ArHi FF|Mohabat Door Jaane Na De| #4, Last Part-pg.16 *Complete!*

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Posted: 11 years ago

#111

Niece...will we have an epilogue

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Natasha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#112

awesome ending loved it amazing story thanks for the pm

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dumas

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Posted: 11 years ago

#113

COULD NOT FIND MY RES SO DOUBLE POSTING MY BAD

It had been tough- agonising at times, depressing at others, unbearable and unfair.

But look at what they had gained in return.

Trust. Faith. Loyalty. Honesty. Courage.

Love.

loved the ending beautifully done i loved the depth of the characters all their flaws and their insecurities all the hate their anger loved arna and anjali conversation loved the growing up of anajli in your ff she never really got that in the show loved khushi and arnav conversation the bond their guilt and then their joy at the ending of this storm name snake loved how the leaned into each other amazing update thanks for the pm.

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msmarple

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Posted: 11 years ago

#114

Wonderful story. Superb ending. Loved it.😃

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anonyasr

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Posted: 11 years ago

#115

Thank you for an amazing story.

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NikitaM11

@NikitaM11

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Posted: 11 years ago

#116

Loved the ending! It was so peaceful, so... right! They were all just winding down after a very long, and tiring day(s). I reallly hope there's an epilogue!! Just one more chapter ;)

Great way to end it, I am so glad that you decided to finish this story. The way you write.. so detailed, it's amazing. I can literally picture everything happening in my head like a film. You are an amazing writer, and I'm really glad I got the opportunity to read a work of yours.

Keep writing, you're amazing! <3

and thank you for this wonderful story :)

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purplelove

@purplelove

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#117

I want to start off by stating you are a wonderful and talented writer. I have enjoyed reading each and every update. I sincerely thank you for sharing your creativity with me.❤️

The circumstances they had all been trapped in had been tangled worse than a ball of yarn twisting itself up into knots, and the blame could not be handed over to a single person. There was no accusing Bauji of doing the wrong thing, because Khushi certainly did not know what the right thing was.

You truly unraveled the God awful mess the CVs left this IPKKND fan with. (Just my opinion on how the show ended) 👏

I look forward to an epilogue. 😊

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nisha_mehta

@nisha_mehta

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#118

Superb part. Too good
Why did u end it so soon.
May be u can write sequel
Fantastic story

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jojo21

@jojo21

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Posted: 11 years ago

#119

Oh I'm so sad...I love this one. This ending was perfect, I liked that it didn't have all of the answers or 'happy ending' it had a hopeful one. And I liked that. I liked that you had this Anjali just own up to the fact that she needs to deal with the aftermath and be strong and manage through EVERYTHING that happened.

You did give us some closure that Shyam is gone and this family has weathered a hell of a storm. Your ending like I said left me hopeful that no matter what the future holds Arnav and Khushi will weather them together, the family will stay strong (that includes the Guptas & Raizadas), and they are stronger.

Beautiful...

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Arshi67

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Posted: 11 years ago

#120

Thank you for giving us such lovely closure. And a big thank you to your friend for bullying you into posting that first chapter.

An epilogue would be great to see how Anjali forgives herself and learns to rely on herself and also how Arnav understands he can't change the world on his own...the last bit may take a tad longer 😊