-pg.16 *Complete!*

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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#101

What an end to a beautiful tale.

Enjoyed this journey with you.

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mpuhan

@mpuhan

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#102

I was stuck from the very first chapter. You are an amazing writer👏
This story is one of my favourites ... the feelings of Arnav and Khushi has been penned down brilliantly by you. I have loved and enjoyed each chapter but I guess some moments like Khushi-Payal's conversation while Payal is combing khushi's hair, Khushi breaking down in front of Shashi and his soothing words to her, Arnav calling Khushi his firefly, their late night conversation where khushi wants to bear some of his burden, their holding hands while in the police station, Arnav-Anjali's talk and last but not the least the chapter on a starving Shyam ... they are memorable😊
I really hope you keep on writing!

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#103

Anjali is right.

Arnav has the weight of the family on his shoulders.

He has to learn to share.

And leave Anjali to bear some of her problems alone.

Sorry to see this lovely story come to an end.

I do hope you will write an epilogue soon.

Would love to see the three of them in happier times.

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Meena

@chotidesi

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#104

I haven't been reading this since the beginning. Heck, I only found this forum in November. But- this story. God, I fell in love with this story and your writing from the moment I read it. The way you interpreted the events was what I so desperately wanted the show to portray- a sense of redemption without making Arnav into a scapegoat for Khushi's anger, a reasonable Anjali, a Bauji that recovers and turns into an important catalyst, and a Shyaam that doesn't hide behind palm trees in the hopes that they will disguise him (I mean, come on! A palm tree?). You're such a beautiful, beautiful writer. I truly, ardently hope you continue to write, because I will be very disappointed if you don't. Congratulations!👏

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Archana

@Archu61

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#105

What a. Stupendous story .you shd give yourself a hi five as you brought to life a set of characters in all their individual perspectives and motives .looking fwd to your nxt story this fiction o f yours is one of my favorites .

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bmtdluver

@bmtdluver

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#106

Nice ending to MDJND. I'm glad Khushi and Arnav had that conversation to reflect upon their circumstances and their feelings toward them.

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Oliver.Queen

@Oliver.Queen

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#107

It was nice. PlzZz hav an epilogue. 😆

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mayurisb80

@mayurisb80

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#108

and Thank you for presenting such a lovely tale...

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...pinky...

@...pinky...

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#109

** This is a long review. But, I believe it's well-deserved. ⭐️

No, thank you!

You took us through fifty chapters of utter splendidness and a roller coaster of emotions. I loved how you've portrayed each of the characters of IPKKND in a manner that we expected from the series. Arnav finally put his Harvard brain to work, and showed his guilt over his treatment of the woman he loved. His love for Khushi and the ways he earned her forgiveness and her love were wonderfully portrayed. This is how Arnav's redemption should have occurred in the series. Thank you for showing us what should have been. Your Khushi showed the tenacity I was expecting from her. Her initial hopelessness and confusion, turned to hope, trust and unbreakable love was utterly brilliant. I even liked Anjali. Her helplessness at a first, then her determination to do the right thing was the Anjali Raizada I initially believed in.

My favourite scene to date is when Arnav gives the kaangans to Khushi and she finally reads the letter that his Maa wrote for her. What a potent scene. I could feel all the emotions pouring out of Khushi. Thank you so much for putting such an important part of Arnav's up bringing (his mother) into your story. It's too bad the series didn't include such a scene.

I've been reading this story from the beginning, reviewing and commenting on every chapter without fail. You've worked so hard to write this story, the least we can do is give a few words back on how we're loving it! You have not once let me down, and you completed this story beyond my expectations!

I've said it before, and I'll say it again, you are one of my favourite authors and this FF will be one of my top 5 Best Fanfiction Ever!

I would LOVE to see an epilogue for MDJND, for some closure - to see how everyone's faring, potential future babies, maybe? Ah hell, I'll admit, I'm addicted to this story. I know for a fact that I'll come back to it sometime in the near future and read all fifty chapters in one-go!

So, again, thank you for creating this masterpiece. I can't wait to see what FF you'll post up next.

PS: Will you be completing Series of Fortunate Events? I love that one too! 😊

Edited by khushiarnav88 - 11 years ago

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roseycheek

@roseycheek

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#110

I have been following this ff from the start and I admit have not commented each time but I have when I cud...its saddening that i just read last part of your captivating story...loved the last part of this ff too...closure and coming to term with the reality..love and life...it had everything tat one seek for in an awesome story..hope you start many more stories like this...