ArHi FF|Mohabat Door Jaane Na De| #4, Last Part-pg.16 *Complete!* - Page 9

awesome update pleased their talking

Love this Anjali for her strength of character.

Awesome update! Waiting eagerly for the next part. Thanks a ton for a wonderful story!

Awesome!!! Loved it!!! 👏
Finally things are coming out before Anjali. Although, a bit sad to realise that MDJND is going to end soon.

Thanks for the PM. 😊

There is a lot in this chapter. Captures the essence of Arnav and Anjali's relationship beautifully.
Very well written.

Its good.that anjali and arnav are having this talk.
Hope that khushi will be able to survive this strom.
Continue soon

Oh my god Nafisa, your words are so beautiful. Just so beautiful. You're fantastic. Absolutely amazing. I wish I could write like you. Arnav and Anjali's pain was just so heartbreaking- and I'm so glad that instead of turning Anjali into a whiny woman who can't take that her brother is in love, you chose to have an understanding Anjali who points out the flaws to Arnav.

This has been one of my favorite ff mostly due to the way you describe each and every minute emotion, details, etc. . .it really pulls the reader into the story, as if I am a fly on the wall holding my breath as I don't want to interrupt. You described his helpless feelings perfectly and I felt sad to see this strong man so broken. But one always has to remember that all best intentions are sometimes derailed by factors outsides one's control and no matter how much we try to protect those we love, we are not god and cannot guarantee a bullet proof plan. I think in a way you also redeemed Anjali by portraying her as a strong woman who waited for the appropriate time to put that snake behind bars without causing any pain to Kushi. She is right that Arnav would have lashed out at Kushi if she had told him about Shyam earlier. This chapter was a great closure on the sibling bond that was the basis for Arnav and Kushi's marriage that lacked in the show. I am sad this is ending but all great things come to an end. I know you will completely blow us away with the final chapter.

this is how i would have ideally wanted it to play out in the IPK also